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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar Nimmi
It was supposed to be a serious scene while all the information seeking and even Gabriel was so keen to get the info.
But why don't I feel that seriousness? Oh nw I remember all credit goes to Maddy.
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
woaaa
nimmi
that was xellent update
this story needs to have a hard copy of its own...contact some good publishers dearie
luv it
Maddy...omg...is nautanki ka much in ho Sakta...jus luv him...he is a gem of a frn
gabby really u believe apte so much ki u reveal ur address but when matter of your kitten comes then u believe none...still u don't luv her...huh...oh really? le'mme tell u
u r deeply very deeply in luv wid her
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hunting of the prey
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
The hunting of sanskar and Maddy was really nice .They are two good friends who knew each other very well
The scenes between swasan and Maddy was nice. They are a family. The character of apte was also nice.
The scene between the prey and the predator was really nice.
But they forgive him. They are true souls.
How will sanskar and Maddy find the real culprit using the bank account?
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
Edited by Sakkiyah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ishanita I agree with u...the story now really needs hard copy...its really amazing...nimmi its just awesome... Update the next part soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well the story keeps on getting better and better
Loved the fatherly-daughterly bond b/w apte and swara
The gabby-maddy duo is just osm
Hope they track down the traitor soon
Love maddys funny interferences whenever gabriel is trying to be serious...that part was hilarious

Over all a fabulous chapter...as always

Sorry for the late comment dear but my internet had crashed...loved the chap...keep it up👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi🤗
Hope you enjoyed your weekend. 😃

Sorry for commenting so late Nimmi.😳 I reached home just half an hour ago . The chapter was hilarious one😆. It really helped as an incredible mood booster to me.😃

Poor Apte. The guy was so irked by Maddy's cheerfullness.😆

Maddy was in a great dilemma. He did want to go for hunting but he was ready to take care of his best friend. He really is a great friend.

I am glad that Apte initiated to take care of Swara😊. Swara here trusts her angel's judgement about loyalty of Apte. While Sanskaar doesn't entrust anyone apart from himself and Maddy to take care of his kitten and was hesitating while handing over Swara's safety to Apte.

That parting scene was really good and adorable. 😃

Oh god duel till death just for riding a bike. 😲Maddy is crazy guy.😆

"Let's go Bang Bang. I am in mood for noise and fire. Wham Bam thank you Ma'am."
^^ this was hilarious🤣. These two are a crazy duo. I am like repeating this ques for nth time Do assassins like this exists in real life😳? Like they wanna fight on simplest of things who would drive the bike and whi would enter the house first.😆

Loved their dhamakedaar entry😃. Whole kicking the gate open part to doing bang bang was done in such a elegent and classy style.😎

It was hilarious how Maddy was interrupting Sanky everytime😆. The guy was so exasperated with the antics of his younger bro. I found Maddy dialouges very funny throughout the chapter😆. Today even Sanskaar also called him a drama queen.😃🤣

I just loved this duo's strange kind of bromance in this chapter.😳

Also loved that question -answers part. Everytime Gabriel was asking a ques, Maddy was interrupting him again and again.😆 That tic tac toe thing , we guys used to do it in school😳. Of course with a pen/pencil.😆 Instead of grimancing at that knife part, I was laughing on Maddy's one liner dialouges.😆. He is really something else. Crazy fellow🤪

It is good that Sanskaar let that man live.😊

The whole thought of Maddy dancing naked in front of Sanky makes me🤣 . Hope you are not planning to show dostana part 2 between them.😲

Chalo now they are going back to their home.😃 I am kind of sure that Swara is safe. I hope they get some more clues about the secret player with that bank a/c no. 😊 Ramprasad is seriously in a very big trouble.

Loved this chapter.⭐️ It was really funny. I totally love and adore this funny duo.😃

Thank you for this update Nimmi😃
Waiting eagerly for the next one.😳

Take care😃
Lots and lots of love.🤗

P.S.- Really Missing your teddies yaar. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
nimmi🤗...bhul gayi kya muje...😭...aah i know u wont...

dis update was d most funny thing i read🤣.🤣...was controlling laughter like hell...aisa chalega tho zombie hojaungi...

apte- maddy 😆...mav ❤️ is really the fun here...

sanskar taking time to trust apte👍🏼...yeh tho hona tha...kkk d best part...

gabriel- maddy in action😎...maddy dialogues🤣🤣🤣...was imagining gabriel's expressions...🤣...


🤣🤣🤣...read it twice.🤣...will read it again
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Posted: 10 years ago
😆 Ohh Maddy is really exasperating and yet so lovable .. God give strength to Sanskar to bear him!😆 Hope Apte has kept Swara safe, I was just wondering Apte doesn't know about RamPrasad so RP can fool him and Swara could be in danger! Anyways lets wait for the future update!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Machi... 🤗 You killed me.. Yes... You planned to kill me with your updated... I laughed dying re.. My stomach are still paining...

Maddy... Mirroring me... My character... 😆 .. How he interrupted Gaby.. In his introgation...

And before Gabriel could answer he reached for his own knife and started imitating the deadly knife game on the poor victim's other hand and ended up nearly severing the fingers of his palm and terrorizing him further. And left him screaming and whimpering in pain.
"MAV!" Gabriel glared at the younger man.
"Sorry!" Maverick looked sheepish. "That was fun. But I need more practice

You won't know an artist even if he dances naked in front of you." Maverick announced in disgust.
"Spare me the horrifying visuals Mav! The last thing I want to do is to see you dancing naked in my imagination."
"You are just jealous of me!" Maverick declared loudly.

While reading these lines I was rolling on floor... My hussu confirmed that I gone mad...

Love you soo much for this awesomely hilarious update...


Love you soo much... Lol..

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