FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149) - Page 45

Me got intrest by title

N prologue was enough for loving it

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Nimmi , we hit half century 🥳 , I am so happy dear 🤗. So already 3/4 of the story is over .😭. As i said before this is one story i dont mind going on forever. I am usually the type who wants to read the last page soon and finishes any book i read ASAP but ANGEL is really special to me Nimmi, An FF i never wants to end. That how much i love this one.😳

So onto the chapter , Loved the short opening conversation between Gabriel and Swara. how do you come up with lines like this fascinates me, Cindrella refrence and the context it was used was so good. I love that scene.

Maverick leaves the love birds alone and went because something important came up and i love how Swara seemed to understand his intentions.😆

Sasha or is it Tasha makes an appearance, i didnt expect it, although i knew some danger would be there , some how i didnt see Sasha making an appearance. But then i realized it was the perfect spot for her introduction . So Gabriel does acknowledge she is a Bomb . So if Gabreil feels that way then i believe him .😆

I knew what will be Gabreil reactions to poor Sasha , but how his eyes constantly went back to his kitten made me love him a lot more😳. In this show we are currently suffering from Swara jealousy😡, i am glad atleast it is in reverse order on Angel. Sasha jealousy was a treat to read.

Loved the Way he rejected her outright, "You go that way and have your fun and i will go my way and have mine" 🤣, seriously IF needs to update it emoticons . i am running short of them.

But seriously Swara jealousy on seeing Sasha were so good🤣, I loved it unlike the current saga in the show😡. Sorry moving on 😆, Swara wants to leave the moment she find Sasha in the night club after all she needs to protect her innocent Sanskaar 😆

Maverick fell for Sasha, ofcourse he would and she drugged him ofcourse she would 😆. come on maddy cheer up i ask Nimmi to find you a great girl in the next chapters or maybe i ask her to write a FF based on just you and your lover . Deal 😉

Loved the concern that came upon both Swara for his friend and Gabriel for his younger brother. So sasha baited them and so they visited Sasha home. Till then i thought Sasha was genius but i always knew her plan would fail because Sanskar has eyes only on his kitten.

For a guy who could shoot to kill based on sound , it no surprise he remembers everyone voice. 👏 .But still i am always proud of Gabriel just like Swara😳 . i did understand why Gabriel would want to stay he needs to know test his three times theory But him sending Swara to sleep alone , what if the green eyed jealousy monster striked Sasha and she end up hurting Swara, i am glad nothing like that happened but still i didnt like Sanskar sending her off to sleep alone. he could have left Maddy even though i love him and slept with swara in one room .

Third attempt fail , Poor Sasha , 🤣 , He left maddy alone with Sasha and went to his kitten, i love it . As you can guess it , i loved the following scene of Swara and Sanskar, the balcony scene was so good dear. "I am not sleeping in a pink bedroom" is my favorite line in this chapter because what that implies and i was shocked as much Swara was .. How are you so Good Nimmi👏, i literally had a huge grin reading that part😃.

P.S - You are the Sweetest dear, Love ya and i will unres for chapter 51 tomorrow . 🤗

Hi Nimmi , really sorry for the late Unres..

So first let me start off with thanks for the double update, Love ya Nimmi, And do update soon .

I thought sasha had brains , all the went away when i saw her next plan, picnic with top two Assasins, is this girl for real, Okay i officially say Sasha is way too overconfident , she will make Maverick and Gabriel seems like a humble guys.

Mini devil Maverick is back on two legs and i am happy, As i said each chapter i am falling for him more. Big devil is Sanskar i thought he was Angel of Death. Clear it for me 😆. Swara wants to pull Sasha hair 🤣, girl you should do it, i would have loved Gabriel and Maddy pulling each other apart.

But how do you keep making me love Gabreil and his kitten more every single chapter. Her "blowing up the kitchen once in a while and his The way to a man heart starts with his heart"❤️. This two are just perfect for each other.

Swara jealousy is always a treat but this girl also trust him when he asks too believe he has a plan. i love her . So Sasha think Gabriel is finally Cracking , you are really over confidant dear. Swara should have just started her hair pulling but i admire her strength to wait for her Sanskar.

Ofcourse he knows, Poor Sasha , Gabreil and his morals are really commendable . So he leaves her alive, just like he left Lakshya . And we all know how it went , next time when he decide to spare his nemesis, he should either tie them up or make sure they are safe.😆

Loved the humiliated sasha , Screaming No one and Garbriel line of live with it and i just did. ⭐️ . Ofcourse i know her anger would divert too Swara. But Sasha you made the huge mistaking of messing with his Kitten.

Here comes my favourite line of this chapter. " I will kill you sasha woman or not if you hurt my girl , there are no rules i wont break for this girl, No ethics i wont raze and no morals i wont breach for this girl , so for the final time ...let her Go" . Seriously Nimmi, you are really a great wrtier dear👏.

Ofcourse i knew Sasha would be the Victim of S.I.N.G but neverthless i think she deserved it, And Swara modified fourth step . loved it . Gabriel is proud of his student and i am too. 😆

Gabriel morals comes up again, he wont shoot her even if she is pointing her gun at him , I love this guy but i want him to live long too, so next time someone wants to kill you plz dont let them do so even if it is a girl. Swara wants to protect her Angel.

Maddy is back and again saves His big brother, i am wondering how many times he going to bring it up in the next few chapter 🤣 but loved the meaningful conversation the trio had . Can they move somewhere and live together already.

Lovely updates Nimmi, I loved it, Do continue soon. Atleast one chapter during the weekend. other wise it would be boring dear.

P.S You are the sweetest

And hey you're sick? :O Take care hun! 🤗

And I'm super excited for the double updates

Will finish my college work soon and read them in peace!

Oh and you want to know how I found Angel..hmm that's a cute little story 😳😆 And you'll be getting the answer with the review of the updates soon, you know how! 😳

ANGEL has completed half century. A very hearty CONGRATULATIONS to everyone on angel's golden jublie.🥳

Nimmi dear Thank you for writing this fabulous story😃. I joined this journey just a few chapters back. But I love this story very very much. I wait eagerly for a new update. And Nimmi you are such a sweetheart❤️. I just totally love our daily ritual😳. And I am totally amazed by the way you update this story at a jet like speed. All chapters are so amazingly well written and detailed like I am watching a hollywood movie in a big TV screen👏. And I just love how you write action scenes. And I am big fan of your humor. You make me laugh so much in every chapter by your humorous writting. you know I love your story and reading it just puts me in this lovely, goofy mood .😃

Me not liking how Sasha was spying upon our angels😡. Didn't like her monologues. She is so full of herself.🥱

Maverick the mini devil urf maddy again starts with his hilarious antics in the morning. I love you maddy dearly but you need to stop going all flirty with that girl😡. You are an assassin for god sake or is this his some plan.

Can you imagine 3 out of top 5 assassins sitting on a dining table peacefully eating a breakfast.😆

Well not so peacefully. What a pathetic way the women uses to get some attention.🤢

Sasha has definitely lost her brain cells due to her lust or Her ego is too bruised that she cannot think straight.😕

She is so pissed of that she is trying to put down Swara on the silliest things like cooking. Like seriously.🥱

Loved how our sanky and maddy gave her a proper reply. Acted like a perfect Lakshmana, Maddy.👏


Sasha is seriously a gone case. She really thought of a picnic to play out her seducing game on Gabriel . The same person who didn't even respond to her during her earlier advances. Such an amateurish plan😆. And did she really thought she acheive her task while in vincity of 2 top most assassins. Not likely babes.😳

So this little group is all set for a party. Btw whose call does Maddy receives😉. Nimmi You are building a thick air of suspense regarding him.

I just love how these two talk to each other without even speaking a word and just by looking at each other.😳⭐️



Sanskaar again doesn't gives her any bhav. I would say it for nth time again that I am so proud of you sanskaar😃. Not only that He also warns her and allows her to walk out scot free.


I think this was the last straw for her. Her ego was terribly bruised right now. When she comes out to confront gabriel he shows a perfect resemblance of veela ( sorry for HP reference , me can't help it😆). Vella's are very attractive but once they are angry they look no more attractive same as when sasha turns to black widow. Perfect example of how looks could be deceiving.😊

She did a grave mistake by attacking sanskaar's kitten. He would rip out the person inside out who even tries to harm his kitten even by forgetting his principals.

So proud of you kitten⭐️. She has taken out her claws and strikes at the best opportunity on her opponent. How effectively she used her S.I.N.G. to get herself out of spider web. Guru was so proud of his cheli. But I never thought that she will use this technique upon sasha.😳

I loved how they tried to protect each other by being a sheild to the each other. So proud of the fact that gabriel didn't forget his ethics when it came to his life. When swara came in front to sheild sanskaar, I wasn't afraid.😃

I knew it that our maddy will save the situation at the very last moment. And he did .Its 2nd time that he saved them.😊

And this is the first time we saw maverick - the assassin who hides behind the goofy mask. Ethics- The thing which makes the difference between a numero uno and 2nd one.

That three stage theory thing was good.

I'm loving the bond between shona and maddy😃. The best friend forever thing. You unravelled many new shades of maddy's character in this chapter.

So our fav trio is again set up to the direction of their safe house. 😊

About sasha ...Will it be cruel of me to say good riddance😳. She was really becoming a pain

And I think next one to strike is that viper guy.😉

0oxoxoxoxo

Well I came across this beautiful story through a friend. We both read different ff's and suggest each other a good one. So she recommended this story to me . I have to confess I am not an follower of this show😳. My mom watches it regularly so I watch it sometimes with her. So I read it bcoz the story wasn't at all related to this show despite name of characters. Once I started reading it I found it really intresting. 😃

Once again congrats Nimmi🥳

And needless to say, I'm excited for the next update.😃

Take care

Lots of love🤗

I really loved the story.

The love, trust and understanding between swara and sanskar was awesome.

The theory and moves of sanskar were really good

And his principles to

Waiting for your next update