FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149) - Page 86

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Posted: 10 years ago
so they got their man.. dude apte was quick.. no wonder he is the God's hand...
im sure swara would be safe with apte.. after all, sanskar's opinion about the older man couldnt be wrong...

mav seriosly is brave enough to open his big mouth time and again to irk sanskar...😛

Gabriel being himself was able to extract the valuable info that he got get from that man...

and it wasnt really a surprise that gabriel let the man live.. but looks like big plan coming up.. specially with the way he asked the man to forget about the meeting...


waiting for next part... will stalk this thread again tomorrow..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow it was super duper fantabulous hilarious awesome update.
You know i am totally in love with this brother duo.
wow maverick was so good today awww he is really so adorable. I cant stop myself from admiring him. All in all again a best update by you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi😉
Superb maddycious update😆.
Apte was too quick,off course When The God of underworld wants something,it must be easier for him.Maddy always wanted to join the adventure.. But still hearing shona's name,he was ready to quit the fun...family guy..😊.Apte's monologue regarding Maddy was funny.😆

Swara understands her man and best friend perfectly. She beliefs apte as sanskar has Faith on him.well it was good that Apte showed a fatherly side to both sanskar and swara,calling him son also.😊..but our man was not ready to leave his kitten with him,and still he says he doesn't love her ...how silly...😳

The whole dealing part with the man was too much fun.The bang bang entry,Gabriel's serious tone with Maddy's dramatic version with extra cheese toping...😆.my favorite part was that when Gabriel repeated Maddy's line to the man and when Maddy was worried for the future family planning of him...😃😆...that was too hilarious..

Then that weird thought of Gaby watching dance of naked Maddy...ewww😆 ...Gabby is right Maddy is delusional ..
Waiting for the next update
Love,
Simi..***.jhaapiii**
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey nimmi...interesting chapter...
Loved maddy n gabriel conversation...they r soo cute n funny...
Want swasan moments plzzz...

Waiting for next chapter...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi..
You updated this.. I was so waiting to read the next chapter.. Everytime I would get an email notification I would open the link to check if you'd updated or not so glad you updated..

Whatte chapter I'd say.. It was classy.. You have a tact to inculcate humor in a dark environment too.. The guy was probably scared outta his wits seeing two assassins, one of whose contract he'd taken but the constant banter between Sanskaar and Maddy kept me entertained..

These two are just too good.. Gabriel goes for classy and style and the younger guy would go bang bang.. Yet they do the perfect gang bang..

Loved seeing Angel's concern for his kitten.. He's yet so possessive for her.. Wouldn't leave her to anyone's protection.. He trusted Apte enough to let him in on the plan but not enough to guard his kitten.. He be love..

Can't wait where this story will progress to.. Will wait to read the next part soon..

Love,
Kashmi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update 😊
Loved Maddy and Gabriel partnership..
Maddys continuous banter is funny
Can't wait to knw Wat happens nxt..
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
yippeee
its wonder!!!!
but y m having a gut feeling dat the secret partner with ram Prasad is none other then...apte
hopefully m wrong
heck I want to be wrong
if its not apte den for sure dat other partner is the minister rane
m I ri8 or m I ri8?
hehehe
but dear hats off
I m falling for our beloved maverick after every update
keep it up
n do pm me the ending also
plzzz dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great ..
The hunting starts again... But this time but for Gabriel but for the traitor...
Nice..
The fight was awesome...
The talk with the man was awesome.. The Gabriel style of making his prey to make them fear till death is wonderful...

Great.. Swara and apte fatherly Bond would be great to see..

Continue soon..
Thank you for PM..
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Posted: 10 years ago
nimmie,
ur updates are always awesome... huh.. i love this maddy guy... he is so sweet and caring...i just luv this guy...then our angel and his kitten... they are always sweet... i have no words for them.. and the other surprise... apte... he swore on his babu to protect gaby's kitten.. sooo nice of him...last but not the least... u r awesome dear... do write more... i would love to read the sequel of angel if u r planning to write one... pls.. pls do write one if u can...luv u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super - Duper Awesome
Amazing Update
Loved It
Post Next Part Super Soon
Thanks for the PM

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