FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#461

Congrats nimmi...for ur half century...

I cannot describe my feeling for this ff ANGEL...it is one of the best stories i have read...thank u for giving us angel...i😊👏

Chapter 50 n 51 awesome...was stunned with the development...sasha down...2 to go...viper n jack...plzzz one request give us faces to apte , sasha n remaining character...we have face of karan wahi for maverick...need faces for them too...😃😳

Coming to how i came across ur ff... well i love reading...n was madly in love with swasan ff , ss across the forum...n happen to read ur story...😉😆

Truly amazed n loved ur writing...want more swasan scene...in next update n nimmi plzzz give us happiest ending...😳😳⭐️

Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 10 years ago

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hrni

@hrni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#462

Oh god gal u r just making me fall for this maverick man. ... 😳 👏

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Pearl

@pearl.16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#463

Hey !! Just read the chapters...

And yes firstly I would like to say I m Nandini !! But I like it when u say pearl... But call me Nandini or Nandu or whatever u like...

Now coming to the updates !!

I m happy that Karan Wahi is our Mav !!

Secondly that Sasha was something huge !! I just loved how her story went on and ended...

Got to see Mav's new side.. He is such a darling !!

Mav n Swara's friendship is really sweet reminds me of Bozo n Swara !!

And yes the sweet moments of SwaSan were muaahh !! Lovely !!

And yes... I ended up on reading Angel by chance... First I saw ur dp n I found it really cute !! Then went on to read the chapters... The way the chapters were written, the story was plotted did it for me...

All in all in one word - BRILLIANT !!

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#464

loved loved loved both parts. the way swara was going cray possessive about sanskar, sanskar not giving a damn about sasha. poor made trapped by her. sasha's ego taking a major blow. and the way swara sanskar are planning to renovated their house...and finally the way everyone talks about how much sanskar loves swara. it is so clear for everyone to see. making swara over the top happy. hope they deal with viper okay as well. cannot wait for the next one. fantastic writing all through out as well.

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#465

Hey awesome update so 1 of the 3 hounds is gone and done with for good 😃poor thing was trying her charms on a man oh whom none will work except ofcourse of a certain Swara Bose who doesn't even try btw Gabby boy gave a huge blow to Sasha's ego and kitten's reaction to Sasha 😆 and Maddy awww the overgrown kid the happy bunny he is only he can remain in those flirty elements after being drugged 😆 and at the last ended up saving Gabriel and his Kitten also he is right btw abut Sanskar

"Anytime! What are brothers for? And yes! For the job profile that you flaunt you are way too righteous Man!"

Edited by vishti.dvd - 10 years ago

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 10 years ago

#466

belated happy birthday dear...sorry didnt know about it. it seems really silly asking this, but when was it?

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nida

@mystery75

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#467

get well soon dear😊 and dont worry abt the visuals 😆

ahhh finally half century of my most beloved story ANGEL😃 i have said this before but gonna say it agian that i cant get enough of it... im literally ADDICTED to angel and im loving it😆

wow angel and kitten are so cute... didnt even realize that they are acting like a perfect dear couple who so much in LOVE... those unrealized hand holding and all awww

love how protective gabriel is for his kitten in the concert and small small comments like Cinderella and princess how on earth can an assassin be so so ahhh no word FYGWIELFHLDFJS🤗❤️

oh "so tasha or was it sasha"😉 makes an entry hmmm but got a real "IN YOUR FACE" from our angel i was so 🤣🤣 at her for her fail attemt to seduce the devil... well the lady should know he aint is called the DEVIL😈

and the best part of this chapy was the comparision b/w tasha and kitten by our angel and how he have eyes for his kitten only so lovely

and kitten's monologue when she sees tasha eyeing his angel were so innocent "she's a knockout and she's wearing heel's 😆 oh GOD this girl is being insecure of heels really🤪

Btw is our Gaby that much INNOCENT that he says"Oh that lady! I think I may have hurt her feelings. She was looking for fun and I walked out on her. Rude of me!"😆😆😆"Woah! How do I know Kitten? May be I look like a errr funny person?" really Gabriel😲🤣

kitten u really have to protect ur angel girl and i know u will do a fine job at it

how in hell MADDY end up being spiked he is the best after gaby then how??? well i think ladies are his weakness thats why he's 2nd best

well tasha is being damn silly inviting her own DOOM 😈

what an amazing amazing scene in occur in the balcony b/w angel and his kitten it was such a sweet yet cherish-able moment such easy and simple talks they did and gaby didnt even realize that he's planning his future with his kitten and kitten😉 is so smart didnt make him realize that and cont their sweet sweet talks...i really had a BIG BIG smile while reading that part as i could completely imagine those two🤗

ahhh another chapter😎

Maddy is back so good to see him alive again😆 well tasha literally has no brains at all alright...picnic the best she could come up with a plan is picnic🤣

and what an action packed sequence that was in the end...kitten using her training on tasha👏...gabriel's devil threat😲👏...kitten and angel's protectiveness for eachother👏...and MADDY'S awesomlacious entry

i so love maddy and his ans. to kitten was so 👍🏼 and now shona and maddy are besties😃

ohhh and gaby's sweet little jealousy is so yummy 😆 "no one is allowed to get cozy with certain swara bose other than himself" awww😃😃

im in love with this trio plzz dont break them plzzz😛 they are so happy just love them.

well i just happen to found ANGEL one day in the forum and just attracted to it b/c of it name and at that time u have just updated 5 or 6 chapies only and just hooked to it

though i did recomment it to my little bro😆 and he too is hooked to angel as usual... well thats the affect this story has on ts readers😉

oh and really sorry for the late comment

Edited by mystery75 - 10 years ago

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milusubhra

@milusubhra

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#468

Wow frienship bond between mav and swara

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#469

Ayyo .I know how irritating cold can its cousins can be ..get well soon sweety🤗

50th - Half century

I wish I could write a long comment for the prefect moments you created b/w angel and kitten , simple yet just perfect .That ease they both share ..like they are just meant to be together , not an inch of hesitation, awkwardness...I love my darlins of course you too darlin ..for such awesome ness you bring in with every chapter

Sasha..lol..On your face😆🤣..she defo was a bombfor your description ..but swara beats her even with that simple look ..and that smile on sanky's face looking at his kitten

Sasha spiked maddy ...Nimmi ..Dont u dare kill maddy ..ok that was a threat now I am going to say Please please dnt kill him in this pursuit ..My heart will bleed😕 beacuse I get this strong feels of something going to happen to him ..Prove me wrong yaar

I can totally imagine sasha using tricks of trade but in vain .😆.

and My love goes for this scene⭐️

The convo of swasan is balcony ...I can go back read just that part like 100 times

That smile on his face .that cute hug and the convo ...starting off with sanky saying our house ..awwwie and the discussion on colours..like a true hubby & wife😆Can they get any more cuter..Though sanky himself didnt realise but he stared dreaming of a future with his kitten..So many feels😳 and red lol ..and swara's lines on how she wouldnt bother about walls being red only if her angel was with her

The picture Perfect Moment

Man I loved how swara made her teacher proud ..Can totally imagine happening it before my eyes and Maddy what an entry👏 , Back on time dude ..and from friends to best friends.. love their bond as well

So two down of 4...Cant wait for viper to come ..just waiting for sanskaars fury to unleash when he eyes swara ..

Love Love and loads of love for this long update and for super duper awesome like always👏👏

Lucky

PS; Your sanskaar's chronicles pulled me here ..and after that atadu connection ..😉 I Dont dare to miss a single update and I am gonna be upset for god knows how many days if this gets over..Like I said before with every part you post ..I feel a bit errr..hmm a bit sad that Its going to end soon😭 but I can go back and read this anytime ..this is going to one of my most treasured FF's.. 😳

Get well soon BTw this was my longest comment ..Not intended just happened when I started to type😆😆

Edited by lucky.m - 10 years ago

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#470

Wow! Back to backup beautiful 'date' updates, Nimmi! Rock concert and picnic!!😆 I guess in underworld , the dates will be like this only.. laced with danger!

Loved the fact our Sanskar is steadfast and has eyes only for his kitten in spite of a sexy bombshell!! Their convo about renovationg Swara's home was so cute and Gaby doesn't even realize his faux pas 'I will not sleep in Pink Bedroom!' That was so so romantic! 😳

I am glad Swara tried all the attacking moves on Sasha. I am looking forward to one or two of her moves against Viper too! Loved how Gaby and Kitten tried to shield the other. They are irrevocably in love! ❤️

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