Agar Tum Saath Ho - A Swasan TS(Updated Final Part at Page 6)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys...i'm here again as i promise to write an OS on swasan post swara's accident...cause like me all of us were expecting a concern, insecure sanskar but cvs basicallly destroyed the whole thing in such a disaster way.so here i am with my another OS on swasan basically on a insecure sanskar whom we all want to see but i will not focus on any oher character cz cvs already did it so badly 🀒...i am trying my level best to match up te expectation of all of yours...DO share ur feedback and criticism...
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Swara is slowly loosing the strength to fight back...she really cnt hold up to the kite thread more...her fingers are getting injured badly and so as her will power...All she is thinking at that time is her life, her all through journey, how her maa brought her up all alone, how she meets her papa and ragini, her music, dida, her broken mrg and then her soulmate, her true-love sanskar...how he all through cares for her, his love, his support,their journey, the tent,his confession and finally it becomes their love, their engagement and the movie date where he says "Hume ab koi alag nahi kar sakta swara...hum humesha ek rehenge" tears rolled from her eyes...where is he????she just wants to see him for one last time...she murmured in her mind "kaha ho tum sanskar??".

Its been a quite long that sanskar was searching for her in the jungle...he called her name a couple of time but dnt get any reponse.With every step he was taking and goes to the deep jungle indicates him that there was something terribly wrong here and somewhere his inner mind is crying for swara. He can feel an intense sharp pain in his heart for her...he wants to cry..he himself was nt aware why he feels in such a way but somewhere he is feeling like so...he was scared for her as all the past incidents passes through his minds...suddenly that sharp freesbie is coming in his mind and he feels terribly bad for her...he says to himself why she is nt responding to me??Is she okay???what is her need to come in this jungle???come on swara give me a reply damn it...He calls her name once again but falls down as he was obstacled by a bunch of kite thread...he got a lil bit cuts in his elbow and palm...bt his inner mind is now desperately wants to see swara. His mirror falls down from his pocket too.he got up and cleans his kurta...picked up the mirror and suddenly notices the kite he just cutt of in the competition that mystery kite...He curiously picked it up too and something captured his eyes and a cold string was flown through his whole nerve...there was some blood drops fallen on the kite...He was just about to throw the kite but he notices a refelction of a leg wearing a pink leggings in his mirror.he slowly stares at the reflection and his heart skipped a beat when he found that reflection is none other than her swara who is lying there lifelessly...he turned around and screams her name in top of his voice...
He rushed and covered the distance in three steps and reached to her...he just got stucked by see the scenario.It takes no time to assume that someone is trying to strangled her with the kite threads...her neck is bleeding badly...he got panicked and sits there with a plain face...he really dnt understand what to do now????he cupped her face and asks her loudly to open her eyes...but she didn't responded at all...he gains his sens of mind and takes her in his safe arms and carries her to MM...all the time while returning home he kep saying her "aankhe kholo swara...baat karo mujhse pls"
He reached home and all got shocked to see them.He carries swara inside the MM and asks laksh to call the doctor and uttara to come at his room with hot water and a soft towel asap.
Ignoring all the questions he moved towards his room and asks sharmistha to come along with him...
He kicked the door of his room with a bang!!! and puts swara softly on bed...her neck is still bleeding.
He takes out a casual dress of swara from his cupboard.he still have swara's clothes in his wardrobe so her presence is always felt by him...He asks shomi to change swara's clothes and leaves the room and locked the door...coming out of his room he loudly annonced to the whole MM that dnt need to be panic...he will manage it by his own.Maasi is going to start her jaap "jiji khush nahi hein and stuffs once again bt he stops her and request in a possible polite way to not to utter a single word against Swara,,,,,,,,

TO BE CONTINUED...
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Sree8410 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hayee... Soumi too good dear too good
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start πŸ‘
Continue soon please

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsm part Soumi... Loved it vry much...

Really loving this side of Sanskar...which we didnt got the show... U done it vry well through ur writing...

I really want Sanskar to gave a sharp reply to Masi for her jiji jap...

want little SwaSan romance too...

tnx for d pm dear... & pm me for d nxt prt too..

love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The beginning is beautiful. The pain of swara and her thoughts were beautifully presented. The insecurity of sanskar was also clearly visible.
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thnx guys...bt do tell me what u guys want to see yesterday.i hd a long list guys.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice story soumi. pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start soumi.πŸ‘πŸ‘..i desperately want's to read something like this...thank u so much dear...for this update...😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi soumi nice start buddyπŸ‘
the way you portrays both swara and sanskar's emotions is very well 😊
it really helps to calm our nervesπŸ˜‰
love to have more...
update more soon
thanks for the pm😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thnk u @ray waiting for ur rpply.main part kal aayega jo hum logo ko shw me nahi dikha.

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