RagLak/RagYa FF- Made for each other - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Nice Update!
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very nice update Yaar thanks for pm and sanky and ragini ke jealousy wala pyaar dekne ko millega hip hip ;)) I just want sanky bhi ragini aur vish ko dekkar jealous hojana *_* KUCH KUCH HOTHA HAI :)))
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Very nice part. I feel so bad for ragini.
Please update soon
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Joined: 16 January 2016Posts: 211Posted: 02 March 2016 at 5:35am | IP LoggedReportQuoteChapter:- 3It's a new day, a new morning. Raginiand Lakshya are sitting together. All the students of St. Joseph's are as usual busy with their regular chit chats when suddenly Tanya enters the classroom and searches for a seat. She is wearing a black mini pencil skirt with a red crop top and high heels. All the boys look at her with lust. Lakshya sees her and calls out her name. Tanya walks to him.Lakshya- Hey Tanya, kya hua? Seatnahi mili?Tanya- No yaar Lucky, kaha baithumain?Lakshya- Chill! Mere paas baith jaao.Tanya- Par tumhaare paas toh yehladki (points towards Ragini) baithi hui hai.Lakshya- Oh ye? Ye meri best se bhibest friend hai, Ragini. In short, RG!Tanya- Hi, Ragini!Ragini gives a fake smile.Ragini- Hi.Lakshya (by eyes to Ragini)- Oyemoti, sun na!Ragini (by eyes)- Kya hai?Lakshya (by eyes, making a puppyface)- Tu kahi aur jaake baith jaa na, please.Ragini (by eyes)- Nahi, bilkul nahi.Main pehle aayi thi yaha.Lakshya(by eyes)- Please yaar,samjha kar. Meri setting mat bigaad.Ragini (by eyes)- Theek hai. Goodluck!Ragini (to Tanya)- Tanya, tum yahabaith jaao..main kahi aur jaake baith jaati hu.Tanya- Are you sure, Ragini? Its okay,main kahi aur baith jaaungi.Ragini- Nahi, tum yahi baitho. Luckytumhaare saath baithna chahta hai.Tanya smiles to her and Ragini smilesback. She goes to sit with Vishal. Vishal understands why she came.Vishal- Bhaga diya usne?Ragini- Haa?Vishal- Lucky ne! Bhaga diya tujhe,right?Ragini- Aisa nahi hai yaar. Woh basmain khud hi...Vishal- Tu kab samjhegi ki tu mujhsejhooth nahi bol sakti? Tujhse better jaanta hoon main tujhe. Tanya ne Lucky kotujhse dur kar diya.Ragini- Yaar, Tanya ko kyu beech meinlaa raha hai? Use thodi pata hai kuch? Gussa toh mujhe Lucky par aa raha hai.Matlab itni puraani dosti itni asaani se bhool gaya?Vishal- Tune bhi toh wahi kiya. Itnipuraani dosti bhol gayi. Mujhe bhool gayi.Ragini- Vish, tu kyu baar baar aisibaatein karta hai? Aisa kuch nahi hai yaar.Vishal- Theek hai rehne de. Teacheraata hoga. Chup baith abhi!Ragini is about to say something butthe teacher enters and she stops. Upon entering, the teacher gets shocked tosee that Ragini and Lakshya are not sitting together today.Teacher (To RagLak)- Tum dono kebeech kuch jhagda wagda hua hai kya?Ragini and Lakshya look at eachother confused and then back at the teacher.Lakshya- Nahi toh, sir. Kyu?Teacher- Do saalo mein aaj pehli baartum dono ko alag alag baitha hua dekha hai. Toh bas thoda ajeeb laga.Ragini- Sir, aisa toh nahi hai ki ekLucky hi mera dost hai. Class ke saare students mere friends hai. (She turnstowards Vishal) Aur Vish, woh toh mujhe Lucky se zyaada jaanta hai to be veryhonest.Lakshya looks at Ragini shocked. Henever thought she would say this. He always thought he knew "HIS" Ragini morethan anyone else.Teacher- Lagta hai Lunky aur RG kidosti weak ho gayi hai. Lucky ki jagah Vishal ne le lee, aur Ragini ki jagahTanya ne.Ragini feels uncomfortable by allthis so she decides to go out of the classroom.Ragini- Excuse me sir, meri tabiyatkuch theek nahi lag rahi. Kya main sick room jaakar baith sakti hoon, please?Lakshya gets worried to hear this.Lakshya- Kya hua tujhe? Theek tohhai na? Maine bola tha icecream mat kha, tujhesardi ho jaati hai par tu kyumaanegi meri baat? Tujhe toh apni hi karni hai.Ragini- Tu fikar mat kar! Baat kar Tanya ke saath. Main zara aati hu.Vishal (to the teacher)- Sir, main bhi chalu uske saath? She might needme. Uski tabiyat theek nahi hai na.Teacher (shocked, to Lakshya)- Yesab ho kya raha hai? Lakshya, tum nahi jaaoge? Aaj tumhaari jagah Vishal jaaegaRagini ka khyaal rakhne?Lakshya- Sir, main bhi jaa...Tanya then grips Lakshya's shirttightly. Lakshya looks at her hand and then at her face.Tanya (to the teacher)- Sir, Lakshyajaayega toh main akeli ho jaaungi.Lakshya- Par Tanya, use merizaroorat...Tanya- Zaroorat toh mujhe bhi hai, Lucky! Aur phir uske saath toh Vishal hain hi na.Lakshya- Theek hai. Main ruk jaata hoon.Tanya hugs Lakshya. Lakshya is quite worried about Ragini and he isn't liking the fact that Ragini and Vishal are becoming close.{LOCATION- CANTEEN}Ragini isn't actually ill. She just makes an excuse to leave the classroom. She and Vishal are now having coffee.Ragini- Oi, sun na!Vishal- Bol.Ragini- Movie dekhne chalega?Vishal (shocked)- Tu theek hai na? Teri tabiyat sach mein kharaab toh nahi ho gayi? Drink karke aayi hai?Ragini (confused)- Haa? Kya bol raha hai tu?Vishal- RG, tune mujhe movie ke liyeinvite kiya, MUJHE! Islye I'm shocked. Jis ladki ko Sanky ke alawaa koi aurdikhta hi nahi tha woh aaj mujhe movie pe invite kar rahi hai. Isn't itshocking?Ragini laughs out loud.Ragini- Kuch bhi bolta hai tu! Chal evening ko movie dekhne chalte hai.Vishal- Kaunsi?Ragini- Koi bhi. Jo tujhe pasand aaye.Vishal- I have a better idea!Ragini- Kaisa idea?Vishal- Tu aaj evening mere ghar aa jaa. Mom bhi bohot miss karti hai tujhe.Iss bahane unse bhi mil lena. Ghar pe teri pasand ki koi movie dekh lenge. Okay?Ragini- Haa, ye accha idea hai. Bohot saal ho gaye aunty se nahi mili.Vishal- Theek hai. Tayyaar rehna, theek chaar baje main tujhe pick karne aaunga tere ghar.Ragini- Haa, okay.Ragini and Vishal are enjoying their coffee when they hear some peple clap. This sound comes from the classroom. Theyboth look at each other confused.Ragini- Kaun clap kar raha hai?Vishal- Pata nahi. Ruk main dekhke aata hoon.Saying this, he goes away from Ragini and stands near the classroom door to see what's going on inside but he is unable to have a clear view due to the crowd. A guy suddenly comes out of the classroom. Vishal stops him.Vishal- Oye sun, andar kya ho rahahai? Sab clap kyu kar rahe hai? Kisika birthday hai kya aaj?The guy- Tujhe nahi pata? Lucky neaaj poore class ke saamne Tanya ko propose kiya. Isliye sab clap kar rahe the.Vishal (shocked)- Kya????Ragini also arrives.Ragini (to Vishal)- Kya hua, Vish? Kya chal rahahai andar?Vishal- Woh...RG...Lucky ne...Ragini (worried)- Lucky? Kya hua use?Vishal- Woh Lucky aur Tanya...Ragini- Lucky aur Tanya kya? Tu nahi bolega. Hatt saamne se. Main khud dekh leti hoon.Ragini enters the classroom to see Lakshya and Tanya hugging. Tear drops slip down from her eyes. She goes out of the classroom and Vishal follows her.Vishal- RG, sun toh meri baat!Ragini- Vish please, thodi der ke liye mujhe akela chodd de.Vishal- Nahi chodd sakta.Ragini gets frustrated this time.Ragini (shouts)- Kyu nahi choddsakta? Main keh rahi hoon na main theek hoon. Chala jaa yaha se. Please, JUSTLEAVE ME ALONE!Vishal knows she is in pain. He hugs her and for first few seconds Ragini struggles to break the hug but then she gives up and hugs him back, crying into his chest.Vishal- RG, rona bandh kar. Tu aisi kyu hai? Lucky tujhe bhaao nahi deta toh tu kyu uske liyemarr rahi hai? Teri zindagi teri khud ki hai, Lucky ki nahi! Apni life mein khud se zyaada importanceLucky ko dena bandh kar, RG. Grow up! Woh tujhe bhoolkar kisi aur ke saathfriendly ho sakta hai, teri jagah kisi aur ko de sakta hai to tu kyu nahi? Patiya boyfriend nahi hai woh tera. Apni zindagi apne liye jeena seekh, naaki uskeliye.Ragini breaks the hug. She wipes her tears and looks into his eyes.Ragini- Chaar baj gaye hai shayad.Ghar nahi jaana hai kya tere?Vishal is shocked but happy.Vishal- Tu sach keh rahi hai? Itna sab kuch hone ke baad mujhe laga tha tu nahi...Ragini- Kyu nahi jaaungi? Tune hamesha mere liye bohot kuch kiya hai. Main kabhi tere liye kuch nahi kar paayi par abb main tere liye kuch karna chahti hu, Vish. Tujhe khush dekhna chahti hu. Zindagi bhar jisse pyaar kiya, usne toh mujhe bina bataye hi girlfriend bana lee. Par ummeed hai tu aisa nahi karega. Vish, will you be my best friend?Vishal has teary eyes. He hugs Ragini and she hugs him back. Meanwhile, Lakshya is searching for Ragini everywhere and he finally sees her hugging Vishal. He isn't liking it.Lakshya (in mind)- Ye kya kar rahehai dono? Main toh yaha RG ko apne aur Tanya ke baare mein batane aaya tha. Parkaise batau? Woh toh Vish ke saath khush hai. Busy bhi hai. Abhi in dono kodisturb karna theek hoga kya? Par ye dono hug kyu kar rahe hai? Ek hi din meinkuch zyaada hi close nahi ho gaye? Khair, mujhe kya? RG meri best friend hai.Agar woh boyfriend bana bhi le apna toh I should be happy. After all, uskikhushi hi important hai mere liye. Agar woh Vish ke saath khush hai aur usse pyaar karne lagi haithen mujhe koi problem nahi honi chahiye. I should just let her be. Lekin Vish ne agar meri jagah le lee toh? Nahi nahi, RG kabhi kisiko merijagah nahi degi. Yes, I am sure.With this, Lakshya goes back to Tanya but his mind is still occupied by ragini and Vishal's thoughts. He wonders why they were hugging. On the other hand, Vishal and Ragini head towards Vishal's house.
Edited by chandra1998 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written. You have brought out emotions beautifully.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update chandra 👏
Beautifully written
Want RaShal Jodi 😉
If it is not possible, then bring a new girl to Vishal
don't like Tanya at all 😡
Tanya making differences b/w RagSan
Thanks for the pm
Can't wait to read next update
Please continue soon



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: foresight

Very well written. You have brought out emotions beautifully.


Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks gopikashalu93 😊 But it's a RagSan FF so may be new girl will enter for Vish! 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Brilliant update I like how he is scared she might give his place to someone else
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Originally posted by: azira07

very nice update Yaar thanks for pm and sanky and ragini ke jealousy wala pyaar dekne ko millega hip hip ;)) I just want sanky bhi ragini aur vish ko dekkar jealous hojana *_* KUCH KUCH HOTHA HAI :)))

I love Kuch Kuch hota hai 😛

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