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TRPS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

Nimmi! 🤗
Get well soon dear! I know how irritating cold can get! and congratulations for crossing 50 in this story! 🥳 fantastic update!! Nimmi! if wasn't hurry naa!(all thanks to my exams!) I am sure, I would write a essay of full page on the updates! :P
Gaby's lines were so impactful in this chapter! especially that princess and warning to Shasha one!!
seems that shasha thingy hasn't met a real man like our Gaby boy, man of mettle...
oh! how much I enjoyed Swara punching Sasha!
whoa! that act of Swara, by the way, I was expecting this reaction from Swara, in fact , that time too when Maddy made an entry . phew! he came on time! Gaby is so seedha-saadha errr!!! in such matters.
I am just loving the moments of Swasan so much! be it holding hands , all smiles, talking about their home. so touching it was!
this line, have you noticed the way he looks at you!!! this was so good!
and the last line of Gaby had me grinning! :D that's the Gaby boy err!! Sanskaar ,,ummm... that's the angel of kitten!! :)
PS- I had read your previous story! I think you shared this link there or I noticed it in the forum. first I was in two minds about reading it because you haven't updated the first one since long :P , I was like if you won't update this one too! I don't like to read story's update like one today then one after 2months!! but when I saw you update it daily!! I literally jumped into reading this! :)) Thank Goodness! I haven't missed it! I am enjoying this journey of Angel and kitten so much! :))

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NITI VYAS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

thank u for mady. unmki entry par laga tha wo negatie hoge par nahin maddy k aane se kahani dilschap aur khubsurat hai. maine aapki sanskaar cgronicles padi thi aur aap phjir who kahani update hi nahin karti thi. par e kahani karti thi tho socha is kahani par cumnt karne k baad aur frnd rqust k baad pm bhej ke aako sanskaar chronicles k bare mein puchungi. mujhe violence jara bi pasand nahin aata isliye socha ek hi part padke cumnt karke frndz banake chali jaungi. maine frst chapter who pada jahan sanky ko gabriel naam dete hai pata nahin kya jadui hai iss kahani mein maine 1st chapter se kahani padiaur uiske baad ek bhi pdates miss nahin kiye. sanskaar hronicles ka intezaar rahega.

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SIMI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Nimmi no update today!!
Well i was waiting for the update since morning.but its ok
hope your health is good.
Sorry for disturbing..
Love
simi 😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

As you know I'm reading from the very first chapter. It was the shooting scene there that had me hooked and the graceful assassin of cause! Never thought I would enjoy an action story as much as I am enjoying this one.

Congrats on the half century Nimmie, may your angle keep flying on the glorious skies!

loads of love,

Sakura

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Juanita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

Unres chapter 51 on page 65.

So you want on how i started reading Angel, i dont know😆 , here is what i know, The first work i read of you is Simply Sanskar , i even went back and checked the date 13 Novemeber😳 , then i read Rocking Ragini. I loved your writing. 👏

This much i know you send me a PM, what i dont know is whether you sent me your index or Angel Link. But i checked it on 22 November that was my first comment in Angel . You already finished upto 9 chapters , So i caught up with it in Two days , i guess. And from thereafter i am waiting for you update like crazy. You know me 😆 , see i told you my story now update soon , i need to read chapter 52😉

P.S - Hope you are fine now 🤗, and Since you introduced me to Angel , i guess you are the Sweetest😆

P.P.S - I remembered you send me Angel Link 😆

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

Hey Nimmie,

I hope you're feeling better now, if not have some rest, take medicine and get well real soon🤗

I wonder if this could get any better and every time you prove me wrong. This was one marvelous chapter. Initially I thought Shasha would be more of a challenge but the way you pulled it, it was perfect. So one down, one tamed, two more hounds to go. Although Maddy is sweet, great and very lovable, I do love him but I can't fully trust him for some reason. I hope my instincts are terribly wrong here.

Continue whenever you feel fit to do so,

take care,

loads of love,

Sakura

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Juanita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#477

Res stalker mode activated 😆...

Short Unres...

Read it and loved it , and thanks for the update inspite of not feeling well . Love ya Nimmi, you definately are the sweetest .🤗 . Get well Soon . Take Rest dear . Will give my detailed comments in the evening .

Finally Unres to give my Detailed boring comment.

Jack made an appearance already, i liked his entry🥳 . So he would have torched poor maddy 😡 . Nope no one can harm maverick he is my third favourite character unless he is evil. Since i read the comments , even i became suspicous of him . Moving on.

Maddy wants a tea break Nimmi, Poor Guy drugged, used by a beautiful girl , and now almost killed He definately needs a break😆 . but i loved his anger session . He really doesnt want to die by a freaking door Nimmi🤣 . So even Maverick realises Sasha plan was not like an top rated Assasin just like we all said but i also accept Gabriel explanation no one rejected her before so she had to improvise and also she knew he wont kill her that being her big Advantage. thankfully Maverick doesnt follow his big brother foot steps. Sasha should have researched more on maddy

Also how smartly Sanskar proved maddy has a dunce. I loved that scene . And his retaliation by calling Sanskar "Bad heartless man " was so awesome.😉 i love Maddy wit and over dramatic lines.just like swara i am happy that one turned out to be a friend and the other one was no longer a threat. 😊

I dont dig men in tights🤣 , how do you come up with this lines Nimmi . Harry met sally well i have to watch this one just for Gabreil and Swara. I loved that scene. I so wish these three could live together , atleast Maverick can be there neighbour.

Loved the dialogue repaeating Scene, Sanskar has truly falled for his kitten and kitten too is falled hard for her Angel and i love it.

Now this is my favourite part in this chapter, i love this bed sharing Angel and his kitten . Gabriel dilemma about whether he wants her near or not. OFcourse as you said her being close to him is his paradise and sweet torure . dilemma indeed. i love that sequence so much i must have read it ten times already. 😳

So i was intially surprised that both Maverick, Jack and Sasha seems to find out Gabriel when he was still on hiding, then i realized they would not be top Assasins if they cant do that, so now Maddy finds Jack or so he hopes and our trio had enough of waiting so they are off to hunt i guess.😊

Ofcourse a cliffhanger 😲but i can wait . First you take care of your health and once you are back on full form , you can update. I will wait till then🤗 . Love ya Nimmi. You are the sweetest for updating inspite of your health . ❤️

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#478

Mera...mera...mera!!!!

Un-mera...un-mera...un-mera!!!

Hey Di, hopefully by now your running nose and high fever are all tamed and you are all kickin' alive! I was supposed to edit this spot earlier but you know the lazy genes!!!

Anyways back to the update and how! Gaby is so...so sharp. Tiny...T.I.N.Y. changes in the scene and this guy has his already stupendous brain go even smarter at the tiniest indication of the possible onslaught! Question here is how deadly he will now turn out to be, now that the scythe of the reaper is dangling over his head and not to mention his Kitten's. So the Jack guy makes an entry although in his absentia...he is way too random for the assassins who have taken a soft spot in my otherwise tough heart! Gosh...this Jacky boy! I am digging he has those crazy scientist's look as well! Specks and curly hairs and a teeny-weeny mustache maybe!

So the unlikely cavalry is back to the point where it all started...well I get the reason for the same. Only fools or extremely smart ones return to places marked. This one is truly the latter kind. Chalo...I am hoping there is going to be some semblance of sanity before someone else comes knocking their door with a bigger blast. Oh they really have no "chain" at all! Maddy...Maddy...oh this guy is so cute! Poor thing would have been blown to bits and pieces or would have his head on fire LITERALLY had his elder brother not intervened timely!

And Hallelujah!!! Maddy agrees with me that Sasha was actually trying to be a part of Dumb and Dumber series! How can someone be this obtuse that their brain doesn't even register the danger signals that going all b-o-i-n-g-g-g-g-g-g! And Sankaar defended her? Brilliant...let Swara get a hang of it! Maybe he'll have to run for his life then! And Maddy boy you fell for the girl because to quote you: Pretty girls have prettier heads and prettier hearts. Seriously??? And I agree with Gaby here, Maddy actually turns to a dunce when he wishes to! Oh please once when this madness ends...lets have a PYT for him as well! Pinky promise, huh!

So Jack misses his target half the time? Ye kaisa assassin hai? Okay I get it...it must be his crazy genius at work! Anyway the day fell back to its normalcy...well as normal as it could be with Maddy around. Well he is an exact replica of me when it comes to binge watching TV. I don't shove my ass even for bathroom breaks and yes even I don't dig men in tights...gives me heebee-the-jeebees!!!

Aww...Sanskaar...my sweet, sweet Sanskaar! For someone all deadly, lean and mean he really flaunts a heart that is terribly soft that too for a right person. Does he even realize the precipice he is lingering on? I want to see his reaction that moment he realizes the dangerous boundary that he has already crossed and the road he is travelling!

Don't tell me you are a Baywatch fan! I so adored and loved and worshipped Pamela Anderson! Man...she's one hot mess! And then what was that? Maddy is a fan of chick-flicks! Eww! I vehemently HATE those movies...that concept of fluffy and mushy just make me cringe! My friends were like lets watch Harry met Sally and the moment I found out what it was all about I switched to Terminator! I can sit through gory violence but romance makes me faint! Haye Ram! How can one even tolerate those! *shudders*

Haven't seen the flick so I have no idea who Harry and Sally are and I honestly don't wish to take to a guess either so I'll let this pass! But that dialogue was beautiful by any standards but no I will not watch the movie...nada...nada...nada!

So the action is back on place! And here I thought they'll have a day off! Koi nahi bring it on!

P.S. While I am a Bihari and my native tongue is Magahi I understand Bhojpuri very well...and do watch movies dubbed in the said language...haste haste pet fatna is guaranteed!

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kamila.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#479

Machi... 🤗 ..cosmic connection machi.. in between us 🤣 two days before I was having fever.. Still suffering... How are you get well soon...

Fantabulous update as usual... Mave... Gaby great combination.. Having lot of fun... Me re...

Love is in the air... Ah try more romantic re I want to read from you...

Okay harry met sally nice movie... That dialogue situation are suitable here...

Oh man that attraction in between Gaby and kitten 😳

So jack is behind there butt... Cliffhanger... 😡 fever I'm okay with that...

Take care... Don't strain... take rest... We can wait...

Lol...

Love you...

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Nupur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#480

Nimmi hope you are much better now, still take care and take rest. Get well soon sweetie :)

PM or NO PM, I will find Angel anyway ;)

As usual amazing update, again better than previous one, again you outdid yourself - Nothing new I know!

CLIFFHANGER!!! How am I going to survive?

Kitten-Angel OR Swara-Sanskaar ~ When they will realize their true feelings? I think they do realize Bt don't admit! Sighs!!!

Maddy/Maverick - You know I like his hilarious comments and more hilarious antics! I really wish he remain Modern-Day-Lakshman till the end...like he said!

Bt still I can't trust him truly and this scared me most! Because open enemies are way better than enemies pretending to be friends!

Lots of love & hugs for you :)