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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: soumi93

fariii...i will kill you...i cant bear pain anymore...pls give it a happy ending dnt be like cvs...u wrote the boundings of them beautifully...i loved it and cried too...bt dnt do that...i cant see my babies in pain...

Hi Soumi Glad That You liked It.Will Update The Final Part Soon.
After Watching SNS For Last 5years And SwaRagini From Almost 1 Year I Think Cv's Sadistic Thinking Has Started To Effect My Thinking When Ever I Try To Write Something Unknowingly It Becomes Tragic Excessive Effect Of RS's Melodramatic Shows On Me I Guess
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey yaa... Fariii... 🤗 sister of my friend is my sister too...

Awesome updates... His loyalty stopping him... Her love for her father stopping her... Wow..

So you planned for emotional sensitive.. Story.. With drastic end.. Awww... 😲

Nicely written... Emotional part was awesome...

Waiting for.more please let me know... About upload of your updates..

Love yaa...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Hey yaa... Fariii... 🤗 sister of my friend is my sister too...

Awesome updates... His loyalty stopping him... Her love for her father stopping her... Wow..

So you planned for emotional sensitive.. Story.. With drastic end.. Awww... 😲

Nicely written... Emotional part was awesome...

Waiting for.more please let me know... About upload of your updates..

Love yaa...

Hi Sis 🤗 I Will Soon Post The Final Part Of This Story.Will Surely PM You
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...loveky start to a difficult love story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: raaz19

Nice update...loveky start to a difficult love story...

Thanks For Commenting I Will Soon Update The Final Part Of The Story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved bboth the parts. So she left because he was working urder her enemy. So she left him. Is it really satyajeet the reason for her father's death. I tnk no and she s misunderstanding something. Hope someday she ll come to knw the truth and she ll cum back to her love. Continue soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gayu6

Loved bboth the parts. So she left because he was working urder her enemy. So she left him. Is it really satyajeet the reason for her father's death. I tnk no and she s misunderstanding something. Hope someday she ll come to knw the truth and she ll cum back to her love. Continue soon😃

Hi Thanks For Commenting I Will Soon Post The Final Part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART:2

SCENE:3
Next Night Just Before The 4th Day At Swara's Room:


[It's A Stormy Night,Wind Blows Extremely Swara Is Feeling Very Restless While Drinking Water She Sits Beside Her Window,Rain Drops Are Falling In Her Face]

[Swara Sitting Beside Her Window Lost In Thoughts Of Sanskar Constantly Thinks Of All The Beautiful Memories They Had Together,How They Met,How Fell In Love With Each Other,How He Proposed Her For Marriage By Surprisingly Taking Her To An Island Far Away From The City Only They Both Were There, Sanskar Had Decorated Whole Area With Flowers And Lights,They Spend Their Whole Evening There And Flown Lanterns In The Dark Black Sky All Those Were Looking Incredible While They Were Sitting Holding Each Others Hands In A Beautifully Decorated Boat,Then She Remembers Their Marriage,How They Had Spend 4Beautiful Years With Each Other But Suddenly She Remembers How For Sanskar She Always Comes Second In His Priority List,How For Him To Be Faithful Towards His Boss Is More Important Then To Be With His Love,His Wife,His Swara. Swara Becomes Angry And Breaks The Glass In Her Hand Which Hurts And Cuts Her Hand,Swara Silently Washes Her Wounds,Weeps Her Tears,And Goes To Sleep]

[Late Night Swara Sleeping But Again Feeling Restless And Uncomfortable As If Someone Is Constantly Starring Her, She Wakes Up And Sees Someone Is Really Standing Beside Her Window.Swara Gets Scared And Switches The Lights On Gets Shocked To See Sanskar Standing In Front Of Her In A Extremely Drenched Condition]

Sanskar:Don't Get Scare Of Me Swara It's Me Sanskar

Swara:It's Almost 3.00A.M At This Hour What Are You Doing In My Room???What Is The Reason Of Your This Sudden Visit????

Sanskar:I Am Telling You The Reason Don't Worry I Won't Come Near You Will Explain From Standing Here Only. Sorry Again For Disturbing You But I Didn't Came Here To Wake You,I Just Wanted To See You For The Last Time Tomorrow If I Didn't Get Chance To See You This Thought Was Killing Me From Inside So Couldn't Stop My Self To Visit You.
[Swara Gets Up From Her Bed, Goes Near Sanskar And Says]

Swara:Why You Don't Want To Come Near Me Are You Afraid That If You Come Close To Me Then You Will Become Weak In Your Decision Of Staying Away From My Life,Because I Am Not Afraid At All When I Come Close To You Because I Am Rock Solid On My Decision But I Think You Are Not???

Sanskar:I Know Very Well That You Are Not Afraid,But I Am Afraid,Yes I Admit Am A Coward,I Have Finally Recognised Myself,Now Won't Show Fake Proudness Of My Bravery,That's Why Won't Come Near You

Swara:After Finishing What Ever You Want To Say Will You Leave????

Sanskar:As Soon As Possible I Will Leave Swara

Swara:I Thought You Came Back To Me But No You Came Here Just To Share Some Of Your Stupid Thought Great Then Say Whatever You Want To Say And Leave

Sanskar:I Want To Say Sorry To You For My Behaviour To You Yesterday,I Have Today Understood You,Your Goodness,Your Love For Your Father,Every Feelings Of Yours,I Have Also Understand Myself Also, Trust Me Swara Today I Have No Hard-feelings For You In My Heart,I Am Feeling Relived Today

Swara:If Your Baseless Talks Are Over Then Thank You So Much For Understanding Me Today I Am Glad But Now Can You Please Leave

Sanskar:At First I Thought Not To Visit You,But Then Suddenly One Thought Scared Me That If Tomorrow By Any Chance I Die Before Reaching Court.Then At That Time When Death Will Surround Me And I Will Try To Open My Eyes Only To See Your Face But Blood Splashes Will Not Let Me To Do So,Then My Soul Will Never Get Peace Ever

Swara:You Are A Cruel,Heartless Man Sanskar,You Are So Casually Discussing About Your Death With Me,Are You Mentally Okay,Or Have Already Gone Mad,She Cry's And Says,You Know How Much I Love You Sanskar,Then Why Suddenly You are Speaking About Your Death,It Doesn't Matter To Me That Whether We Will Live Together Or Separated What Ever The Situation Comes I Will Always Pray For Your Long And Prosperous Life Ahead Sanskar
[Sanskar Just Silently Keeps Looking At Swara,With A Loving Sweet Smile]

Sanskar:I Am Very Glad That I Have Seen You Today,Tomorrow If I Die Also There Will Be No Regret In My Heart,Today In Your Tears I Have Found The Same Old Love And Care From You For Me. This Picture Of Yours Which I Have Captured Today In My Eyes Is Enough For Me To Face Any Thing Tomorrow Whether It's A Problem Or Even Death Also .Bye Swara Please Always Keep Smiling ,I Love You A lot.

[Sanskar Kisses Swara On Forehead And Goes From The Window Leaving Shocked Swara]

PART:2

SCENE:4
4th Day Early Morning Swara's House:


[Swara Prays To Kanhaji To Show Her The Correct Path Suddenly One Very Old Photo Frame Of Her Father Drops From Wall And Breaks Swara Runs To Pick It Up And Finds A Letter Of Her Father For Her She Starts To Read It]

Shekhar:Swara Beta I Know I Have Hurt You A lot,I Know That You Hate Me For What Ever I Did With Your Mom Sharmishtha But I Was Helpless I Misunderstood Her And Doubted Her Loyalty Towards Me,In Such A Weak Moment I Picked A Vase And Thrown It On Her Head, She Died On Spot On My Hand,In This Whole Situation Only Your SatyaJeet Mama Was The Eye Witness,He Couldn't Forgive Me For My Sins So He Made Sure That I Get Maximum Punishment,I Am Sure That He Had Surely Told You About My Deed And After Hearing All This Please Don't Hate Me Beta"I Am Extremely Sorry For Everything Beta"

[Swara Shocked Drops The Letter From Her Hand,And Runs To Meet Sanskar]

SCENE:5
Outside Sanskar's Office:


[Swara Reaches Sanskar's Office And Meets With Her SatyaJeet Mama]

[SatyaJeet Tells Swara That For Sanskar She Was Always His 1st Priority When He First Got To Know The Secret About Shekhar,Then He Requested Me To Hide It From You Because He Knew That You Love Your Father Very Much he didn't Want To Destroy Shekhars Image In Your Eyes]

[Swara Runs Inside The Office To Meet Sanskar But His Cabin Is Empty,She Thinks To Meet Sanskar Directly At Court And Thinks To Take Help Of Uttara So She Goes To Uttara's Cabin But,Her Cabin Is Also Empty,Swara Thinks To Wait For Sometimes But Becomes Shocked To See Something In That Cabin]
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