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Posted: 9 years ago

#531

I will write something coherent later. Right now I am busy mooning

I am running off to read the chapter again and again and again...

love 🤗

Geet

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: geetkumar
I will write something coherent later. Right now I am busy mooning
I am running off to read the chapter again and again and again...
love 🤗
Geet

Ahhh Geet! That makes me so happy I tell you! Thank you so much! Xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Res 😳

Unreserved:

Chapter 14:

☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I would have left it at that really! This comment is gonna be short because you already EXACTLY what I feel about each & every scene & somehow WA emos convey it better than IF ones & I do need emos for this one. Words are insufficient😆

The quote sets the mood for this one perfectly. They only have this day for no one knows what tomorrow might bring.

Though his wounds are fresh Sanskaar is now drawing strength from his healed soul, the soul which she helped heal unknowingly😳

The Prince certainly isn't shy😆 😆 Another man might have worn that tunic he was holding, this one throws it off😆 😆

Sanskaar applying that cream to her lip was ☺️

Sanskaar & all that teasing 🤣 Swara would have wanted the earth to open up & swallow her whole 🤣 She is such a sweet, innocent soul really. Is it any wonder that she has bewitched him.

Oh so finally someone thinks of my horsie👏 Thank God! He is so happy to see Sanskaar safe & sound & equally happy to see Swara😳

Fir se jhagda? 😲🤔 But chalo they patched up quickly. Finally Sanskaar tells her everything. Swara is such a good person to not think bad about Kavita. Instead of giving in to the jealousy she is obviously feeling she dwells on the depth of their relationship & the extent of his love for Kavita. Very few people can manage that.

They have never slept apart ever since they came to this Haveli now, have they?😆

I think Swara is as much in love as Sanskaar, its just that she is too young & too inexperienced to put a name to her emotions. Also, the situation she is in right now isnt really conducive to too very romantic thoughts but even in it she seems to be having some pretty good ones😉 She isn't confused about her feelings, she is unaware because she hasn't felt anything like this before.

Lanny dearest 🤗

I so so loved seeing those emojis and haha, yes the WA emos do work so much better no?! And also I don't have words to convey my pleasure at the comments really!!! 😆

Yayyy you like the quote- it was short and to the point here no? Their tomorrow as you say could bring anything in my already majorly volatile journey on all fronts! Yes, Sanskaar is able to almost shrug off his physical injuries as his soul got such a boost from what Swara said to him and did for him :).

And no!!! This Sanskaar isn't the shy type and also is a bit asanskaari as those are the sort of men I like and I think Sanskaar has that side to him, combined with the restraint he will show out of love and reverence which I think is so sexy 😳. And once he saw the reactions being shirtless was inspiring he "forgot" about the shirt for ages. Sanskaar bana Salman 😆

I was blushing writing that balm scene despite it not having anything really overt in it 😳.

Glad you enjoyed the teasing- knew you would after our discussions and yes poor Swara did not where to go, what to do, what to say!!! She dug herself in so deep as it is, and she was no match for his wickedness there 😉😆. Absolutely- that mix of loveliness and innocence with the steel she had in her is of course irresistible to our knight:).

Awww horsie was so loved and thanked and in turn, he was so affectionate not just to master but to masters Princess too!! Lovely horsie:). Haha- these are fighting so much na? I don't know what else to make them to do deal with the rubbish they lies between them. Wait- actually I do know but cannot make them get to that yet 😉😆😳. God I need to be less shameless!! Totally re Swara- the realisation about Kavita and understanding exactly what that relation was does hurt her but she's still considerate and gentle and feels bad about the loss of his love and plus doesn't quite comprehend why the whole thing makes her so miserable .

Re sleeping arrangements- well only technically that first night when they arrived but even then he saw her sleeping and tucked her in so... :)

You are absolutely right about Swara- she has surely fallen too but she just doesn't know it as she doesn't really know what love really feels like. She's never experienced all these feelings before and the way she digests them is therefore confused but yes, it is an entirely new spectrum of emotions for her and so she can't get what it means. And as you say, they're hardly in a situation to have rosy romantic thoughts but they seem to be managing despite that rather well huh!

Glad you liked it all and much more to discuss on the next parts of course 😉. Lots of love always xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#534

main pehle hi comment likhne wali thi par main tho 14th chapter padke bas hi nahin ho rahamaine yeh 10 tys pada hai.naa yeh merta fav chpter nahin. k ki main koi chapter ko chun nahin sakti yeh aacha hai ye har chapter padke aisa lagta hai k issse acha kuch ho hi nahin sakta aur nxt chapter main decision change karni padti hai.yeh chapter itna kuch hai kehne k liye main thodi bhi aapne dimag aur dil ki baat likh payi tho acha hai.pehle tho swara ko sanky ko na dekhe ghabrana and use dekhke uske woun ds k baare mein inquire karna.and sanky ka use chidana ek tho usne madat kii aur ussse hi aapni baato mei phasana budmash kahi ka. and who i still beleive you.bahut hi acha tha. phir aaya veer ,oh my, mujhe un tino se phirse pyaar ho gaya.den prince mocking.ab kheer k saath baat acha laga.swara ka problem jab who cavity k baare mein bata raha tha.aur who last sanskaar ki kiss jab uska man halka ho gaya.cute tha.nxt ab swara ka chidana banta hai.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: rashidhingra
I wake up and check my phone for time, its 6.
Instead of going back to sleep,I saw the mail referring to your PM and couldn't control my urge to read the much awaited Chapter 14.
And it was worth it.
Could my morning be any more serene ?
This was crafted so well. Their emotions coming at bay. It was so surreal. How I want them to stay in ehsaas nagar haveli forever now!
Theur camaraderie to never end.
Oh how sanskaar recounted swara's musings and chatter while tending to him. He teased her so much! It was so cute! Well the kiss part made her blush so hard.
There are butterflies in my stomach when they venture into that territory.
How swara is noticing his physical details , they eyes,the handsome face.❤️
Sanskaar has fallen hard for Swara.
These two just weave magic.

Finally, sanskaar opened up to her, shared his gruesome past.
The rrespect that he commands from swara is phenomenal.
The last para was the icing to cake. Couldn't have ended better.
Thank you so much for this swasanlicious update. It soothed us beyond anything.
I know the future chapters would entail a lot of drama, anxiety but well for these two to come out together post that, we can go through anything!
Thank you again, for posting the 14 so soon! :*
I'll be waiting for the PM for 15 eagerly! ❤️

Dear Rashi 🤗

Your comment was such a balm to me, I tend to get very nervous about what I write and present so comments like this really keep me going. I wanted to reply much sooner but an in an endless fight with time for more of it! Sorry!

It made me so happy that you loved the chapter and that it started your day off an a good footing. Thank you hugely for the lovely words ahoy the writing. I could see all the scenes playing out in my head and wondered if I would get everything across that I needed to as it's such a changing and rather confusing but ultimately sublime phase for SwaSan, you do wonder how to put it in to words. If only they could freeze in EN forever huh? But they have many more adventures, good and bad that await them alas! Haha, I felt that there had to be lashings of teasing there as there was no way Sanskaar was not going to go on and on about all those things the cutie Princess said and did in her adorable state of mindless worry when she thought he was out cold. I get butterflies too thinking about it!!! And so much that I even made Sanskaar ask about butterflies 😆.

Swara is indeed far from immune to the very obvious charms of the handsome Prince just as he is so smitten by her loveliness. I always call SwaSan magic too 😳.

I wanted Sanskaar to be entirely unburdened before he left the Haveli and I feel like now he is. He will find strength for whatever awaits them next through this in a way. You are right that there is much drama to Coke, hopefully in some very unexpected ways for you all but you are absolutely correct- my intention was to put them in a position that they have had this connect and this time to really stare deep into not just each other's eyes but their beautiful souls 😳.

I'll of course pm when I finish 15 and post:). Thank you for the love and much of it to you too xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: amimus
Oh I was so worried for sanskaar, happy to see he is fine. Om must say Swara is very brave android pure of heart. It's not easy to forgive someone who has damaged your reputation so much.
But nevertheless I loved their light hearted banter and sanskaar leaving no chance of making her blush. I love these moments of them spent in the haveli and am savoring every bit of it as I know further chapters will be of reality of the situation they are in.

Hey Amina 🤗

I made Sanskaar recover as how could he not when he had a nurse like Swara 😉and given what a seasoned warrior he is of course:). Swara is indeed a truly pure and angelic soul, just naturally, but without losing her spark I think. She has seen beyond Sanskaar's outward projection and realises his intent is always pure and so she is falling for that and of course his other charms too. Yes these are indeed a golden interlude for them and true that coming chapters will bring them much drama and possible angst too so part of the reason for these is that they are to carry them and us through all that to come:). Thank you for loving this chapter!

Love, Shru X

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: jasw
What an incredibly beautiful story this is!!!👏👏👏 I just read Ch 12,13,14. Prince Sanskar and Princess Swara are two beautiful souls, held together in magical thread weaved so nicely by you tootiefrootie!👏 Their caring, teasing, sulking, pacifying, talking, hesitant caressing is all so spellbinding!
Absolutely loved it.

Awww thank you so much my dear for your lovely words and appreciation! Indeed I see both of SwaSan as such beautiful souls, in different ways, but bound by their connect always. Each can bring out the best in the other and be everything the other needs. I am so glad you think I have managed to convey that and that you enjoyed all those elements you mention that I wanted to bring in here:).

Do keep reading and lots of love, Shruti X

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: chandanagimsy
U know what this is amazing welcome..mind blowing..full of swasan... Even in hectic schedule how can u write such beautiful updates...continue soon

Thank you so much for your kind appreciation:). As to how I find the time, I don't know expect to say that I have been sleeping rather less and been more than distracted in thinking about the plot even at work times 😆. So glad you loved it so much, do keep reading. Love, Shruti X

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Zephyr8
Such a beautiful update. I read it first thing in the morning...and I had a smile on my face. Their interactions were so heart warming. Wonderful as always. So glad you posted this already and yet waiting as always for your next chapter.

Thank you so much Sagarika 🤗, so glad you liked it so much and enjoyed the range of SwaSan feelings I tried to pen down. I was anxious to get this one out and will have to start on 15 asap, just struggling to find time with work at present but will do something for the weekend for sure:). Keep reading!

Love, S x

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hi Shru.. Sorry for the late res and unres buddy! I know you'd been waiting but I'm really sorry. Hope my apologies are accepted!
So Sanskaar heard everything! I can understand the bliss he might be feeling when her heard such words from her yet his insecurities and the fact that they are not meant to be. I pray Swara just goes with a stick towards him and says ILU Prince Grumpy and if he doesn't listen then beat him with a stick!!Lol..
Swara's first concern was Sanskaar of course! She too loves him, but she doesn't know how to acknowledge that!! Ugh... these two!! One knows he's in love but hates to feel so much about her and the other doesn't know whats happening to her. Why would she feel so bad when he told her about his loouuu for Kavita! Btw, that reminds me I was soo much waiting for this. i was smiling that finally Swara came to know the truth! Sanskaar was innocent and never wrong. I'm sure she'll fall for him very soon. Wait according to me she already has! But let's go in order

Oh proximity with Sanskaar makes her go too blush blush! I like it! The whole sequence of Swara tending to Sanskaar's wounds was so amazing!! I loved it. And Sanskaar started teasing her. Omg, he just said everything. The way she said that he can't be a traitor and the way she kissed his scars!
Jeez I can understand what she might be going through! But I loved it. This flirty and teasing Sanskaar is very very good! I jsut loved it when Sanskaar applied the cream to her injuries! It was soo good😳
Veer likes Swara. I just loved this horse! He's too good I tell you. So lovable! He's still calling her nymph OMFG!!😆Poor Swara. What will happen after they are together, i don't know!😳 SwaSan are getting closer moment by moment and I really love their progress! The way he kisses her forehead and she doesn't mind infact she smiled! I'm telling you, ye ladki to gyi!
Now update soon! And I hope I'll be able to unres soon!
Would be waiting as the weekend is just about to come.
Sakshi

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