DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF- T2- DELETED- AN- PG 1 - Page 55

Finally I completed reading the trio of chapters 12 13 and 14...felt i was transported into that era and watching that entire series of events from the Samkalgoonj visit to the bandit raid to the ride back home and Swara's tending of Sanskaar's wounds and their adorable exchanges in chapters 13 and 14 ... Sigh ...I'm so lost!!

I just love this Sanskaar...who has fallen irrevocably in love with the beautiful innocent and adorable Swara and the violence of his feelings...yet how he must hide it at all times coz he feels incredibly unworthy of her...she is way too good for him but the best part is ... At all times she feels tht she has wronged him in her assessment of his character and tht he is the epitome of everything that is good and heroic in this world and unknowingly and unwillingly she has fallen deeply too ...only she is a naive innocent woman who can't recognize what she feels and more than that it's her upbringing and the general idea of expected decorum around unrelated males that is stopping her from acknowledging her true feelings.

The entire scene of her tending to his wounds and being so affected by them was so tender and poignant...I was wondering tht Sanskaar did not give in to his feelings there and then...

And how he loves to tease her even though he is the one who has lost his heart to her and doesn't want to follow up on it

Coming to the Mahesh Mahal scene...don't wanna say anything about Ragini...frankly even her slight concern for Swara doesn't do anything for me to come even close to her redemption especially since she is enjoying her marital life with Lakshya so much

Hmm the Kaveri scene...so Rana ji was involved with her in his youth..?? But what a way to bring it out in the open ...right in front of the gadodias...but I guess Annapurna had no choice and also knws tht it won't go further in any case...Janki seemed the only person to have taken that news stoically...mayb coz of her deeply ingrained marvadi upbringing or because she has seen her own husband deflect from his marriage too...

So Sanskaar had opened his heart fully to Swara and now can't wait for him to confess his love to her coz there is no going back for him now

Where will they go now from the Haveli?? Looks like a lot of action coming up now!!

Thanks for all the pms dear! Lots of love
Tas

Shruti dear 🤗

Sorry for being late..😊 And I am going to post my comments for the last 3 parts 12 13 and 14..😳

I really loved each and every scene..Sanskaar took Swara to the ruins..Even if he had visted the place before, he felt a fresh feeling when he saw the ruins through Swara's eyes and expressions..

And the fight they had later was also written well..But I was really frightened when those group of bad men came to the scene..I had full faith in Sanskaar, but still..But anyways, thanks to Swara..she took him back with the help of Veer..It takes a lot of courage ..👏 Hats off to her

And then the way she took care of him was great..She even stitched his wounds..This girl is a masterpiece..What more could a brave warrior like Sanskaar wish for..She is truly a worthy life partner to him..😳

But I wanted to ask you one thing, Shru..Were you trying to imply that Swasan were Samarjit and Kalyani in their previous birth..The way he could feel Samarjit's pain was, beautifully written..Or is it just like a mere dream, the result of his fear of losing Swara at that ruins, because he thought that man had abducted her or killed her..Please clear my doubt😛 Its killing me actually..😆 I am a real fan of re birth walaa stories..

The most cute thing was that Sanskaar could feel Swara while she talked to him, her tear drop, her kisses and all

And the way he teased her a lot because of that was too good..I enjoyed Swara's shyness and embarrassment 😆 just like him..😉

Veer's way of showing his love to Swara was awww..😳😳😳 I love Veer a lot..His bond with Sanskaar is too good..!!😃😃

Love
Naina😳

Originally posted by: bones123

reserving...but muaaah for 14...

*Updated*

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Given that I knew this chapter was to be SwaSan centric, I was already chuffed on the prospect of reading it, but how you wrote it and everything that you covered blew it right out of the park !!

Sanskaar's misgivings wrt Swara's reaction to his emotions shows us that needs to move further down that journey of forgiving himself. He still feels he doesn't deserve her actions, her words (even though they worked towards healing him as you've mentioned later on)...poor thing...he's so afraid making that move and it's playing havoc within his mind. Even though in my head i going nooo she's done all but say it, come on Sanskaar, I think I do understand it. He believes separation is imminent (okay he has to staaap saying that) and doesn't want to cause further grief !! This two schools of thought was beautifully brought out in this part Shruuu...and it does totally go with the royal being you've portrayed Sanskaar to be. A prince will think of holistic good before pleasing self...*even if that means going away from his love...wailll*

Swara running into Sanskaar's room her fear and concern for him overpowering any other sense of impropriety is just so cute !! And hahaahhahahaha at running into bare chested Sanskaar is treat indeed *for her and us :P*

I think the fact that each underplays their own discomfort and pain because of the concern for the other makes their bond so special to read about. Only the deepest feelings would elicit emotions like these ! Swara is super special in this, she doesn't want to let him out of her sight...i was smiling broadly when she instructs him to sit and not move while she comes back !!

Loved that Sanskaar threw caution to the wind, and decided to give his misgivings a rest for the day and decided to enjoy the day with Swara...and boy does that dchange does him good or what. I love this fun loving, teasing, bantering Sanskaar...he is truly in his element...

hurrray for dispensing with titles...Swara and Sanskaar work the best...or another endearment (*honestly i don't like it being used as an endearment on the show, it seems slightly forced..runs away before I get clubbed*)

His presence is sending her into a tizzy and while initially he's letting her be all clinical as you put it, I think he finds it far more amusing to needle her about it. Given that he's not had someone he can extend such liberties with for a very long time, he must treasure it all the more !

Dabbing cream/lotion on her wounds...total *thud* worthy...GM..that's what you said the other day na...yes I'm along that route !! ☺️☺️

This next part where he lightly lets her know he heard it all and thanks her for everything she did was done sooo well...They could have had an angsty/sentimental conversation but that would have just probably made her tear up more. Kudos Shru for dealing with this in this manner but still making sure he says everything he wants to say. I loved that you made her say she believed in him when they were both conscious and face to face !! He needs that from her...that sense of peace...

His impish behaviour is adorable, and I can imagine the laughter in my head...that rumbles from a heartfelt reaction to catching her out on that act of the kiss !

Finallly Veer ki yaad aayi :) He had equal parts in saving them and getting them home safe...and sooo happpy that he's giving Swara his blessing :P Sanskaar you really don't need more signs that you can make a move as well ;)

Him assuaging her guilt about the necessary kill was masterfully done...I can't say much more about this part coherently !! His patient words and his actions (even when she's sending misdirected anger his way) made me want to hug him *till i reminded myself he's fictional :P*

AAA Precious to Him...say it more and she will seriously never leave you !!!

So she finally knows its Sanskaar's house, I loved the little touches of Sujata's presence...his choti maa...question...who is cherubic baby you mention ? *have i missed noticing uttara's presence in your story...sorrryy***

When he voices the need for normalcy you can hear i,e read) the anger and the plea in his voice at the same time...and thank god for small mercies that she gives in. She's equally confused and thinking about when they have to leave and part from this haven they've created...I can feel for her...and was going on the completely wrong line of thought regarding his actions...but phew that it got sorted out...

Sharing of his past...So proud of him doing that...i think that was something I've been pestering you about since forever :P When will Sanskaar shed all inhibitions and let her in on his dark past...and he does it...wohooo...thank youuu !!!!

Swara does so well to reign in her hurt...she is innocent and she is naive, but she understands the nature of his relationship with Kavita...Loved that she gave more importance to his feelings of loss than throw any jealous reaction in his face...and Sanskaar...he's still in disbelief that this angel...this pure soul sees the best in him !!!

That last kiss ❤️❤️ It encompassed all the words they shared through out the day...in that one simple action...A sleeping princess, being thanked by her prince for being his saviour...*i've melted and in a puddle right now*

What a mindblowing chapter Shruuu...!!! Simply fabulous...Both S&S are absolute darlings and I enjoyed reading this so much !!

Swara has still not voiced her feelings to herself...and while I think she's feeling everything that a person in love does, she still has to recognize it to be that emotion !! That deeprooted thing that consumes you in the best possible way...

pappiiieess...jhapppies and everything in between for you...I will not trouble you with requests for 15 because i do think you need some rest :P So will not say anything about that except ask that how many more do you plan ? *selfish iraade you see*

Originally posted by: NitaReid

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Hi Shruti...

I have to say Chapter 14 has to be my favourite so far...I dont know why but i loved this chapter a lot.. Maybe because this chapter cleared almost all of the MU between Swasan. Eventhough i know Swara trust Sanskar completely. It is stil a relief to know that she knows the entire story.

I loved Sanskar trying to control his emotions in fear of her reactions, Loved there concern for each other and most importantly instead of just keep it a secret, i absolutely loved that Sanskar let Swara know he heard her ramblings of last night. I didnt see that coming . So was pleasantly surprised. Even if he broke it to her slowly he did say it to her... The whole event including her reactions to his scarred back..Swara was mortified , i would have been too if i was in her place... Glad that they are back to normal after the initial awkwardness in there mutual adoration of Veer .

Swara first kill ofcourse it haunts her and i loved that it paved way for Swara to know Sanskar didnt kill her father loyal guard. And Sanskar didnt want her to know that soldiers do kill innocents becuase he doesnt want to take away her new found happiness .. So finally let Swara in the locked room , just like how he is slowly letting her in to all parts of his life..

The next part was my favourite one, where they both decide to forget there problems and spend one day with each other , Has Prince Sanskar and Mermaid Princess Swara . Finally Sanskar let Swara completely in his life by revealing the one thing he never wanted to share with anyone. And i absolutely love that this two choose to sleep not in there room but beside each other ... Do continue soon Shruti ... Cant wait to read the next chapter

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Part UnRes - Rushed through the chapter

I had come to office early because I have a hectic day ahead and your updated chapter is not going to make it any easier. 😭

Will completely UnRes later.

UnRes'ing now😊

Eternity is a moment with you - but the moments you have written will be with us for an eternity.👏👏

Loved the beginning - gives me a vivid imagery of the sun, personified in all his glory, deliberately having dimmed his rays, tiptoeing around them, wondering whether to wake them up or let them slumber still.

Sanskaar wakes up with hazy memories of the ride back home but not of Swara's words when she was ministering him. He was initially hesitant to voice his gratitude, but I guess having seen her concern for him seemed to make his reservations vanish. Amorous reflexes indeed😉 - I simply loved this - too bad Sanskaar managed to control them, though not completely.

How could he resist the god sent opportunity, though in hindsight, not very advisable - for in applying the balm to her cuts, he was simply burning himself further. Then he starts recounting all that Swara said, presuming him to be completely unconscious and proceeds to laugh at her utter mortification.😆

And when Swara realised she had killed a man, she initially simply overrides Sanskaar's attempts to calm her by saying that he would not feel anything as he is used to killing innocent people too. When he clarifies that he had not killed the guard at the palace but had merely stunned him, she swings to the other extreme of being overjoyed that Sanskaar is not capable of killing innocent people, her own reproaches for her act being completely forgotten. No wonder Sanskaar feels she is naive (but in this case, it was relief at Sanskaar not being able to shed innocent blood and that begs the question - who killed that guard )

So Veer bonds with Swara and when she says that maybe Veer would carry her away, Sanskaar says " I wouldn't bet on it Nymph. He would never take away anything that was precious to me. Besides which I remember a promise made to me yesterday by a warrior Princess that she wouldn't leave me."

For a guy who was reluctant to even show his slightest emotions, this is quite a statement. Maybe as he thinks later, he would take this day as an unexpected blessing.

So Sanskaar truly lets down his walls - he must have, to recount his past. She is moved to tears at hearing his account of Lakshya's betrayal and is slightly resentful (???) of his love for Kavita, (that my dear Swara, is love - I hope she awakens to this fact soon)

The ending was sublime - Sanskaar places a gentle kiss on her forehead, thanking her - his angel - for healing him. This time, Swara feels the touch of her angel. As it is said "We are each of us, angels with only one wing and we can only fly by embracing one another" Luciano de Cresenzo

Looking forward for them to soar!

Love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nita dear 🤗

Wow- 14 is your fave to date?! Yayyy!! Yes you are right- 14 was about a lot of barriers coming down and there now being no lies between them. The road for love is clear if it were not for external factors and depending on if/ how they affect them. But I only wanted them to face those w/out misunderstanding each other, save the MU Swara still has of course about Sanskaar's love being ONLY Kavita.

You were surprised that Sanskaar not only accepted and liked what he had heard but actually teased so much about it huh?! 😉 And yes, he did say a lot to her, regardless of her being too innocent to get the full import of what he was communicating. Poor Swara - she wanted the ground to swallow her up 😆.

The loyal guard was standing between them- the last hurdle to her believing him the larger than life hero he is so I had to make him go. Yes!! indeed- great observation that the locked room was a metaphor for his locked heart which now lies open and she has very firmly stepped through too. I just wanted them to forget everything for a short time and savour each other without constantly fearing or stressing about external events and am glad it came across well. Ah, I love the idea that they don't want to sleep apart and cannot be parted even for those hours and yet their sleeping arrangements are so respectful and chaste 😳.

Hopefully you will like 15 when it is done!

Lots of thanks and love xoxo

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Yippe we gt it before weekend let me dance thanks for the pm 😊Aww it was sooo very cute😃 those teasings, romantic moments , their endless chatter was so perfect super👏 enjoyed a lot

Sanskar I knew it he is gonna tease her about that kiss swara first thought he was being delirious butterfly seriously😆😆 bt I was smirking n grinning n thinking let him complete his words u will get to knw exactly hw much delirious he was being 😉 n then when swara undrstood her reaction 🤣🤣 poor swara she blushed so much n just ran away🤣🤣 could it be anymore cute😳 it was just awesome

Amazing update enjoyed a lot

Originally posted by: foresight

loved this part. it has teasing, intensity, new romantic emotions being realised...and amazing depth of emotions to a different intensity. it was a touching update. so the haveli was his. liked how he showed her even more trust and opened up about what happened...sharing his pain with her...and swara for her part felt unhappy about the fact that he has a more intimate relationship with kavita. it was a beautiful update and i don't think i can make justice to it with my comments today. it was fabulous.

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Shru,
A complete SwaSan filled chapter! Finally these two have come to an understanding and acceptance of each other and their circumstances. This update ended with such an amazing note of contentment despite the oddly complicated situation both are in - one labelled a traitor and the other disowned due to no fault hers.
I really enjoyed this golden chapter. Sanskaar has realised his growing love for Swara and also realised that a future between them is impossible. She will however always remain a very if not most special person in his life. Swara is still oblivious to these emotions or rather selectively oblivious? The morning awkwardness was damn hilarious and it was completed with the Sanskaar teasing Swara. It brought a smile to my face.
Can I say that apart from SwaSan I am absolutely loving Veer! His portrayal is really ingenious! :)
When Swara went all 'He likes me' I scrolled up and down twice to make sure she was talking about Veer and not Sanskaar. Haha. The master likes then the horse obviously will no? ;)
What a perfect normal day! I really liked that you put in this aspect. It was really a heart warming part. They shared so much about each other. And Sanskaar finally found someone to trust implicitly with his personal life.
They are going to commence the next part of their journey now aren't they? Leaving Ehsaas Nagar. Come to think of it, the name of the place just says it all no?
Shru you are doing some amazing, intense, enthralling, captivating, fabulous and fantastic work with this fanfiction. Hats off!

Keep writing. Awaiting Chapter 15! :)

-V ❤️

Shruti, my friend