|| Care & Cure|| A Swasan OS - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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pls pm me for the next update i really liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yaa sure...pm will send by my frnd sree...rest will send by me lil late...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: soumi93

Tum logon se thora intezar nahi hota kya???ho jayega aj update... anywys love u all for liking my writtings...


nope we all are a bit impatient type people ...you know na waiting for swasan is difficult.😆...love you more🤗❤️
update soon😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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||Care & Cure|| Part- |||

Sanskar is walking alone in the streets...he gives a quick look at his watch its 12am now.He looks at the bottle in his hand and throws it in a bin and again starts walking.Its a deep dark winter night in Kolkata and all the people are currently roaming in their dreamland.Only he is still stuck in this cruel real world awake.The night sky and the starts and a small amount of fog give him their company and he is somehow enjoying their silence.Its been a while he is walking bt suddenly he thought someone called his name.He looked here and there...bt finds no one.He again starts walking bt somehow he feels that something is attracting him from back.Someone is calling him and remebering him terribly.He thought as he is drunk so he is thinking about such things.Who will call him??? who is supposed to do that not even wave a goodbye to him when he is leaving badi???the sudden thought of swara makes his heart heavy that he finds it difficult to stand and tears rolled in his eyes.He feels a strong feeling of calls upp swara...he wants to ignore this as its deep night already and she must be sleeping nt his heart is nt ready to listen to all this and desperately wants to hear her voice once.Unknowingly he puts his hand in pocket to search for his cell...but shocked to realise that it was nt there.he madly starts searching for it in his other pockets too bt no avail.Suddenly the craving and creeping to talk to her is increased in his mind and he asked himself "why i am feeling restless all of a sudden???Is she ok???"
He turned back and starts running for his car...may be he left his phone in car...he thought to check all by himself on swara by entering into badi bt he dropped the idea.He was drunk and going there in such a state will take no time for swara to understand the whole thing.He hates drinking bt still he did.She will understand the reason easily he knows and he dnt her to feels bad or guilty for behaving rude to him.
He reached to his car and started breathing heavily. He opened the driver side door to check there bt he cant find it.Night is getting more darker with each passing second and in this darkness he rarely see anything clearly...The roadside light is helping him to find the switch of his car headlight and he switches it on...Suddenly he noticed someone is sitting in the middle of the road.He stared there and somehow manages to understand that its a girl...the whole attire of that girl gives him an idea about who she can be???but this gives him a pang in his heart and he refuses to believe that.He stepped down from his car and slowly goes towards her and keeps his hand on her shoulder.
Swara is shocked and threatened by the sudden touch occurs in her body...she feels scared to look back but gathering all her courage she looks back slowly...
"Swara"...he said shockingly and sits on his knees besides her.She couldn't believe in her eyes at first...all this time she was looking for him only and all of a sudden he came there.she was out of words and just keep gazing at him with a pale face.He cups her face out of concern and wipes her tears.
Swara now comes to sense by his genuine touch on her cheeks...Yes he is here!!he is fine...he is infront of her eyes..She calls out his name and hugged him and immediately breaks the hug and started beating him in chest haphazardly and cried out "why did you do this to me??where did you go haan???u cant even imagine what kind of worst thinking was bothering me all the time!!!how can u be so careless???I hate you hate you so much!!!I hate yoh" Sanskar catch her hands and hugs her in his tight embrace to console. "ssshhh!!!!dnt wrry,i am alright see...nthing happened to me, don't cry please i cant see you like this"...He cupped her face again and gives a peck on forehead.She cried again and hugged him tightly to feel the bliss and close her eyes. Sanskar hugs her back and kisses on her head partition to make her feel safe and secure in his arms and how much he treasures her.
After sometime they break the hug and Swara makes a puppy face and with teary eyes he looked into sanskar's eyes.Sanskar heart pained to see her like this.He looks sadly at her and keeps his palm on her cheek.
Tear rolled down from her eyes bt he holds the tear drop in his finger and keeps it in his feast.He looks at her and says,"Princess do u know how much precious gem it is??you shouldn't waist it btter keep it,"saying this he keeps his feast on his heart and claims 'I'll keep it till my last breath" and smiles.
TO BE CONTINUED
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Nice update Soumi. 😛
Khub bhalo laaglo 😊
Aamar galpo ta update karechi 😃
Looking forward to the next update 😳
Commenting first 😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Princess do u know how much precious gem it is??you shouldn't waist it btter keep it,"saying this he keeps his feast on his heart and claims 'I'll keep it till my last breath" and smiles...
this line is wonderfull soumi...👏really iam totally completely sppecheless after reading this...oh god...!that hug its really wow...!swara didnt got smile of daaru...that much madly she is worrying abt him...and sanskar...awww...!he is just...how much he loves her and cares her...very nice update next part soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
@apu will read ur story tomorrow...as of now i'm lil bit disturbed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

"Princess do u know how much precious gem it is??you shouldn't waist it btter keep it,"saying this he keeps his feast on his heart and claims 'I'll keep it till my last breath" and smiles...

this line is wonderfull soumi...👏really iam totally completely sppecheless after reading this...oh god...!that hug its really wow...!swara didnt got smile of daaru...that much madly she is worrying abt him...and sanskar...awww...!he is just...how much he loves her and cares her...very nice update next part soon...


Thnx tappu...that line accidently comes to my mind so i put it up...will update the last part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: soumi93

@apu will read ur story tomorrow...as of now i'm lil bit disturbed.

ooho...!relax soumi what ever thing disturbed you...leave it...be happy always...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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dear soumi awesome update i loved it girl

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