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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh really! "mature adults with stone, papers and scissors." Anyone of the names are a consensus are okay with me. Alex
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Nimmi!!!
Update soon!! It's so hard to wait! The way the story is progressing.. I love it!!😆.. Swara and Sanskar on one bed!☺️.. When do we get more of it!! Btw.. Continue soon!!
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NIMMMI !!! WHERE IS THE NEXT UPDATE!!!
MIND YOU LADY, IF I DIE, YOU WILL BE THE SOLE REASON!!! REMEMBER THAT!
I'm Pleading With My Whole Heart You Kind Lady (If ONLY You Update) To Update Soon...Like Real Sooonnn!
Trust Me, Bcoz Of You & Your Not Updating - JIJI KHUSH NEHI HAIN :P
PS: Plz Update Soon. *Puppy Face*
Edited by Nupur_5 - 10 years ago
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Here I m 😎
Ohhh Swara is missing "Her & Sanskaar's House"
Maverick,His Beauty Sleep & Bath Tub😆
Modern Day Lakshman🤣🤣
"My Brothers Girl" 😉This Guys is So intelligent 👏

"Sanskaar:The Assasin" & "Madhav:The Murderer" 🤣🤣
"Delete it from your Hardware"😆 The guy was pleading like She Have d Most Durtiest Secret of Him with Her😆
Maddy & Sanky thats Alright👍🏼
& That Kitten Part
"Her Sanskaar" & "His Kitten" (No Maverick/Madhav😉 can came b/w Them 😆)

Awww That "Sweet Sweet Torture"☺️
And that Morning Kiss
And Sanskaar was Waken😉
{Well He should Curse the one that could have happened but didn't}😆*Crazy Me*😉
Awww their Morning Ritual{He won't mind the other one too😉}

& This Maddy
"His Morning at 11;Busy in Dreaming & Health/Beauty Consious😆 Nature" & Not Forget "Food Lover"🤣🤣

And Yup Sanskaar:The Assasin Turned To Sanskaar:The Baby Sitter🤣
& These Babies Can easily Emotionally Blackmail Sanskaar😆
Maddy's Marriage Proposal to Sanky😆
Swara Is Having Tough Competition😆
Maddy & His Attitude of "Mera Kaha Patthar Ki Lakeer"😎

His last Shot"You Are in love with Crazy girl makes you Craziest"
He Steal this Chapter in End😉
Jhappies For Maddy & You🤗
Do You know You are Perfect at
"Romance,Fun,Serious Stuff,Emotional,Action...; well list is Infinite❤️.So count everything"🤗
Luv You our Angel❤️

Well What Would be Next??
I mean Kitten & Angel's reaction over Maddy's "Realistic Explosion"😆
I m waiting
Update Chapter 50 ASAP😉
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Hi Nimmi🤗
Me first here today




First of all I just loved those hand holding, calling her cinderella and princess, holding her waist, pulling out a chair part so adorable and lovely and cute.

So we have sasha here.😕

Stay away from our angel you spider women😡. I just loved it when sanskaar didn't even glance properly at that women even when that shasha was all over him😊. His eyes were only and only on his angel. I liked that part where you draw a comparision between our kitten and that women.😳

I just loved Sanskaar in this chapyer. How fitting reply he gave to that women. I literally cheered at that point.👏

Oh boy swara was so pissed 😆. Kitten just take out your sharp nails and keep this women away from our angel.

Poor maddy...Shasha took him away to lure away sanskaar into her web🤢. But Maddy after all you are no 2 assassin you should have kept a better watch on your surroundings. And that Sasha, does she considers gabriel a fool that he can't put 2 and 2 together and connect all the dots. She is terribaly mistaken if she thinks that.👎🏼

So gabriel finally guesses about it. Too much of coincidence no.😆

Sasha women you are just inviting your own doom into your house.🥱

"Shasha sashayed into the room"🤣
^^ Nimmi dear you are the best.

Again she made her advances on Sanskaar. She is really a fool to underestimate him. Does she really thinks that he would give into her advances.🥱

Loved how again he gave her a fitting reply👏. I am so proud of you man. Her ego must be bruised a lot by now.😆

I just loved swara sanskaar's conversation😳. They are so so comfortable with each other⭐️. Totally adored that part when they were talking about the renovation of their home. Sanskaar wants to build 2 kitchens😆. Loved their banter regarding room color.😃


["Red! I will paint our walls red."

"Sanskaar!" She was aghast. "Who lives in a red painted room?"<br>

"We will!" He sounded so pleased "There is something sexy about that colour."]

^^ Just wanna say FINALLY SANSKAAR. 😃😆
And I think red is a hot color.😳

I think both me and swara prefer our angel as grey. Agree that he could never be pristine white.😊



["She would live in a black room with Gothic radium painted cross and bones and think of it as a piece of paradise as long as her Angel is there to share that paradise with her.

Sorry fuchsia next time maybe! If my Sanskaar agrees that is!]

^^ this part was so beautiful Nimmi.❤️❤️



⭐️ of this chapter was sanskaar. I am so very proud of him.

And that shasha women is irritating me lot🥱 and she just entered the story😆. Hope we won't get to see her for long.😕

As always brilliant update Nimmi⭐️

Take care😃
Lots of love🤗

Edited by navyasingh - 10 years ago
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🤗 Girls you are too fast for me.
i was updating 51 chapter too as a treat for hitting a half century and you are already here.

how awesome are you🤗

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Mera...mera...mera!!!!
Un-mera...un-mera...un-mera!!!


Okay I'll clear my backlogs later...this one I have to jump in for! How...how Nimmo Di...how can you be this fabulous??? Ever since I had a start on this story I can't help but reel over the sheer awesomeness of the same! If I could I probably would smash myself through this laptop screen and engulf you in a bear hug going all hands and legs over like the cubs do! I so MADLY am in love with this story and I know this for sure that the day it ends I'll be in a legit semi-depression state! Yes I am crazy that way!! So here it begins!



Chapter 50



We hit the half century!! Whoot!!! Whoot!!!!



So a rock concert it is in middle of a life threatening situation...that can only be Maddy's idea! Oh and did I tell you that I love this Maddy guy? He is all adorbs I tell you! I still can't believe that our Gaby baby gave in, both the crazies (read his Kitten and his younger brother Madhav!) must be rubbing off him, no? So Maddy is off to work on his important work that is all long legs, big eyes and skimpily clothed...yeah I could've bet on that too...men I tell you!



Okay so how is it that even in the most f**ked up situations Gabriel, no scratch that, Sanskaar come up with lines such as this: "You shall always remain a princess!" Tell me, how is a girl not supposed to fall for such a guy???...whatever his job profile might be he is such a genuine one at heart...Mother Nature are you even listening??? Can't you make guys like him in reality so that your daughters like me won't have to die single???



Okay after this one piece I think I my sanity is all scattered to the winds, Nimmo di take a bow here is all I'll say! But I gather my scattered sanity for I need to pull out words for the next set of adventure that our "maiden" is currently enjoying!



OH EM GEE!!!! Sasha is here! Damn I was expecting fireworks of all sort to blow in every direction but then I forgot its Gaby baby we are talking about; had it been Maddy that rancor could have been seen in different proportions but then Gaby has his eyes set on cute little Kitten so the siren and the diva can go away. But that nonetheless was SUPERB!! I could only see Sunny all decked up in red and going for a cat-call at our oh-so-sanskaari chorra! Ye ho kya raha hai? I was grinning like a loony and my mom was like kissey baat kar rahi ho? Oh mom how am I supposed to tell you that no real guy would fit the bill of my imagination for I am all over fictional characters, it is true...I AM going to die single!



So our Sanskaari chorra does acknowledge this woman to be a bomb, too bad he isn't cut from the cloth that would like testing it once or our Sasha dear would have a field day. And then he chooses to walk out and leaves the siren all by her own without even acknowledging as to what is going on? Can a guy be more obtuse? But then I don't blame he is more of I-prefer-what's-inside kind. I loved that detailing where he looks at this siren and see only his Kitten from his inner eye...that was so...I don't know...beautiful and poignant? Okay lets put this up straight, If I indeed die single I'll be blaming you!



Sasha's reaction on that was aptly justified. I mean compare a vixen and a girl-next-door and the latter winning the match even without trying so this had to hit her pride. But honestly I thought this Black widow would have more of tricks up her sleeve...or maybe she had but Gaby's outright rejection did spoil her mood and mind. He surely knows how to screw up a woman for good, eh?
After this things escaladed quite fast, from lethal glaring sessions from Swara to Gaby being clueless to Maddy going all gayab in a jiffy...now that was fast! So the Black Widow spun her web a little over the mark leaving fleshy bait in between. I feel almost sorry for her, poor things really has no idea that both the bait and the prey that she has lured into her trap are capable of gulping her down. Such a sheer and lethal mistake for someone going around with a tag of an Assassin tattooed on the forehead. Me thinks she lost half her with after that rejection and the other half when she saw that dish smiling in the company of a girl who knew nothing about the worldly charms of a woman. So that was brainless act that she did pull up together. But I still hitching a ride on this wagon for it is an absolute thrill to check em all out with their master plans! Swara's monologues were honestly a treat here!




Sasha is losing it moment by moment, her ego is so thoroughly razed...it is co comical that all her charms are slipping away like rain water down the drain, oh yeah the visuals! So Gaby walks out on her for the...third(?) time and is back on the home territory. Okay I marvel this guy now! If someone would have told me after the first few chapters that this is how Gaby will turn out I probably would have laughed at that person clutching my stomach from falling down! I so, so, so love these men with a choirboy-ish trait hidden in them, how can he make simple statements sound like unbreakable promises without going overly enthusiastic about the same? He doesn't wish to sleep in the fuchsia bedroom without even knowing what this actually translates into! If its possible then I love him more. I think it was absolute bliss! BTW pink is no color to live by or red as for that matter. I have had rooms of these colors and I used to get up with massive bout of headaches every morning...well if you call 11 o'clock morning that is! White it is for me, yeah hospital/dispensary kind but without any headaches. And floral prints?? I am with Sanskaar on this one! Too girly...



Chapter 51


The other half century!!!!! Whoot some more!!!



Those Sasha monologues made me imagine her as Hades from Hercules with her head constantly on fire!


And Maddy is back in glorious Technicolor minus the face that is still pale but he is back!! Oh what a relief! And this guy still has the balls to go all wolf on this siren after having been down for the night? Maan gaye ustaad! And damn that Swara is past the hair pulling phase...it would have been so cool to see her pulling her perfectly styled hair! Oh the feels!!



So the desperate measure turned out to be PICNIC? Man I was expecting so much out of Sasha...this one turned out to be a dimwit! Dhat! I exhausted my energies over a stupid one...hopefully Jack and Viper would be better! So a secluded vineyard...how very clichd, no problem...I can smell that her end is pretty near! Okay who called up Maddy? Is it Max or someone else or maybe he too has a girlfriend!!! I'll honestly pass out if that happens!



So Sasha takes our Sanskaar...sorry Gabriel over to take a bite and then kill him over...seriously what is this woman thinking? Taking down Numero Uno is a cake walk or what? It is like saying a student of humanities can design a rocket with liquid fuel? She is that bimbo sans any brain! Who made her an assassin is my question?? Like who?? And Gaby walks out for the fourth time! Ego is probably blown to bits and pieces and is scattered to the passing winds...aye beti ab tera kya hoga??



And she comes back like a half eaten zombie only to attack on something that Gabriel hold as the most precious. What a wrong move, honestly what is she thinking? What was she smoking before pulling this stunt on Gabriel's Kitten?? And boy what was massive confession was that?


"I WILL kill you Sasha; woman or not if you hurt my girl. There are no rules that I won't break for this girl. No ethics I won't raze and no morals that I won't breach for this girl. So for the final time... LET HER GO!"

If this isn't a confession of love then I don't what is! The most unconventional way to let the cat out of the bag! I swear that I died and went to heaven only to return back and admire this wonderful tale some more!


And the Hell Cat is back oh so deliciously! Solar plexus jabbed: strike one! Instep utilized: strike two! Upper cut on the delicate nose: strike three! The butt of the face colliding with a stunning face: strike four! And you're out Sasha woman! This Swara is a tough nut to crack and Gaby knows that now!


And that whirlpool of turned emotions and ambience unleashes. So Sasha wasn't as stupid as I thought her to be, she did come with a back up and is now aiming at Gabriel who won't go against his ethics for its him in question and not his girl! How twisted is his head precisely? I swear my jaw dropped to the floor! I was on the verge of pulling my head and then I did when I read Swara ran to take that shot! Parmeshwara...I can swear I had an angina...don't kill me like that I am barely in my twenties and I have to enjoy life a little before my budhapa kicks in!



Oh Maddy, Mavrick...I could kiss you senseless if you were in front of me for saving my heart that is tough otherwise. Woah so the Assassin he had been boasting of all that while does come to the fore and how! No wonder this guy is the second on line to the legendary Angel himself! That fiery streak in him today was unleashed so coldly! Bamn!



Aww! That tender, tender moment between Sanskaar and his girl. Sweet dessert ending to a masaledaar dish! So Gabriel always has his mind up and running even when he is playing Swara's Sanskaar, how adorable is that...and of course there is Maddy...he genuinely cares for his elder brother that he has created for himself and loves to the moon and back and of course his new bestie is added in that equation. No wonder these two hit off so well. Even he has bared his soul open for her to see and such a gentle one he harbors, Nimmo di from where do you create such characters...ones that can literally blow away your breath...this is pretty as it gets. So it is one down and two to go before meeting the big daddy. Wokay...gimme some more!



P.S. How is your cold now? Are you alright? Did you go to the doctor? Or better than that...did you have a steamy bowl of chicken chilly? That is the best defense against cold...personal experience! Take care di, you have to take us on a massive ride, and you need to have all your stamina intact for the same!



P.P.S. I discovered the Angel here! I am sooo happpy that I did! Ciao!

Edited by Meself - 10 years ago
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Machi... 🤗 ahhh...its my stomach... Man I'm loving this maverick to the core yaar...

Gaby baby what to say about him... No words for him in my hardware.. I used every words...

When she started paying more attention to you when the magnificent me was sitting in front of her!" Maddy shrugged his shoulders.
I brust into laughter re my neighbour was scared of me now... She thinks that I have some problems.

But that doesn't mean he won't kick that guy's butt if he gets too friendly with his Kitten.
No one is allowed to get cozy with a certain Swara Bose barring Sanskaar himself ofcourse!

Full of possessiveness... Man she is his... He is hers awesome...

Again I'm telling you don't kill my mave...


Lol...
Love yaaa...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 10 years ago
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Res.


Hey Nimmi! 🤗

I'm back. I've got a lot to catch up with! Will comment after that. 😃

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