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Posted: 9 years ago
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[Scared,Shocked And Tensed Swara Asks One Of Sanskar's Colleague About Sanskars Current Location,But He Says That:Swara Ma'am You Are Here But In Morning When Sanskar Sir Was In An Urgent Meeting Regarding Today's Case Then Uttara Came Running To The Cabin And Said That You Have Urgently Called Him To Meet At Kaali Pahari's Cliff After That They Both Went There To Meet You]

[Swara Rushes Towards Kaali Pahari]

SCENE:6
Location At Kaali Pahari:


[Sanskar And Uttara Reaches At Kaali Pahari,Sanskar Gets Down From The Car And Shouts Loudly Swara, Swara,Swara Were Are You Suddenly From Behind A Loud Laughing Sound Comes Sanskar Turns Back And Is Shocked]

[Its Uttara Who Is Laughing Loudly In A Male Voice,He Takes His Wigs Out And Reveals That There Is No Person Named Uttara It Was All Along Him Acting As Uttara,He Is Non Other Than Uttkarsh Brother Of Laksh Who Had Committed Suicide In Jail Because Of Sanskar's Stubbornness Of Conveying Justice Towards His Profession]

Uttkarsh:You Stubborn Man 1 Year Ago You Rejected My Offer When I Tried To Bribe You. If You Had Excepted My Offer Back Then ,Unfortunately Today I Would Have Never Trapped You,To Kill You Sanskar Maheshwari.(Laughs HaaaHaaahhaaa)

Sanskar:You Are Mentally Sick Uttkarsh Your Brother Laksh Was A Psycho Killer And I Guess Your Mental Condition Is Also Similar As Your Brother

Uttkarsh:Just Shut Your Mouth, At That Night Of Dushera When I Left You And Your Wife Alone In Cabin I Was Busy Fixing A Micro Bomb In Your Loving Wife's Bag,If Today You Don't Kill Yourself With This Knife Then I Will Kill Swara

[Sanskar Shouts Taking Uttkarsh's Name And Says I Will Cut You In Piece If Any Thing Happens To Swara]

SCENE:7
Swara In Car:


[Swara Has A Flashback Of One Incident,Swara Loves To Hear Sad Songs,One Day She Was Listening To The Song"Hamari Adhuri Kahani"Sanskar Became Irritated And Said To Her That Please Swara Don't Listen To All This Songs You Know Na I Don't Like Sad Songs Or Tragic Endings Then Swara Promised Him That She Will Never Listen To Sad Songs At least Not In front Of Him And Laughs-Flashback Ends]

[Swara Cry's And Says To Herself That Don't Worry Sanskar Ending Of Our Love Story Won't Be Tragic I Am Coming To Save You From Uttkarsh]

SCENE:8
Location Kaali Pahari:


[Swara Reaches At Kaali Pahari And Finds Sanskar Standing There All Alone,She Calls Sanskar,And Runs Towards Him,She Gives Him A Back Hug And Says]

Swara:Thank God Sanskar You Are Safe Nothing Happened Wrong With You,I Love You Sanskar,I Love You

[Suddenly Swara Feels Something Wet In Her Hand When She Looks At Her Hand She Becomes Shocked And Paled To See Blood In Her Hand,When She Turns Sanskar Towards Her,She See Knife Stabbed In His Chest,And Sanskar's Body Is Almost Lifeless]

Sanskar:Ssswara I Love You Too

[Sanskar Holds Swara's Hand And Dies Right There]

[Swara Starts Screaming And Takes Sanskar's Name,She Ask Him To Get Up And Finish This Joke Please Sanskar Get Up,Swara Cries And Faints On Sanskar's Dead Body.

Sache Pyar Ki Adhuri Si Yeh Kahani...
Edited by Fariiiii - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Loved the update farii. Emotional I loved sanskar's talk at her home and then she came to knw the truth of her baba n her satyajeet uncle. When she went to went sanskar at kaali pahari she confessed her love and shocked to see sanskar. Very emotional 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: gayu6

Loved the update farii. Emotional I loved sanskar's talk at her home and then she came to knw the truth of her baba n her satyajeet uncle. When she went to went sanskar at kaali pahari she confessed her love and shocked to see sanskar. Very emotional😭

Thanks For Commenting I Am Glad That You Liked The Final Part 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
grrrt fariii kichu blbona jaaa...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Fariii... 🤗 you are too bad you made meme cry... 😭 I'm crying badly...

How can you kill my Sanskaar baby... 😭

Okay apart from joke emotionally nailed it re...

I thoroughly enjoyed it... That home meeting dialogues BTW Swasan were awesome... 👏

Simply loved it...

Love you sissy...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was really a painful ending of the story.
You gave the apt title for the story.
You beautifully portrayed the selfless love of sanskar's.
He sacrifice his life for swara.
The mystery behind the villain was a surprise.

Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: soumi93

grrrt fariii kichu blbona jaaa...

Sorry Ami Ki Kortam Title Tar Shathe Justice Korte Giye Ending Tragic Korar Jonno SwaSan Ke allada Korte Holo,Ami Nije Onek Kosto Peyechilam Ending Ta Likhar Shomoy 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Fariii... 🤗 you are too bad you made meme cry... 😭 I'm crying badly...

How can you kill my Sanskaar baby... 😭

Okay apart from joke emotionally nailed it re...

I thoroughly enjoyed it... That home meeting dialogues BTW Swasan were awesome... 👏

Simply loved it...

Love you sissy...

Kamila 🤗 Glad That You Liked It
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

It was really a painful ending of the story.

You gave the apt title for the story.
You beautifully portrayed the selfless love of sanskar's.
He sacrifice his life for swara.
The mystery behind the villain was a surprise.


Hi I Am Happy That You Liked My Writting 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Fari , my sis you have written an awesome update 😊
Khub sundor hayechhe shona 😳
Love you.

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