The simmering pain: Raglak STORY Note 11/3/16 - Page 37

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Hey ! I don't remember if I have ever commented on ur story or not but today ur update compelled me to do so 😉
Important things first 😆
I know it's a Ragya story but I would be delighted if u pair up Ragini and Abhay. I really wish that they get married and then Lakshya can repent or get redeemed later 😆
Secondly I just love your story 😳
The way u have expressed Ragini's turmoil, her pain, her confrontation with Sanskaar, the whole angle of Kavita turning into the next Ragini is just brilliant 👏 👏
Your story captures her struggle and her emotions so well that u feel for her and u connect with her character CZ she is not unidimensional 👏
I love how u r able to make a pun on Swara's poking and ever so mahaan yet stupid nature 😆
I have always connected with Ragini and have hoped that she gets a person who loves her selflessly 😊
That whole angle on how Sanskaar never felt the regret for what he did to Ragini once he was with Swara was also well brought and is something much needed in the show 😊
Waiting eagerly for ur next update 😊
In love with your story ❤️

P.S. I m sorry I m saying all this in d same comment. Can u write an equally passionate story on Sangini? 😳 I m a huge Sangini shipper and I feel only ur writing can do justice to them ! Sorry for the long rant 😆
I m Mihikaa btw 😊
What is ur name?

hi mihika...
Thank a lot for your comment and letting me know that my story isxunderstood and connected to u all readers. This insight is very much necessary for me as a writer...and well am a huge sangini shipper too...I have a short story for them too...but I won't be able to write before I complete this one...my motto one at a time...yupp I will surely write on them...
Coming to Abhini...abhay + ragini = abhini...well I won't divulge in track much but it's a complicated story...and being ragya centric doesn't mean ragini can't be with abhay...so u will have to read till end to know who she ends up with...and the points u put across we're all valid and frankly I left watching the show after I lost all hope for sangini...but recently...raglak started intriguing me...more than them temish are making me write this story...my ragya is based on them and not the show...I don't even watch the show...so my story is pretty much off the show track in it's own league...
And next will be a sangini story by me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 29
Laksh was gazing at his beautiful wife,not at all interested in waking her conscious. He was busy drinking the wet beauty under him. Yellow was def her color. She had an amazing figure. He bent and liked a drop on her forehead. He became hungry for more. He started kissing the little water droplets away which made ragini sigh. Laksh was busy drinking water drops on her cheeks, neck..he could hear the fast loud rhythm of her heart. Her bathrobe had loosened a bit showing a little bossom. He wanted to trace and drink that water line dissapearing inside. Her smell was causing havoc with his testerones...she was very curvy,full..perfect...he madly wanted to remove her robe and drink in her beauty...the slight show of her bossoms was making him ache...
He felt ragini moving under him...she was waking up...he had to move carefully...he didn't want her to faint anymore...he only wanted her to awake fully so that he could finally have her to all himself and kiss her to oblivion...to punish her for defying him the intimacy for so many days...to punish for daring to not inform him about her whereabouts...ragini opened her eyes slowly and cautiously...and she saw her husband smirking...she looked straight in her eyes frozenly. Very gingerly she picked up her palm and touched his face very softly as if it was a dream...and it would just go away.. with a slight smile...
L: u know u can do more than just giving me a fleeting touch..he said smirkingly to an embarrassed ragini.
Ragini came back to senses..and started to wriggle under him..
R: L what do u think you are doing?? Help me untangle all these sheets...we r stuck man.
L: who said we r stuck?? Am toh enjoying. U work if u want to get free...y should I?
With that he turned himself down in turn pulling her up on him..now she was lying completely on top of him pressed from chest to toe to him. She could feel his awareness and so could he. She felt way to embarrassed and had gone all blushing at the intimacy..but laksh was just gloating and enjoying her blush knowing he was the cause of it...he was loving this intimacy...and had no intention of letting her go anywhere...so he held her on to his body tightly not giving her space to move. He liked her being pressed on him..he was loving dominating her and the way she was avoiding looking at him...what a shy wife...hmmm soon very soon he was gonna change that all...
R: a little irritatingly " this isn't fair. Am feeling suffocated...please please let me up...please laksh...am feeling weird like this..
L: what's weird in it...? Its pretty natural to feel like that...am a hot man and u a hot woman...obv...it's meant to be like that.. duhhh...
R: please L...please...she told pleadingly...
L turned again this time she back under him...he was fully holding her hands above her had with a single hand and controlling her movements from one leg over her...he bent and kissed under her ear lobes..ragini felt a sudden spark everywhere...her eyes became huge and started closing on self accordance...breathing deeply...she curled her toes to control herself..laksh kept on licking her in soft spot...feeling all her actions and breath..Very huskily..
L: if u keep on saying please like this...I won't be able to control baby...ur please is turning me on...mmm...u r smelling delicious...ur skin is glowing tasting like honey...I don't feel like stopping...
R: laksh...please let me get up...I request you..
L: ragini..don't panic...relax...take a deep breath and just close your eyes...just relax...
Ragini does as he said...she starts feeling a little better...laksh is untangling them and stands up. He gives her his hands to hold but she ignores it and stands by herself...getting back her strength..she glares at him angrily...
R: how do u happen to come so early today?. Maa said you we're bvery busy with your project and hence always came late...had I known u would be here early...
L: u would have stolen my view had u known..how bad is that? He was smirking at her discomfort. She was continuously pulling her robe down again..alas it didn't help much to his happiness..he was getting all the view he wanted...
R: look laksh all will be back home..I need to change can u please...she stopped there...she couldn't speak more...he had again removed his shirt and thrown away somewhere...a night few days back came into her memory...why cant butterflies stop humming in my stomach every time he become shirtless...she gulped hard...
L: change..yeah let's...change...
R: how will I? U plz go out?
L: why? I won't..it's my room..
R: then how will i change?
L: ur prob not mine...u think..
R: at least let me take out my clothes...
L: am waiting for y to do that...when will u take off those clothes...he asked quirking an eyebrow haughtily...he had a very mischevious smile...
R: held in to her gown very tightly and securely...am talking about sari from wardrobe...not my...not..my..robe..
L: ouch...and here I was waiting..never mind soon that day will come too wifey..
R: ermmm...nnnooo...I mean move aside u blocking my wardrobe..
L: I wish to keep on looking at you...u look so tasty now...
R:..fine keep on staring...u won't let me change...I will walk out like this only in a robe..then let me see your smile..
L: seriously...I would love to watch ur moving ass in that robe..
R: what the he'll has happened to you?? U warent like this before...this is not what a decent man does?
L: exactly this is what any hot blooded husband does seeing his wife in a bath gown all wet...tch tch...u need to learn so much ragini...don't worry..I will teach you everything...
R: fine u won't let me change..I will keep sitting in bathroom till I get my clothes...with that she stomp her feet like a stubborn kid and walked in the bathroom and loudly banged the door shut to show off her anger...laksh couldn't stop laughing at the childishness of his wife...he laughed out loud holding his stomach making ragini more irritated...happy holiday in bathroom he shouted...and she kept on kicking her foot in anger and calling him all names in the world...after few min laksh knocked and gave her a yellow sari...
R: laksh where is the blouse...how do I come out like this..??
L: really...I don't have time to find ur blouse..come out like this only...this is pay back time...go disappearing and now pay..u
R: I can't come out like this
L: u have no choice wifey...he was snickering and holding back his laughter. He felt so relaxed after ages it seems.he felt happy.waiting to see how his wife would plead now and he would enjoy.
After almost 15 min...ragini came out..
L: was surprised..and then shocked...she had worn his shirt with a knot on her waist and folded the sleeves...and worn it like a blouse so stylishly...
R stood in front of him feeling proud at her idea...
R: so Mr. Hubby let's go...people are calling us...and don't I look pretty...Mr. hubby am not just beauty...I have brains too and with that she left him to go downstairs...and he had a stupid grin on his face...man this ragini was too much fun..

Edited by dreamyjennice - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RamyaSK

It was sooo much cute...the dream dance of Raglak was mindblowing...so much much cute..I loved it very very much..I've ur ff in my favs list..Plz update the next part soon..So much in love with ur ff..

thank a lot...hope u keep loving it..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: alisha17

Awesome update

Can't wait to see how Laksh will react when he finds out about Abhay

boom...fireworks..😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sandiab

Oh man that was utter perfection I cnt wait for the next chapter

awe thank so much...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb update.. 👍🏼

😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: azira07

wow too good superb and what is that mystery Yaar *_* and waiting raglak intimacy lol

u will have to keep reading to know the mystery😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothirgamaya

Lovely update..
So Ragini was there for real..i thought it was just lakshyas imagination..so couldn't enjoy the sweet moments completely..i will have to re-read..I am totally confused..whats up with this Ragini?
Aao na is one of my most fav songs..its visualization is also very beautiful with gorgeous Aswarya rai n vivek oberoy..its from the movie "Kyon ho Gaya na"

thank for correcting the movie name...yupp she's back and it's all happening in real...as for mystery...and AbhIni...u will have to continue reading...I won't disclose so soon...so how did u like my cute updates..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess2791

Sorry for late comment i have read u r story after so many days it is wonderful. I loved very much laksha in your story i always want laksha to try to impress ragini and fall love with her. Do continue soon

awe..my laksh is crazy,bad ass,go getter...don't worry...u will like this story...keep on commenting and reading please
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Posted: 9 years ago
So intense ..so romantic..

What will happen...when Laksh finds out about abhay

I think a possessive...dark Laksh is in store for us...


I am also an evil kid!
Edited by dewcute - 9 years ago

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