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writerjenny thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
heya
m new in swaragini page
but seriously u rocked yaar
its awesome n marvelous
amazing
words r short to express
firstly when I read dis I was like
"girl!!!!! dis is rocking" ...
simply amazing
I sit n narrate dis story of urs to my roommates n other friends
n dey r a big fan of u...now v all look forward to read more
Gabriel is now my dream man...I have fallen in love wid dis character of urs
amazing
hats off
n
aka Maddy is really a charm boy. a friend like him is gods gift.
n our swara baby was too damn cute
keep it up buddy
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Posted: 10 years ago
Congrats Nimmi for 50th chapter :)
You are awesome, amazing, mindblowing writer!
Two chapters back to back! Ah girl managed to pull me from the vague of my death ;)
Btw you are saying - Mare apne dushman - means you don't consider me your dushman & don't want me to dead BUT you almost killed me!!! Haye kya apnapan ;)
Now back to updates:
I knew it, I knew something is going to happen at their night out. And here comes Sasha - Black Widow!
Bt she is dumb or what? She took TWO assassins in her home, that too two topmost assassins? And she thought she would succeed? Our Gaby boy is enough to deal with this dumb & not to forget his Kitten who has become a wild cat by now BY & FOR HIS SANSKAAR!
Bt yeah our Gaby can do anything, breach any morals or ethics for HIS KITTEN Bt not for himself!
But Swara, Swara can't stood still doing nothing while it comes to HER SANSKAAR, Can she? So she had to step forward!
Bt thanks to Maddy the disaster didn't happen!
Maddy - From his entry this is the first time I saw him as assassin! Otherwise he & his kiddish hilarious behavior.
Nimmi, one request - Don't turn Maddy villain at the end & don't end him dead... Pretty plz!!!
Out of 4 assassins, 1 is Gaby's bro, 1 is dead now remain two. And that two will be dangerous I guess SPECIALLY that vile Viper, our Gaby absolutely loathes!
I don't think I need to say I loved Sanskaar & Swara's convo at the balcony most!!
Awww so sweet!
HIS KITTEN, HER SANSKAAR <3
Nimmi, superb update as usual...you are blessed with awesome writing skills.
Loads of love & hugs. Get well soon :)
Will wait for next update!
PS: You want to know how I found Angel. I'm a freaky reader, love to read anything. Bt when it comes to Swara-Sanskaar I can't tolerate others with them as a pair & at the beginning you didn't clarify it will be SwaSan or not so I thought to skip it. Bt again couldn't resist my reader heart AND you know what I'm glad I didn't skip this beautiful story! I'm following your Angel from the very first day, moment when you update!
I always thought whom I love & adore most - GABRIEL or SANSKAAR?! Then I decided I love Gabriel most AND adore Sanskaar most.
But now I know I WAS wrong, I love & adore Our ANGEL most because ~ Gabriel + Sanskaar = ANGEL!
Thnx Nimmi, for giving us our Angel :)
Edited by Nupur_5 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
No words to express how i felt reading the update
Superb awesome mindblowing update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
unres
awesome dear
both chapters were brilliant
Our awesome threesome enjoying in the concert
Sasha entered
sanskar walked past her
even when she was trying to come near he was looking at swara his kitten aww brovo boy
maddy drugged
sanky swara in sasha's house
sasha again seducing but sanky again walked over her
the sweet talks of future loved it a lot yaar
sanky opening up
the breakfast and the way sanky and maddy indirectly proved her wrong was awesome
picnic
Sasha's date with realisation
Gaby is not to be messed with
sasha realized that Gaby can actually kill her breaking all his rules if she even touch his girl
swara and her moves
Gaby too surprised
finally sasha gone
mav take the credits
loved the way swara and maddy are connecting


I like our veeru only but him turning gabar for bad guys will also be good


I happen to came across the story and your style of writing and our Gaby kept me attracted to the story and now it has became a habit
Congo for half century
Edited by mishrialways - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I just want to say that why sanskar need to change?thats not necessary...let him be who he is..that suits him...just want that everyone should know the truth and The Angel should not change himself..he is perfect and thats the way swara loves opps [:P] like him..love you...
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Posted: 10 years ago
its just out of world for me..love todays part from crore of heart..haye u are an amazing writer..hats off to u yaar.
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful updates as usual Nimmie. You rocks...
Sasha deserved that. How dare she try to seduce the Angel who belongs to Swara only?? Maddy done the thing this time.Glad to know that Sanskaar is opening up infront of Swara. But will his changed behavior adversely affect him in this war?Abhi tak confession nahi hua hai phir bhi donon bahuth couplishly behave karta hai. It's so cute. Swara studied all the moves. It was a nice part. Ab donon ko communicate karne keliye baaton ki zaroorath nahi raha.

Well I came to know about Angel by your PM's.I was a new member in IF and read some of your works including "Simply Sanskaar" etc. Then got introduced to this amazing work.


Congrats on the 50th chapter Nimmie. Keep up the good work😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowhh..
SASHA over in 2 chapters!!
Loved it...

And the 3 stage story was awesome...
Still have Doubt about Mack ...

He disappears and appears in time when Gabriel need his help..
Sometihing is fishy...

Hmmm...
me started Angel just becoz of its title...
Its sound intresting and the story inside was completely opposite of what i thought..

So Who is the next, Viper?
Continue soon..
Thank u for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey sry I was busy so I didn't post rply for the last three updates...
The moments between Angel n kitten r cute.. 😛
And sasha is finished finally...
I started reading Angel bcoz the title seemed interesting.. N next I luved ur story.. 😊
N thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmie🤗🤗
Lemme take a moment to congrate you Lady! Wow Wow we successfully completed 50updates.! Can you imagine? Omg Im so SO excited. Updates were mind blowing. Each one of updates carry a special charm🤗

"Anjel" holds a special place❤️.For me it happens by Chance and Im so pleased to it that Im a part of it. And ofcourse a very much hidden place in my lil heart too! Yohoo! And Do U know? It was the the first FF which provoked me to comment(Omg I was so crazy towards Anjel. Blame to U,young lady!😆.U shaken my hidden shell and provoked me to comment up😆). What stricken me about Anjel was the prolongue,which was catching and ofcourse Captive title too. Im so so glad that I too became a part of this long journey. AND mostly Gabreil❤️ made me hooked to it(his,attitude,his kitten ofcourse now maverick too make me to hook to this FF😆 ).Lob Ya for this. so so much. Thanks to you buddy!(kisses).

chap50:Oh god sending happy huggs to you. On peak 50UPDATE! WOW feeling something. The lady devil has been introduced ovrr here. The way you compared both Tasha(In kittens way😆) and swara was good. Yeah ofcourse both in extreme poles with no similarities. Yeah much different approach where I thot we would be able to catch some jealousy moment but OUR Anjel and Swara played much Wisely🤗 . The way Gabreil handled Tasha was hilarious🤣 Omg this lady acts much stupidly😆. But I wonder how this lady came to know about Gabreil bein present in concert?!

Oh No Mav where you had lead them?Cmon Manh!!! Finally ended in Tasha web But Im glad you made it up at End🤗(as slways you are 'amazing'😆). LOL tasha lemme remind yoh lady you are playing with Gabreil' The Anjel of Death'. Those lil marketed flithy method of urs will not work!(Think,Think)Huh😡.Yup yup Wow came the most blissfull moment "Our Anjel cuddled together"!!. Omg Are you planning to kill Us or What ?! AWw❤️ their moment was heaven😆. The way they quarrelled for not having pink for THEIR room(Yup yup they Said It as THEIR ROOM🤗), for hanging pictures around the room(ofcourse not in front of sanskars sight).How Cute It was?Even reminded of our lil Ragini baby. Aww Aww❤️.Sanskar here being so carefree around his kitten(ofcourse he is,STILL,he wont pay any attention or hold himself from opening his remarks)AWw❤️. THANK YOU!🤗

chap51: So the knots of Tasha have been opened up by Gabreil. The way you showing both sanskar and swara Understanding were fabulous(I admire der communication, much without words,ruled by hearts and eyes!❤️SO special).Their protective shield was mesmerising, Each aimed only for the well being of other❤️.Finally Ria opens to Tasha.Such a Short life span😆..She is really a black widow, How stupid? Seriously she has been playing with Gabreils feelings(knowing he wont play with women) and his weak point(Kitten).Loved the way he retorded back to leave his girl as he wont lay under his rules for the very well being of his kitten(Aww!!).Swara babe, Cmon show the power,I guessed over their where she will perform solax plexus😆 and show your master how perfect his student Is! The Way Sanskar sheilded her from evil and pawned his own life and wer swara backed him off by showing herself On❤️. Finally the last time twist by Maverick Oh Im so pround of You! The man behimd his charmness with no remorse acted upon himself.So Tasha aka Sasha NO MORE! A very short span around.Mav man Great Job!.Yeah beside his charm their exist a sweet devil such he proved it(thats what Im SCARED Too) But I LOV THIS GUY!).AMAZING update dear!!

So we have completed 3/4part of Anjel which indicates 1/4left! Oh No!. BTW Thanks for double dhamaka🤗. Pardon me for long and lil dramatic Comment😆
Edited by Anglaise - 10 years ago

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