RagLak/RagYa FF- Made for each other - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Gewels

She needs to tell him what she feels. Love is also about taking risks to get what you want. She has to decide how much she's prepared to lose if he's not where she needs him to be. Decisions decisions !


Let's see what she does. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Kuch kuch hota hai..haiii..I want Rags to make new friends as well...coz sanky has got a gf now...plz let ragini realise vish love...plzzz...


Hehe but it's a RagSan FF dear and of course Ragini will realise Vishal's love! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Hey guys updated my ragya story...part 20

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4548821&TPN=26



Now coming here...what a lovely update...sangini..poor vishal..damn he loves rags so much..and sanky needs a reality check..buddy really time u realise she more than friend for you...


He's as stupid as shit 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sudhi03

Aww SanGini are too good. poor Vishal feeling so bad for him.

Superb start. Please update soon


Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
sry yaar... read u r ff in one go...its really nyc...poor vishal...he cares ragz unconditionally...hope sanskar finds out importance of ragz soon... he can atleast say 2 ragz that he s going 2 propose tanya afterall ragz s his best frnd...
Edited by reshma4875 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter- 4

NOTE (New entry)- Vishal's mother
(Played by Zarina Wahab)

{LOCATION: VISHAL's HOUSE}

Ragini and Vishal reach Vishal's
house and knock at the door. Vishal's mother opens the door and gets surprised
to see Ragini.

Vishal's mother- Arrey, Ragini tu?
Itne dino se kaha gaayab thi? Chal baat mat kar mujhse. Apni maa nahi hu na
teri islye meri yaad bhi nahi aati tujhe.

Ragini hugs Vishal's mother.

Ragini- Arrey aunty, sorry baba! Maaf
bhi kar do abb. Aur aap aisa kyu keh rahi ho ki aap meri maa nahi ho? Aap meri
aur Vish, hum dono ki maa ho, samjhi? Aaj ke baad aapne kabhi bhi aisa kaha na toh
main aapse bilkul baat nahi karoongi.

Vishal's mother- Chal chal, makkhan
mat maar! Andar aa jaa. Meri pyaari laado, kitni patli ho gayi hai tu. Theek se
khaana waana nahi khaati kya? Aaj kal ki ladkiya bhi dieting ke naam par sookhi
lakdi jaisi dikhna chaahti hai.

Vishal's mother hugs Ragini and
kisses her forehead.

Vishal (sarcastically)- Haa, yeh
accha hai! Mujhe toh bhool hi gaye sab. Ragini mili nahi ki mujhe boycott kar
diya gaya.

Ragini- Haa chal abb tu bhaag yaha
se! Aunty ko unki asli beti mil gayi hai. Hai na aunty (to Vishal's mother).

Vishal's mother- Haa, bilkul!

Vishal (with a puppy face)- Not fair!
Yeh toh nainsaafi hai. Mujhe bhi hug chahiye.

Vishal also joins the hug and all
three of them hug each other happily. After a while, they enter inside.

Ragini- Aunty, bohot dino se aapke
haath ka aaloo ka paratha nahi khaya. Aaj khilaogi na aap?

Vishal's mother- Haa, kyu nahi meri
bacchi? Tu aur Vishal jaake room mein movie dekh. Main thodi der mein paratha
lekar upar aati hu.

Ragini- Okay, aunty!

Vishal and Ragini go to Vishal's
room.

Vishal- Kaunsi movie dekhegi?

Ragini- Chodd movie nahi dekhte hai.
Kuch aur karte hai.

Vishal- Kya karna hai tujhe?

Ragini- Ek kaam kar, koi full bass
wala gaana baja. Dance karte hai!

Vishal (confused)- Dance? Par subah
toh tera movie ka plan tha!

Ragini- Abhi mood change ho gaya
mera. Bas gaana laga abb full party song type ka koi gaana!

Vishal- Okay, meri maa!

Vishal plays the song "Aaj house
party hai" and both of them start dancing like crazy. Ragini starts laughing
and enjoying like a maniac and Vishal is happy to see her happy. For a while, Ragini
forgets about Lakshya at all. The song then ends and "Ishq wala Love" starts.
The mood gets romantic and oth of them start feeling uncomfortable. They still
continue dancing but this time they start a romantic duet. Vishal holds Ragini's
waist and Ragini hesistantly places one of her hands on Vishal's shoulder and
the other one on his hand.

"Surkh wala, sauz wala
Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se zyaada
Waise waala love
Ishq wala love
Hua jo dard bhi toh humko
Aaj kuch zyaada hua
Ishq wala love
Yeh kya hua hai kya khabar
Yahi pata hai zyaada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar yeh usko bhi hua hai
Phir bhi mujhko zyaada hua
Ishq wala love
Ooo
Meri neend jaise pehli baar tooti hai
Aankhein malke maine dekhi hai subah
Hui dhoop zyaada
Leke teri roshni din chadha
Ishq wala love"

Ragini starts imagining Lakshya in
place of Vishal. Tear drops appear in her eyes.

"Chaake baadalo ke jaali ke peeche se
Kare chaandni ye mujhko itedda
Leke noor saara jaanu mera yahi pe
Hai chupa chupa hua"

Vishal gets lost into her eyes

"Ishq wala love
Hua jo dard bhi toh humko
Aaj kuch zyaada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar yeh usko bhi hua hai
Phir bhi mujhko zyaada hua
Surkh wala, sauz wala
Hota hai jo love se zyaada
Waise wala love
Ishq wala love"

Suddenly, Vishal's mother enters the
room and sees Ragini and Vishal dancing on a romantic duet.

Vishal's mother- Ahem ahem!

Vishal and Ragini recompose themselves.

Vishal (embarassed)- M..Maa, aa...aap kab aayi?

Mother- Tabhi jab tum dono ek doosre
mein khoye hue the.

Ragini feels uncomfortable so she tries to change the topic.

Ragini- Aunty, paratha ready hai

Mother- Arrey haa, islye toh main aayi thi. Tum dono neeche chalo. Parathe tayyar hai.

Suddenly, Ragini's phone rings. Its Sanskaar.

Vishal (to Ragini)- Kiska phone hai?

Ragini- Woh...Lucky ka!

Vishal (to his mother)- Maa, chalo
aap aur main chalte hai. Ragini aa jaayegi.

Mother- Par beta, uska paratha thanda...

Vishal- Maa, uske papa ka phone hai. Woh aa jaayegi. Aap chalo!

Vishal's mother- Theek hai.

Vishal and his mother walk downstairs but before going, Vishal looks at Ragini.

Ragini (by eyes)- Thanks, Vish!

Vishal smiles and nods. After Vishal
leaves, Ragini receives the call.

Ragini- Hello?

Lakshya (over phone)- Kaha hai tu, RG?

Ragini- Main...Ummm main ghar pe hoon.

Lakshya(over phone)- Ghar pe? Are you sure?

Ragini- Haa, kyu?

Lakshya (over phone)- Nahi, kuch nahi. Theek hai main rakhta hu. Take care. Vish ko kehna ki tera acche se khyaal rakhe. Aur haa, usse yeh bhi kehna ki tujhe time pe ghar drop kar de.

Ragini- Lucky, tu kya...

Before Ragini could complete her sentence, Lakshya cuts the call. Ragini then understands that Lakshya already knew that she was lying. He knew she was with Vishal. She silently walks downstairs to eat her paratha. On the other side, Lakshya is on a date with Tanya but he is distracted. He is not much interested in Tanya's gossips.

Tanya- Baby, you know mere papa ne aaj mujhe ek pink bag gift ki hai, dekhoge?

Lakshya doesn't pay any attention to her so he doesn't realise that Tanya is talking to him. Tanya holds his hand.

Tanya- Baby, kya hua? Kuch problem hai?

Lakshya comes back to present.

Lakshya- Ummm...nahi toh. Koi baat nahi hai.

Tanya- Sab theek hai na? Dekho, tum mujhse apne problems share nahi karoge toh kisse karoge? I'm your girlfriend afterall!

Lakshya- Tanya, woh...aaj RG ne...

Tanya- RG ne kya, Lucky?

Lakshya- Usne aaj pehli baar mujhse jhooth bola. Main use tabse jaanta hu jabse main shayad 7-8 saal ka raha hounga! Aaj pehli baar usne mujhse, apne best friend se jhooth bola.

Tanya- Matlab?

Lakshya- Maine use call karke poocha tha ki woh kaha hai. Usne kaha woh apne ghar pe hai par maine khud use Vish ke saath uske ghar jaate hue dekha. Use mujhse jhooth bolne ki kya zaroorat thi? Main thodi na use mana karta!

Tanya- Lucky, ye uski khud ki life hai. Uski life ko tum control nahi kar sakte na? Aur ho sakta hai uske aur Vishal ke beech kuch ho jo woh dono tumse, mujhse, hum sab se chupaana chahte ho. May be they're in love!

Lakshya gets shocked to hear the
word "love".

Lakshya- Love? Nahi, RG mujhe zaroor bataati agar aisa kuch hota toh. Main use bachpan se jaanta hu. Woh aise kisise pyaar nahi karegi woh bhi mujhe bataaye bina!

Tanya- Accha baba, sorry. Abb meri taraf dekho!

Lakshya looks at her.

Tanya- I love you.

Lakshya- I love you too.

Tanya hugs Lakshya. At first, Lakshya hesitates but then he hugs her back.

Lakshya (in mind)- I don't know why, jab bhi main RG ko hug karta hu toh mujhe bilkul alag si feeling aati hai. Lagta hai jaise mere saath kabhi kuch bura ho hi nahi sakta. Par woh waali feeling mujhe Tanya ke saath nahi aati. Use hug karke mujhe ajeeb sa lagta hai.

Sanksaar breaks the hug.

Tanya- Prom night hai kal, yaad hai
na?

Lakshya (excited)- Arrey haa, har
saal main aur RG prom king aur queen bante hai. Ummeed hai iss baar bhi...

Suddenly, he realises what he's
saying and stops.

Lakshya- Sorry...Woh...main...

Tanya- Koi baat nahi. Iss saal bhi
prom king tum hi banoge par queen banoongi main!

Lakshya gives a bitter smile. He looks
at the time. It is almost 8 now.

Lakshya (in mind)- 8 baj gaye! Pata nahi Vish ne RG ko ghar drop kiya bhi hoga ya nahi. Main hi uske ghar jaakar le aata hu RG ko!

Lakshya (to Tanya)- Tanya, 8 baj chuke hai. I think hume ghar chalna chahiye. Chalo I'll drop you.

Tanya- Par abhi toh hum aaye hai!

Lakshya- Tanya, tumhe ghar drop karne ke baad mujhe aur bhi kuch kaam hai.

Tanya- Accha, theek hai chalo!

Lakshya drops Tanya home and from there he drives off to Vishal's place. Upon reaching, he doesn't see anyone. He calls Ragini but her phone comes switched off. Lakshya gets tensed.

Lakshya (to himself)- Oh god! Mujhe Vish ko trust karke RG ko uske saath jaane hi nahi dena chahiye tha. Abb uska phone bhi switched off aa raha hai. Pata nahi woh kaha hogi. God, I just hope she's fine! Main kya karu? Ek baar andar jaakar dekh kar aau Ragini hai ya nahi? Haa, ye theek rahega!

Lakshya hesitantly knocks at the door of Vishal's house. Vishal's mother opens the door. He could hear Ragini and Vishal's laughing voices surrounding the room.

Vishal's mother- Jee? Aap kaun?

Lakshya- Jee aunty, woh main...Lakshya! Ragini aur Vishal ka dost.

Vishal speaks from behind.

Vishal- Kaun hai, maa?

Mother (to Vishal)- Beta, tumhara koi dost aaya hai, Lakshya!

Vishal and Ragini get shocked to hear Lakshya's name.

Vishal's mother (to Lakshya)- Arrey beta, tum baahar kyu kade ho? Andar aao na!

Lakshya- Nahi aunty, I'm good. Woh actually main Ragini ko...

Mother- Arrey, aise kaise andar nahi aaoge? Chalo andar aao!

Laksya steps inside and looks at Ragini who was already looking at him with teary eyes.

Vishal- Arrey Lucky, tu yaha?

Lakshya- Haa woh main...actually tune use ghar drop nahi kiya toh...toh main use lene aaya tha. I hope you don't mind, do you?

Vishal feels sad on hearing this.

Vishal- Umm...No, absolutely not! Mujhe koi problem nahi hai.

Ragini speaks in middle.

Ragini- Par mujhe hai!

Lakshya and Vishal looked at her, shocked.

Ragini- Ummm I...I mean main...main Vishal ke saath aayi thi toh usi ke saath chali jaaungi. Lucky, tujhe fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Vishal aur main bas nikal hi rahe the. Hain na, Vish?

Vishal- Umm ha, haa! Lucky, main drop kar doonga use ghar.

Lakshya feels hurt by this. He looks at Ragini.

Lakshya- Take care. Ghar pohochkar phone karna mujhe!

Ragini- Theek hai.

Lakshya leaves from there. After a while, Ragini and Vishal also leave.
Edited by chandra1998 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Superb story 👏
Basically i am a swasan fan but i like this story a lot
Please send me pm next time
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Superb story 👏
Basically i am a swasan fan but i like this story a lot
Please send me pm next time


Sure! And thank you soo much. I didn't expect that a SwaSan fan would like this actually. Thank you, anyway! 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: reshma4875

sry yaar... read u r ff in one go...its really nyc...poor vishal...he cares ragz unconditionally...hope sanskar finds out importance of ragz soon... he can atleast say 2 ragz that he s going 2 propose tanya afterall ragz s his best frnd...


Exactly, he should've informed her at least!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
poor Vish lol his is mad over Ragini but ... I just hope sanskaar soon realises his feeling over Ragini before its too late :) And Superb Update Thanks For Pm Dear Waiting For Other FFupdates Too Yaar post Regularly if possible dear Thanks

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