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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Chapter 3:

New chapter! Yayy!!

That title😳 I guess it is not just for the cracks that are beginning to appear in RagYa relationship but also for the breaking down of the barriers Sanskaar has carefully constructed around himself.

Kavita & Sanskaar's relationship here begs the question which is most usual in such cases: What does he see in her? 😆 She appears too very shallow & his affections, I won't call it love, seem superficial as well, since throughout that conversation he appears preoccupied with the map, key & enemies. Also, after four years it looks like it is the loss of his credibility that has affected him more than losing Kavita in that manner. Also, Kaveri's story: why will a person from Sanskaar's kingdom tell her something about their Prince when the success of the elopement can bring more shame to the Prince & his family & thus be of advantage to the enemy

Oh I could just see Swara's face when he threw those flowers He can be a real jerk at times, but the guy is focused 😛

You might have checked our convo on WA. Yesterday Anna, Yukti & me were drooling over a mad sunny from the past episodes. So imagine my delight in reading this scene where he turns on the fountains & is dancing about 🤣 It was so easy to imagine Varun doing this 🤣 And then in his usual observant ways he studies the effect Swara is having on Laksh, Ragini... & lastly on himself too😳 That urge to bundle her up in a blanket away from lustful eyes😳😳

That line about chaos reminds me of Baelish & Sanskaar sure seems to channel some of the man's cunning. "Chaos isnt a pit, its a ladder." 😈 & the chaos has begun 😈

Waiting for the next chapter!

Edited by The.Lannister - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Great work
thanks for the pm

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APUDEEP

@Apudip

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Hi shruti, this story is too engrossing to miss any part. Interesting update. Do pm me for the next part please.😳

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Shruti...
Chapter 3 throws light on the past of sanskar,ya that was dark past
ragini is getting negetive vives day by day and sanskar knows that
swara is disturbed by laksh's behaviour
And sanskar is attracted by swara(possessive too)
I am waiting for the twist you will provide to this story
upate soon dearie
love
simi 😊

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#175

loved both the past and present parts.

i can understand why sanskar believes it is laksh. he cannot see kavita as having played with him. but something make me feel that is so. i do not think anyone really saw her dead body. the drug i feel was only in her drink, meant for him and nothing was in his. the mother daughter duo played him well i assume for money at the bare minimum.

and then we come to the present. swara still drawing him in and yes him feeling repealed by it, because he hates and may be fears what she is bringing out in him. he tried to protect his sanctum and in doing so he exposed something that matters more to him. you have beautifully portrayed that change in the feeling when he wants to protect swara from laksh and even himself. how her innocence has pulled at him and how he fears what he has unleashed...though this may have been preciously what he once wanted, now that is the last thing he wants.

i wonder how he will try to step in and protect swara, i feel he will, because it will eat at him more the more laksh and ragini try to get swara.

cannot wait for the next one. 👏 👏 👏

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Awesome..
The dark past finally revealed..
The present part was superb..
Waiting for story to unfold 😊

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dilwali

@dilwali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Hi Shruti it was as usual ur best work n u r my fav no 1 n thanks for pm and coming to story update it did so much in terms of secret what happened to prince sanskar n also how Ragini is jealous n again u showed cosmic connection between swasan overall a very nice update

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Awesome update my friend. You unfold the mystery behind sanskar's behavior. The cosmic connection between swasan was awesome. Ragini's jealousy was clearly visible today. Waiting for your next update

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

awesome update shruthi👏👏

So Sanskaar's past revealed..lost his love, Map and labelled as traitor ..sad 😕.. Wonder who was real culprit..

Sanskaar struggling with his conflicting emotions towards Swara ..amazingly penned down ..You have perfectly captured the essence behind each character as they are in SR their portrayal in this series👏👍🏼

Looking forward for next update😊

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#180

Shru,

Another great chapter - the title (I am struck by the way it resonates of another word - fractals and also reflective of self repeating pattern that would play out in their lives - of love, betrayal and loss - albeit with different players and the continued cosmic connection references - when Swara was peering into the dark windows to the pink stone chamber, did Sanskaar feel that she was actually peering into his mind / soul ?)

So the identity of the vile woman and her cursed daughter are revealed - well the names were expected but the characterization - so aptly etched. So one question, is Kavita the innocent victim and is really dead or else...

The conclusion to this chapter - it was like the stage for the confrontations was set - and Sanskaar - reminded me of Mark Antony's soliloquy when he cited "Cry 'Havoc,' and let slip the dogs of war" (Julius Caesar - Act 3, Scene 1)

Nyna

PS: This is me after reading the chapter:(just substitute chapter for book)😊