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Posted: 10 years ago
Machi... šŸ¤— that was an overflowing romantic update man...

I think we have some mind connection.. I have written same thing in different situation... That kiss on wounds man.. My mom used to kiss my wounds re.. Even my children has that habit..

Machi one doubt.. Spirit is poison right.. If we kiss the wound which was cleaned by spirit.. We won't die.. šŸ˜•

That kisses.. awww overflowing.. Man I was sweating.it was soo hot...

Some day.. I'm waiting for that some day...

Finally.. She'll manage to make him to fall over all... Again and again.. I'm loving it..

Lol..

Love you...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update I must say.
After a dreadful episode it was a solacing one.
Sanskaar is too confused.
Poor Swara.But one day he will realise his love and he will realise it hard.
Waiting for that moment.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow, swasan nd nly swasan.
Loved the whole update.
SwaSan is very stubborn when he is Gabriel. Hope Gabriel accepts his love for Kitten nd change back to dear Sanskaar.
Frankly, my gutter mind wanted more of the make out session. U stopped it too early. Gabriel wouldn't have dared to deny his feelings.
Let's see what future or destiny (as in Nimmi) has decided for them. Bdw I liked the destiny reference.
As now the Hounds are done with, are we gearing for a Father Son confrontation?
Update soon dear.
I'm a stalker, but u do know that.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super - Duper Awesome
Amazing Update
Loved It
Post Next Part Super Soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update without any tension or trouble just Kitten and her Angel chilling Angel still in denial and confused mode and Kitten trying to stop him from withdrawing and shutting from her well atleast he is talking to her ahh and the threat she gave had to work šŸ˜† imagine Sanskar sleeping all his life in fushia pink room with floral prints on all walls not to mention disney princesses desighn on the ceiling šŸ˜† and she is scared of getting bandaged after induring everything she did she is scared of this well thats Kitten for you crazy andshe almost bit a doctor in younger age and her Baba lecturing the poor doctor instead 🤣 crazy family indeed 🤣 agree with Sanskar only Maa seemss the sane one in this nutcase of a family šŸ˜†and Swara has taen after her sweet Maa brilliant update as usual waing fornext chap :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Nimmi !!
Firstly...
Apologies for not responding to your earlier update as I have been busy...

Now coming to the updates...
Chapter 59...
Well... Umm... That chapter was Dark !! And when I say dark, I really mean it !! Ugghh !! That Viper !! I hate him... How dare he beat Gab's kitten !! He really deserved an end like the one you showed... But... The way you portrayed it... Of course I was imagining the whole scenario... By the end I was like šŸ˜•... To say that my eyes were THIS big would be an understatement, becoz they were gonna pop out of their sockets and I mean it literally !!

Well enough of the dark... Now... Coming to other very appreciable things... I really loved how you showed Swara's courage when her phone rang despite of her being in that disgusting situation !! I really loved the way she showed her hope in Sanky !!

Now... Coming to Sanky... Well I obviously can't say that it was sanky's chapter...becoz it was Gab's !! Omg !! The rage !! He was damn furious !! And I mean it literally... He was ready to rip that reptile apart and why wouldn't he..after all that snake had hurt his Kitten !! The way you portrayed him going all dark for his kitten was enough for me to understand completely why he was the Numero Uno... The Angel of Death !! Gabriel !! Why he always said he belonged to the dark !! Today you justified it... Hats off !!

Really loved how you showed Swara understanding Sanskar and the extent to which Gab can go for Her !!
And my God !! This girl has guts !! She is ready to make him realise her love !!

Chapter 60
Loved it...
Loved how Swara was trying to make Sanky understand that they belong together !! And how he was all consumed in his dark thoughts...

Then came the... KISS !!
Glimpse !! You call that a glimpse... It was way too HOT !! Even our Sanky can't resist Swara for long... He just proved it...
But I really feel bad for him... He is trapped between his emotions and thoughts... But no worries his Kitten is there... I know as she made him kiss her today she is gonna make him admit his love too !!

So... Yeah !! All in all thumbs up updates... As usual !!
And yes.. Again sorry for the late reply !!
Keep me updated yaar... And yes !! Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
NimmišŸ¤—

Thanks for this update Nimmi.😃 When I reached home and saw a notification of angel on my mailbox, I had this huge smile on my face.😃 This chapter was a super awesome chapter- so emotional, so intense and so romantic with little fun moments.ā­ļø

First of all I am so happy that Viper is out of the story.🄳

Good to know Maddy is hale and hearty😳. I am already missing him. Hope he does a dhamekedar entry in next chapter. I also didn't like that scene where viper pounded Maddy's head. 😔

But it looks this incident had impacted Sanskaar's emotionally. Very much so. Only our kitten can chase away all his fears. Just loved her determination. This girl is truly something else. She won't let Sanskaar deny her love and be maahan.😳

I understand both Swara and Sanskaar's pov here. I hope Sanskaar soon confesses those 3 words to kitten. Hope he realises that he is capable of "love and life".😃

I just loved how Sanskaar spoke his heart out in front of Swara. Swara is a genious. Loved all the tactics to make Sanskaar confess his lovešŸ˜†. You go girl. I must say I really thought that kitten will be distraught after that whole viper incidence, but she did handeled herself very well.šŸ‘

"You are being just dumb, pigheaded and lame ass noble here."šŸ˜†
^^Don't know why but this was funny.🤣 Swara is on roll today. That last part where Swara threatens him was also so funny. It cracked me up.🤣

The most hilarious part of the chapter was when Swara was running away from Sanskaar like a little girl. 🤣Can't really blame her, I still cry whenever I get an injection.šŸ˜†šŸ˜³

That maa , baba, swara and baba story was so adorable and funny.😃 Swara truly has one whole adorable crazy family. šŸ˜†That kiss away pain part was adorable.😳

Swara is one crazy crazy girl🤪. Did she really asked Sanskaar to do that. That whole exchange of kisses , that part was so hot and intense. I was blushing and grinning like this ā˜ŗļø . They both are crazy. From exprimental kisses in the safe house to this.šŸ˜†

Loved the ending of the chapter. It was sweet.😃


You mentioned many brilliant lines and phrases in this chapter. I loved all of them. That hell and heaven one was very good.ā­ļø


Idk, I didn't understood that Achilles heel part. Doesn't this term refer to someone's weakness that can lead to their downfall? I may be wrong but I really didn't understood that part.šŸ˜•

Once again thank you for this update Nimmi.😃

I am eagerly waiting to read the next chapter.😳 Hope Maddy makes an entry in nxt one. I already miss him. 😃Waiting to see how the story will proceed on further

U take care😳
Lots and lots of lovešŸ¤—


Edited by navyasingh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome šŸ‘
Edited by Sakkiyah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I don't know I have sd that before or not.. But m completely in love with ur story !! Swara n sanskar and their story !!
I loved the way u describ our confuse sanskar and his feelings !! N swara the brave she didn't gave up on him . instead trying to understand him...
Loved n waiting for ur next update Curiously !!
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
nimmi
dearie u killed me with this hot swanlicious ud
love u. so much
sorry for not commenting for so long and I guess I will be irregular n future too as my. exams r approaching .
tnx for this long ud...

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