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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry Nimmie I am so late to comment on your beautiful updates.
Rana died. That was painful,really. I always liked the bond between Sanskaar and his baba even though he chose DP above his son. Nevertheless Sanskaar didn't needed more than some minutes to prove his innocence. I was terrified that Maddy may be a traitor but you once again saved it. So now Mav and Gabby is in the search of the Villian and Apte is helping them out. I missed Kitten and Sanskaar in this update but it was worth the read. Waiting for more updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally unres for both 64 and 65 on pager 127
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Posted: 10 years ago
When will you update Nimmi I'm waiting for it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi! 🤗
haha! this over enthusiastic Maddy! totally like a child rushing to try a new video game! :P
Gaby could have practiced breath in breath out here! :P I can understand his state though! :)
but as Gaby is full of surprises! Ain't he, Maddy!! while him sparing that man(who was he? he was shooter or not?? I don't think he would spare that shooter at all.) giving replies to Maddy in Maddy's dialogues was so funny! 🤣
by the way! it seems , finally, Gaby has accepted him as his lil brother. :)
that interaction between Swasan , Maddy and apte was also good!
Nice update Nimmi! continue soon. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Updated😳.

Aren't you girls.. Angels.🤗.
Love you. and love you loads. and then some more.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi
This was really great.
U bght in Bozo again. I love you for this.
Maddy is such a hilarious assassin. He made Apte to climb a drain pipe for excitement. Apte s reactions and internal struggle about Maddy was too good.
Bozo nd Maddy in one frame. What a deadly combination. That was a comic encounter and as usual ur comic writing is great. Maddy made himself Bozos best friend. Wah. Wld like to see more of their bromance. Maddy wants to exchange the magazine collection, he can change even a serious situation to a comic one. All credits to you Nimmi for making him like that.
Bozo can hack into any aa count. Thts grt. He has been always useful to these good underworld guys .

So now the partner in crime is Rane, it was expected. You know what, I read Rana in place of Rane nd that was like a shock to me. I thgt u hv given Gabriel a new mission again, to salvage his Baba name.this is also OK.
Let's see how these team of 5 work out and reach till RP, nw that DP is in the team.

Continue soon.
Edited by Sanavi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi!!!🤗

I was in such a bad mood yesterday and you managed to make me laugh with your update! Thank you so much! 🤗

Sanskar and his Kitten managed to pull the right chords of my heart like always. I love the way he cares for her. And I love the beautiful family.

Loved Apte's musings about the sweet little family. Swara has worked her magic on him too. He is already so fond of her. I'm sure he will do everything in his power to help them and keep them safe.

Maddy really loves irritating Apte, doesn't he? 😆 He made the old man climb all the way up through a pipe! No wonder Apte wants to smack him real bad.

Bozo-Maddy! 🤣 That was epic! So our dear Maddy has self-proclaimed himself as the best friend of Bozo the same way he did with Shona. And he is already planning to loot banks and exchange magazine collections with his new found best friend! 😆 He even managed to make Bozo comfortable around an Assasin?! 😲 Great job Maddy! 👏

So the partner, as expected, turned out to be Rane. But when will they come to know know that he is only the second fiddle and the master mind is someone else? Someone much more closer to them? Someone who acted like family and stabbed them from the back?! All hell will break loose once Gabriel gets his hands on the traitor. He will regret being born. The Angel will definitely avenge the death of his Baba.

And here comes Durga Prasad Maheshwari, the God of underworld! It would be interesting to see how he affects the dynamics of the game. Like Swara, I too have mixed feelings towards him. I do feel for the father in him and I appreciate whatever he did for Rana and his family. But I ate him for using Sanky for his own benefit. I don't know what to feel for him anymore. But I will be looking forward to see him interacting with Sanskar, Swara and Maddy.

Waiting for the next part sweetie! Update soon. Thanks a lot for the pm.

Loads and loads of love, ❤️🤗
Ashi. ⭐️
Edited by Cinderella3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey nimmi..😊
Maddy n sansku return...shona happy to see them both...loved swasan...apte watching them all eith soo much love n concern..😳😃😊
Such an hillarious chapter...😆..loved bozo n maddy conversation..😉.. they are adorable...loved it...n apte how he was calming himself from not killing maddy exactly like sansku...👏😳😆

And last part...dp coming himself...it was shocking...

Waiting to see every ones reaction...n next chapter...👏
Love
Talia
Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res,
And this is just not done, you update faster than I unres for the previous chapters.😭
Love you for the same🤗

Nyna

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And Bozo is back - with his over the top reactions - especially to Maddy's declaration of him being a friend and Maddy willing to do anything as a favour (Bozo forgot all about breathing, he was ready to pass out at the rapidly spiral out situation)🤣 And then proceeds to bond over Playboy magazines.😡 Well boys will be boys😉

Apte's reactions to Maddy - expected, if Gaby boy is in two minds and sometimes feels that Maddy should be murdered, okay, at least, beaten into silence, Apte is absolutely justified. 😆

Rane was a tad expected but then would love to see Gaby's and Apte and Durga Prasad's reaction when they find out the true traitor. Which brings us back to square One - waiting for the next update😊

Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Machi... 🤗 awesome as always.. Loved.. It..

Soo mave and Gaby are back home... Apte.. Guarding Swara.. Cool..

Apte admiring trio. Was superb. I loved it..

Bozo man.. Im imagining how Bozo.. Mave apte.. Meeting.. It was awesome.. I'm laughing... Re

Mave.. He is my kind... Ha... Ha... Ha... Climbing pipie.. Of raised building.. I love aptes reaction.. For mave madness... I'm falling for apte too..

I know man it is rane... 👏 this for me for guessing correctly.. I'm maverick... 😉 self praising...

Love you soo much..

Lol...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 10 years ago

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