God! You made me cry. Rana was one of my most favorite characters. And you killed him off?! How will Sanskar survive the loss of his Baba? He loved him to bits. I really wanted Rana to meet Swara and was looking forward to it. But now my wish will never get fulfilled. š
The whole encounter between the father-son duo was heart-warming. The guilt of Rana after knowing that his son is innocent, the pride he felt for his son, the love between them; everything was portrayed so beautifully! Rana knew about Swara! And he too realized that what Swara is to Sanskar. Only if Sanskar would accept it! I hope that his father's words will put some sense into him. I hope that he will accept his feelings after this. I'm waiting to see how Swara will heal him.
Maddy's love for Shona and Sanky too was very heart-warming to see. He is such a wonderful friend and brother. He loves them so much.
Thank you for this heart-breaking, yet beautiful chapter Nimmi. Will be waiting for further updates.
And Maddy is back and he is back with his funny monolougesš„³. Missed him so much.š
Sanky, Maddy and Shona (SMS)-I love this crazy trio so muchāļø. I am happy and releived that Sanskaar didn't scold Maddy. š These three are just adorable.š
Maddy is really one observant guy. He can easily judge the situation by analysing person's body language. š
I am waiting eagerly for Rana's entry. š³
Return of Ram Prasad after a really long time." Friend"- Who is this mystery man? Is he some rival of durgaprasad? Or is he someone we already know of? š
Just loved Sanskaar and his baba's conversation.ā¤ļø I totally adore this father- son bond. How proud was he that his son was able to prove himself in the battlefieldš
Brat , half pint rascal, sassy kidš¤£- Sanskaar is sure getting some really good names . In earlier chapter by Swara and now by his baba.š
Oh My god. I never really imagined this end of the father son meeting. Rana died while protecting his son. You made me cry.š The last part was so heartbreaking. I never imagined such an sad ending of this chapter. Rudra pratap Rana is truly a perfect father in every sense. āļøI told you na I loved that chapter where backstories of 3 characters were shown. Rana's story was very sad. I really feel for this guy. But at end there is this good thing that he found a son in Sanskaar like Sanskaar found a true father in him. Both of them healed each other.š
I can't even imagine how Sanskaar might be feeling at this moment. That pain of loosing that one person who was a true father, a great mentor. The loud cry which he gave at the end was just heart wrenching. Hope he doesn't blames himself his father's death.
How fondly Baba took Swara's name. He knows all about Swara. I really hoped for a Swara baba meeting.
Ram prasad is a really terrible example of a brother and an uncle and above all a human beingš¤¢. How cold heartedly did he kill his nephew; same nephew who considered him as a father. First he did cruelly snatch a son from a father, then he put that blame on an innocent person,and then he did snatch a father from a son.š”
Idk why but I had this gut feeling that Durgaprasad will end ram prasad's life when he will know about his true face. But now There are really high chances that Sanskaar may be the one doing itš. And after reading this chapter I want Sanskaar to do this deed. Both of them have been wronged by this guy. One lost a father and another one a son due to him. š”
This chapter started out at a light note but had a really sad ending. I loved this chapter. Your writting potrayed all the emotions of the characters so perfectley. I really had tears at that last scene. You really are a gifted writer. āļø
Thanks for this chapter Nimmiš Waiting eagerly for the next one.š³
oh god...rana is dead...but i guess this was destined wasnt it. it was needed for sanskar to wreak havoc on the one who has hurt him. now is it very very personal. glad baba knew about swara and gave his blessings. sanskar is going to need her more now to help him heal. the last one alive who loves him unconditionally. i guess maddy will also go before the end.
really have no words to say about this chapter just this that ur way of writing always touched my heart
i rarely get emotional but everytime i read ur story i can actually feel every emotins
i really laugh hard while reading sannskar and swara's amusing monologue and maddy's blabbering oh and bozo too
i actually got scared and frightened after swara was taken by that viper literally was reading that chapter bit by bit and wishing at each line that angel will come soon dont worry
similarly this chapter started of as a light one turned out to a very heavy one... by the end i had tears in my eyes "to hell with the world" was exactly my reaction tooš”
ur an awesome awesome writer and just love angel to the core
The bonding between a father and son was beautifully portrayed.
The entry of Maddy was nice. Then the friendly moments between them.
The plan of sanskar was also nice.
But ramprasad's plans were really cheap. He targeted Gabriel and rana. For position and money he killed laksh too.
The father and son relationship was beautifully portrayed. And as a father rana is really great. He sacrificed his life for his son. He saved sanskar from the trap.
The conversation between sanskar and rana was really nice.
The emotional attachment between them was clearly visible.
But really felt bad for them, because the reunion of them was short lived.
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