Agar Tum Saath Ho - A Swasan TS(Updated Final Part at Page 6) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice... loved it... kash aesa serial mai b hota...
thanks to you soumi... its beautifully written😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
waiting for more and update more soon...
thanks for the pm 😊
love you for writing this🤗❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@ray while writing i too wished the same...bt rehene de aftrall its RS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Soumi khub romantic hayechhe. Hey, amar bhalo legechhe. Vk at -a giye chamkas naa. Love you re😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Wow Superb Update 👍🏼Soumi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: leku

Its superb!!
Do pm me


thnx leku...ya i will.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Soumi dear...
Great update yaar. I loved the possessive way Sanskaar said Swara should not be moved, and should stay in Maheshwari House till she got better. And his deep concern for her, his worry for her health, wanting to see her return to consciousness soon, was so well etched. His adoration for her came through so well.

And I literally dancing when Sanskaar blasted that whacko Maasi. What on Earth is Urvashi's problem with Swara staying in Maheshwari House till she regains consciousness I can't imagine. Shomi and Shekar have no issue, and anyway Swara is Sanskaar's fiance. If it had not been for crazy Urvashi Maasi's equally crazy banji Ragini, they would never have been divorced even!!

Am so overjoyed that Sanskaar stood up to maasi and Ragini and told them not to mess with him and Swara.

Waiting for the 3rd part. Please update soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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@viji i am actually waiting for ur comment...thnx for liking it 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AGAR TUM SAATH HO - FINAL PART
Sanskar keep holding her in his tight embrace...and all of his past life incidents...how he lost his first love, that agony, that madness, ruthlessness everything is flashing in his mind one by one and that moment when he thought that he lost his first love when kavita closed her eyes and his hand falls down on ground...shaken up him and he shouts "nahiii" and holds swara more tightly to his embrace...
Looks up to the clock and realised there is only 20 mins left to complete one hour and still his princess is in deep sleep...seems like she just dont wanna break her peacefull sleep this time...
He puts her again on bed...and he himself lies besides her and looking at her with tear eyes...all the nokjhoks of kite festivals is coming to his mind...how she is doing fun, having good time and calls her khatta nimbu...he smiles a lil and realised that same girl is lying here lifelessly.

Time is passing in a hurry so does his anxiety too...He becomes so much restless by looking at the clock...its only 10 mins left...He takes her up again in his arms...hugs her tightly and murmured in his ears..." ab bohot ho raha he princess...aur kitna bhao khaogi???uth bhi jao na yaar.bohot saari baatein karni he tumse...tum chali jaogi to mera kya hoga haan????mujhe prince keheke kaun bulayega????wake up swara...plsss wake up"...he breaks into tears...
His eye drop is falling on her face as he holds her close to his heart... and there is a lil bit of reaction happened in her body...she moves her lips...but sanskar didn't noticed that as he is not in a state to think anymore further.
She moves her fingers again...and this time she blinked her eyelashes too...slowly she opens her eyes and found herself in the most safest place of the world i,e in his prince's arms...holding her tighly and crying...

She puts her hand on his back and he gets shocked...he looked up and sees his princess is smiling softly looking at him...and assured him that she is okay now by close and open her eyes once...
he hugged her back again...but this time with happiness and relief that she is fine...She hugged him back but she is too weak to able to seat so she lay down again...

He helps her to settle in bed so that she can feel comfortable and takes out his phone and dailed doctor's number..."hello...main sanskar bol raha hoon...swara ko hosh aa gaya he...bass abhi abhi aaya...ok doc...ji main usse tym pe dawai de dunga dnt wrry...ok thank you doctor"..he cuts the call and keeps his phone on silent as he dnt want anyone to disturb him again..he speaks in his mind...i had to tell u a lots of things swara...i'll nt let anyone to interrupt us.
He goes to her...she is still lying but looks much better now...she smiles at him and just about to say something bt he stops her by putting his finger on her lips...He holds her hand and his eyes filled up with water...he starts rubbing her palm and looks at her "kyun gayi thi tum jungle main...dimag kharab he tumhara????batake nahi ja sakti thi...main bhi chalta tumhare saath...akele akele jaane ki kya zarurat thi???superwoman samajhti ho khudko????haan agar kuch ho jata to????par nahi...tum kyun meri baat manogi??? dushman hoon na main tumhara??? tumhe to bas harbaqt apni manmani karni hoti he...kabhi bhi meri baat nahi sunti ho...aglibaar aisa kiya na to dekhlena mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...I'm nt talking to u swara...bohot careless ho gayi ho tum...mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni he." he speaks all in one breath and moves a lil from swara's side with a sad and upset face...

Swara makes a pout and trying to hold his hand but he moves and making faces...She is just about to call his name but that bandage in her neck ispulled up a lil and she screams in pain... 'aah!! ouch"..
Sanskar suddenly turns to her and gets worried as he can see her in pain in neck with that bandage...he remembered over the phone doc told him that she is not able to speak properly atleast today as that thread caused a major injury and her vocal chord is affected by it a lil...so its better to not to talk much atleast for one or two days...
He holds her and makes her sit by giving a support of pillows at her back and asks her to not to speak anything...He cups her face in his hand and kisses her forehead.
She asked him by making signs why she is nt able to speak anything????he uderstands the state and clams her down and asks her to not speak anything now...there is no need to speak anything as he can read her eyes and simply dont need any words to understand what she is trying to convey...
He gives her medicines and just about to leave from her side bt she holds his hand and looking at him in a requesting manner. He assured her that he is not going anywhere...he is just going to bring the dinner for both of them as without having it she can't take the further medicines...she nodded a ok...
He comes back with a plate in his hand and a glass of milk...he again kisses her forehead holds her one cheek and smiles...she smiles back too.
He feeds her with his own hands and she is feeding him from the plate...both of them are having some eye conversations with each other as they both knows what is going to happen today if he doesn't reach there on time???? and suddenly sanskar hugs her tightly again remebering the jungle scenario and asks her not to leave him like this ever..."tumhe pata he main kitna darr gaya tha...dont u dare to do this again...zindagi bhar ka saath dena he tumhe aur backsetep nahi chalega...blo manzur he ki nahi.." She smiled and nodded a yes too...and ctaches her ears and says i will not do this again...He holds her in his embrace and both of them breathe a sigh of relief in each other solace...
THE END...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow beautifuly & emotnaly written.
Sanskar's pain was jst so much & u write his feelings so well.
Love it.

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