Agar Tum Saath Ho - A Swasan TS(Updated Final Part at Page 6) - Page 2

soumi ... u beautifully decribed every single details of that situation. ... loved sanskaars panic reaction when he saw swara in that condition. ... I liked that in episode too... kind of like I was waiting to see reaction of sanskaar. ...
love u... waiting for the update. ..

Awesome 👏 continue... Dear

Awesome Writing Soumi 👍🏼
Lots Of 🤗 For U For writing this TS

Soumi...i must say..ur version is far better than the real one re...very well written...Do continue soon plz

ya guys i willl...actually even i'm so pissed off by cvs fr shwing such craps.so i just wrote whatever my eyes r cravibg for since sunday night.

ya guys i willl...actually even i'm so pissed off by cvs fr shwing such craps.so i just wrote whatever my eyes r craving for since sunday night.

Plzz continue it...n complete ur prwvious writings also...

AGAR TUM SAATH HO - PART-2

Sanskar comes to his room and informs sharmishtha that shekhar is calling her as they will leave for badi and swara will stay here.shomi is about to interrupt bt sanskar shows his palm and says,"swara ki halat abhi thik nahi he maa, and i will not let her go in such state.please maa, aaj ki raat voh yahi rahegi mere pass...please maa.ab mana mat kijiye".
Shomi understands his state and blesses him and leaves.In MM hall maasi is again creating an issue on swara's stay in MM bfore mrg as per her it is nt a good sign to stay at night in your would-be groom's house.Sanskar comes downstairs and overhears everything bt still he chooses to ignore and bids goodbye to shekhar and shomi bt maasi again shouts ,"jiji khush nahi hain...isiliye ye sab ho raha he...swara ka yun shaadi se pehele kisi paraye mard ke sath rehena thik nahi he...ye ghalat he...aur ye ..."
"Shut up...just shut up...bohot ho gaya...bas!!!ab ek aur shabd nahi bolengi aap...aap mujhse umar mein badi he aur ghalti se ragini ki maasi..isliye abtak main aapko bardast kar raha tha bt ab bas!!!!haat jor kar ke bol raha hoon chale jayien yaha se" "saanskaar"...ragini shouted bt sanskar stopped her and continued, "ragini please...bohot ho gaya...maasi sharafat se bol raha hoon pls chale jayie mere ghar se...pls jayie yaha se"...maasi is about to say something bt sanskar stops her and shouts, " get out"...maasi leaves angrily so as the godadia family members.
Sanskar returns to his room and sits besides his swara.He slowly moves his hand on her head.she is sleeping in a deep sleep.He stares at her continiously without a blink.In the meantime, doctor arrives and starts checking her...sanskar looks all tensed and worried by looking at the doctor's expression.after a while dr replied, "Thank god sanskar u reached on time otherwise it would have been impossible for me to save her...injection de diya he maine...agar agle 1ghante main hosh nahi aaya to inhe hospital me admit karna padega" concluding that he done the dressing of swara's neck and leaves.
Sanskar finally remains all alone in his room with his swara.she is there with him bt still she is nt there. sanskar sits besides her and holds her palm in his hand and kisses it.
He sat down from bed to floors and both of their faces are in same level now.He kissed her forehead and started crying touching his nose on her cheek.
He cried his heart out holding her in his arms...repeatedly asking her to wake up and talks to him..."i'm srry na...ab nahi bulaunga kaccha nimbu...i promised.ab to baat kar lo na pls...aye princess aise satate nahi he apne prince ko...aye wake up na plss"

To Be Continued...

Nice update

U write whtevr i wntd.
Swara hurt,doctr called,she stay at mm,sanskar blasting on masi.
Specialy a powrpk emo scn.lv it.cntu soon