Agar Tum Saath Ho - A Swasan TS(Updated Final Part at Page 6)

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Awesome update

In this update you beautifully portrayed the love and understanding between swasan.

Vo Bina bole hi dil ki bat ankhon se samajthi hoon

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1025621

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

super duper...❤️. that's alll what we want.🤗🤗

thanks for the pm buddy...😊

👏👍🏼

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Awesome soumi 👏
Loved it

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Thnk u buddy...i am very tensed right now.

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aamias

@aamias

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

in one word awesome why cant the cvs be so creative u wrote it s beautifully

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APUDEEP

@Apudip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Enjoyed it thoroughly 😊cvs are so hell bent on drama that they miss this scene,.Trust me, you are better than them😊

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

cvs ruining a scene i can digest that bt dnt they dare to ruin swasan mrg????i will kill them for sure...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Lovely end to the 3S, Soumi. 🤗 🤗

The poignant way Sanskaar was calling out to Swara, asking his princess to come back to him was so, so moving. His pain, his fear, came across so well. The way he broke into tears was very powerful.

And how could the Princess go away, then her Prince himself was calling her with so much love? The scene after Swara woke up was also so amazing. That was typical hubby/ fiance behavior by Sanskaar---he is so relieved that the love of his life is safe, and then he starts scolding her for being careless enough to endanger something so priceless, so valuable to him---her own self! 😳 I can tell you from experience, a protective Hubby always behaves like this. The first reaction is a possessive, protective concern, and then will be the scolding that "how could you put yourself at risk like this?! I almost died thinking of what could happen to you!" 😆 Too cute!!

Love,

---Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

@viji while writing the last part i just literally wrote down what people usually says in this state...

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Krishnabhisarik

@Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Hey!! Read all parts in one go!! Great yaar👏 The connection in the first part where swara was calling out to sanskar to see him one last time, he still couldnt find her but his heart ached with her pain and he knew something was wrong.. Beautiful.. Loved how he blasted maasi in the 2nd part.. No explanations, just asked her to leave.. And then when he said sorry to swara for calling her a kaccha nimbu, awww, that was so senti😭 The whole third part was perfect.. Worried and frantic sanskaar.. Literally kheech le aya apni princess ko waapis... Loved all the TLC too.. Do write more😊😊

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