FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#761

Res... I unres both the chapters soon ... First i go and read new chapter now🥳. Love ya Nimmi . You are the Sweetest🤗

Unres...

This has to be the most painful chapter Nimmi... I really hope this is the last chapter where i have to part with a character ... And i really hope Mav is safe till the end😉... But i understand why you did it too. This chapter might be heart breaking but it was kind of given ever since i knew about Gabriel thinking of Rana has his father and also when i know this two will face each other one day. Even without so much pre warning signs i still hoped that Rana was just injured and not dead.. I have to talk about it before getting on to the chapter .. hope i didnt ramble a lot😆.

I really love the reunion of Mav with his friend and brother😆. Thankfully Sansakr didnt unleash his Anger on him for not following his order. The moment i know it the faceoff between the two . i knew Rana is not making it past this chapter . And you have to insert RP scene to nail the already established fact . I hate RP... Next too the Viper ofcourse no one can dispel my hatred for him even if he is dead.😡

I was already worried about Rana and you give me such an beautiful father -Son scene❤️. After that scene how could anyone wants this two of them to be seperated.😭😭 But seperate they did due to an Father protecting his son. 👏

I also loved the fact you lessened the pain by giving him an reunion with his family. So Sanskar has his kitten and Rana has his daughter and wife. But still i wish we got rana and swara meet up just like how i still wish Bozo sees Mav...

Sanskar pain was heart breaking💔. This guy really loves with his all . Him giving up on living only to run after hearing his father voice that was so heart warming. I cant wait to see Gabriel finding about RP. That guy is so dead.

Sorry for the late Unres Nimmi... Love ya and you are the Sweetest 🤗

Edited by NitaReid - 10 years ago

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#762

Machi... 🤗 ... 😭 I'm crying... Hnnn... Rana died.. It's a Heartbreaker...

His gut feeling was sensing danger. But his heart was beyond any feelings barring agony and loss. Loss of a loved one. A father who loved him enough to give up his life for him. A father who died to protect his soul son. A father who paid ultimate price for his child.
The best father a child could wish for from God.
Rudra Pratap Rana; the soul father of Sanskaar.

I loved these lines soo touchy...

I can't overcome that sorrow re... You re a good... Friend... Don't kill Maddy...

Ok who is that RP partner don't say it is Maddy...

Love you sooo much...

Lol...

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#763

This is going wonderfully. I hope Rana will rest in peace, he was a marvelous father, a great man. And I do hope Sanskar can work out who the traitor is soon enough, Ram Prasad is getting to my nerves now. Continue soon Nimmie dear,

Love,

Sakura

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SIMI

@simsen23

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#764

Res..for having the lunch

Unres

Nimmi..

😭feeling very sad for sanskar...

He had to bear a lot of pain always...

How I wished his baba will meet his kitten..

Then there will be a happy family.But this destiny is so cruel ..

Maddy's entry was as usual cool..

He is overwhelmed with the love of swasan..

Then those words of sanskar regarding his father.

He knows his baba very well.

The ram prashad and the other person(may be range) conversation..how dirty game they are playing.

They took that most precious person young sanskar ever had ..

That was painful...

He was so happy to meet him and how his baba was proud of him after knowing the truth.

But...then sanskar lost his soul father.

Rudra pratap 's last words to his son..were full of love..

He strongly believed that swara will heal his son.

And that cry omg.that was painful...

Yes sanskar will not spare that shadow player.

But before that he needs to compose himself...

Felt very sad...😭

Update soon Dearie.

Love,

Simi

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#765

I need to glue my ass and edit out my spots but i am being too lazy to do the same! Will be back by evening! Promise...pakka wala!

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Kiara.25

@Kiara.25

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#766

I have a doubt then...rana's wife n swara's mother both have same name i.e. sumi...plus rana n swara's father both were army officer...felt bad when rana died...

Girl..add some twist n turn n plz show that like gabriel got saved by swara even though he was worsely damaged...some how rana also get saved...