SWASAN together forever..... Part 10 updated (page 16) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Great work
sanskar se khatra lolz
ragin and sujata's reaction love it.
Update more soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
wow romantic one...4th one must b adarsh...i wish dis story fr d show too...but alas ...we hv to bear all rona dhona n torture...in dis wk...keep writting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
nice update
cute scene
eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Who is that chaar wala?very nice interesting...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Nice update.. Bang on..nd who's the 4th person?
Nd thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Superb
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..such a nice update hasini 😃
really cute fights between swasan😳
thank god unke beech sab kuch teek hogaya..
aur swara waaapas aagayi
ab ragini ki band bajegi👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...awsum. .loved it..plzz pm me wen u post da nxt part n do update da nxt part asap n do pm me wenever u post the nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks alot for your support friends...i really wanted to reply for each & every comment of yours..but as i'm groupbie i'm not permitted to post more than 20 posts in 24 hours...

So i would like to thank everyone for likes & comments...Luv u alll 🤗🤗

Part 5

The three were shocked at the voice...they saw round the room...but they didn't find anyone...

Sa : koun hai ????

Yahaaa ...yahaaa dekhooo

Sw : sanskaar yeh awaaj tho kidiki ki taraf se a rahi haiii...

Pa : haaa sanskaar ...

Sanskaar opens the door...3 mem shocked to see a person hanging from the pipe...

with shock on their facess...

Pa : adarsh ji...

Sa : bhayya...

Sw : adarsh bhayya

Adarsh : arey yaar thum log apne reaction baadh mein dhenaa..pehle koi tho haath dhoo mujhe... vaarna ghirjavoonga...

Sa : ek second bhayya...holds him & drags into the room from window...

Pa : sambhaaal ke...

Sw ; bhayya ...aap teek tho naa... (with concern)

Ad : haa...main teek hoon swara...

Sa : par aap yahaa kaise??? yahaa kar raahe hai aap???

Pa : haa adrash ji...aap yahaa ...aisaa ...kyun????

Ad : ye saab naa... iske vajaah se hua hai parineeta (pointing sanskaar )

Sa ; kya...mera vajhe se??? aab maine kya kiyaa...

Sw : ye aap kya bol rahe ho adarsh bhayya???

Ad : haa swaraa...wo dharasal baath hai ki..mujhe is se kuch jaraari kaam ayaa thaa...wo kal board of directors ki meeting hai naa...

Pa : tho ismein sanskaar ne kya kiya???

Ad :kaam ke baare mein is se baath karne ke liya main aapni room se bahaar aaya...aur

Pa : offooo ...adarsha ji saaf saaf bathayiyenaaa

Ad : haa parineeta...jaise main iske kaamre ki taraf jaa rahaa tha...tho e chori chupi chor ki tarah bahaar aayaa...aur chup chup ke ghar ke bahaar aa gayaaa...main bhi iskaa peecha kiyaaa...
e achanaak ghar ke peeche taraf jaake pipe ko pakad ke upar jaane lagaa...main bhi aisa hi kiyaa...thab yeh swara ke kaamre me akaar mere muh pe dharvajaa band kar dhiya...aur main aisaa lataaktha rahaa...

then they 3 broke into a laughter ...

Ad ; achaaa aap logon ko mazaak lag rahaa hai...

Sw ; sorry bhayya...

Pa ; arey koi baath nahi swara... aap bhi naa adarsh ji...

Sa ; tho aap mujhe awaaz kyun nahi dhiya...

Ad : socha tha main bhi... par mujhe lagaa ki kyun aap ko disturb karoon??

Swara embarrassed...

Ad : achaaa e saab chodoo... sach mein mujhe bahuth kush lag raha haii aapko dekhke...

Swara & sankaar exchanged looks...

Pa ; dekhaa adarsh ji inkaa pyaar...aap ne tho humare liye aisaa kabhi nahi kiyaa...

Ad : kya??? main aisa kyun karoon??? aur parineeta hum tho ek hi kaamre mein rehthe hai naa...tho main aisa kyun kidiki se avoon yaar...

Pa : abh ki baath nahi hai...patha hai swara jab main aapni maayka jathi hoon naa..thab tho yeh milne anaa tho dhoor ek phone bhi nahi karthe...

Sw : very bad bhayyaa,...

Ad : achaa teek haiii...tho thum abhi ki abhi aapni maayka chali jaa...dekhna main har ek minute ko thume call karoonga...

all shared a laugh ...

Ad ; lekin swara hum maa, papa ko bathasakthe hai ...ragini ko kuch nahi patha chalega...

Sw : nahi bhayya...please aap kisiko math bathayiye...aur aap bhi mere saath aise behave karna ki aap ko bhi mujhe yahaa ruknaa pasand nahi hai...

Pa ; par kyun swara???

Sw : kyun ki bhabhi agar aap mujhse ache behave karenge tho ragini aap ko aur pareshan karegi...

Pa : wo ragini tho hamesha hi pareshan karthe ayi hai hume...

Sw : nahi nahi bhabhi main nahi chahthi wo badepapa , bademaa , maa, papa aur aap sab ke saath aisa behave kare...

Ad : agar hum aisa karenge bhi na...tho ragini hume pareshan karnaa nahi chodegi...

Sw ; nahi bhayya...remember dushman ka dushman dosth...

Ad : yeh bhi teek hai ...

Pa : teek hai...aab hum chalthe hai...dekha main tho asli baath hi bhool gayee... hum thumhare liye khanaa leke ayaa tha...thum kha lenaa swara...

Sw : haa bhabhi ...

Pa : chaliye adarsh ji...

Ad : haa chalo ...

by saying this...again adarsh goes to window...

Pa : adarsh ji kya kar rahe hai aap..phirse kidiki ???

Ad : wo ...sorry...kuch samajh mein nahi aa rahaa...ok sanskaar , swara...good night ...aur sanskaar jaldi so janaa..kal office mein meeting hai ..yaad hai na...hume jaldi janaa hai

Sa : ji bhayya

then both left from their room...

Sa : swara yeh kya??? thum ne khanaa kyun nahi kahaa???

Sw : wo ...main...mujhe bhuk nahi hai sanskaar...

Sa ; bhuk nahi hai...arey aise kaise...khanaa tho khalenaa chahiye...

then he takes the pate & feeds her...she too feeds her ...enjoys their moment...

Sw ; sanskaar kya kal board of directors meeting hai??

Sa ; haa...wo ragini ko sabse milnaa haiii isliye...

Sw : mathlab kal ragini office ayegiii

Sa : haa...ghar mein uski tamasha kaam nahi hai ab office mein bhi karegi...patha nahi badepapa aisa kyun kar rahe ho???

Sw : meri samajh mein bhi nahi araahe hai sanskaar ...divorce papers par bhi meri sign liyaa thaa

Sa : wahi hume pathaa lagaani haiii...

Sw : kaise karenge sanskaar?? kuch clue bhi nahi milrahaa hai??shayad agaar wo photo ho tho...

taking her into his arms...

Sa : sab ho jaayegaa swaraa...hum dhono saath mein hai naa..tho sab teek ho jayegaaa...

both hug each other...& slept ...then early in the morning ...sanskaar left for his room...

Next Day morning...

all at breakfast table...

Ra : papaji aap ne sab directors ko inform karliyaa naa???

Dp : haa...

Ra : tho meeting kithne baaje Ki hai papaji ???

Dp :10:30 AM

Ra : teek hai hum pahoonch jaayengee...

Su : je chori ko office ki baare mein kya maloom hai jiji...wahaa bhi sabke saamne humari izzath uchhad dhegiii...

Ap : chup ho jaa sujataa...

Su arey jiji...yeh chup ho jao ke alavaa aur kuch bhi kahonaa hume...jaise ki ragini ko thapad maro...uski galaa dabhadho.. aisaa kuch bolonaa jijii...aur dekh lenaa hum karthe ki nahi...

Ra : kya hua chachiji...kya baath kar rahe hai aap???

Su : wo..kuch naa ragini...aaj ki khane mein kounsa sabji karna haiii...aur kithna namak dalnaa haiii wahi jijji se pooch rahe hai...

then swara comes to breakfast table...

by seeing her ragini & dadimaa leaves...

La : acha lagaa swara thume wapas dekh kar ...


Swara smiles at him...

Su : dekho jijji...ek chali gayee...aur je bangali chori agayee...aab iskaa kya hukum hogaaa...

Ap : chalo sujata yahaa se ...rasoi mein humara madhad karo...

Swara feels bad that bademaa aur mom ne use ignore kiyaa...

then everyone starts to leave to office... sanskaar wants to say bye to swara...par use moukaa nahi milrahaa haiii...walking on stairss he turns back & smiles to swara then gives a flying kiss to her with out anyone's knowledge...

Swara catches that & blushes...
but then sujata comes back on some other work & sees this...she gets shocked...& runs to annapurna screaming ...

Su : jijjii...jijjii...jijjii...

Ap : sujata..kya hua aisa kyun chilla rahi ho???

Su : (starts crying ) areyyy ke bathavoo jijji...maraa choraa maraa haath se gayaa jijjiii...je bangali chori maraa bete pe kalaa jadhoo kar dhiyaa...aab kya hoga jijji...hey bhagawan aab main kya karoon???

Ap : sujata...thum kya bol rahe hao??

Pa : kya hua chachiji???

Su : wo ...abhi sanskaar...us bangali chori...ko...chi.chi chiii...maare ko tho sharam a rahi hai jijji...kuch karo na ..jijji...

Ap : sujata lagtha hai ki thumharaa thabhiyaath karab haiii...chalo jao..aur kuch der araam karo...parineeta ...leke jao

Su : na naa jijji..maraa thabhiyaat teek hai...us bangali chori teek nahi hai jijji...

Pa : chachiji aap ayiyee ...

then she takes her to room ...then swara messages to parineeta to meet her... by watching the surroundings she went to meet her

Ragini's room :

Da : arey thu kyun pareshan ho rahe hai laado

Ra : us swara ko hum dekhthe hi kuch acha nahi lagtaa hai dadimaa...

Da : chodo na laado...je tho theen mahine ki baath hai...

Ra : nahi Dadimaa...hume nahi lagtha hai ki...yeh theen mahine ki baath hai...hume kuch teek nahi lag rahaa hai dadimaa...

Da ; mathlab ???

Ra : aap khudh hi sochiye dadimaa...kuch dhin pehle thak swara sanskaar ke liya thadapthi thi...aur kal achanaak usne sanskaar se use khathra hai karke kahaa ...aur divorce papers par bhi usne aanjaan mein sign kiyaa tha...aur aab usne uske baare mein bilkul nahi bathkar rahi hai...chup hai...kyun??? jharoor kuch hai dadimaa...shayad swara kuch karne ki koshish kar rahi hai...bas ek bar patha chal jayee thab hum swara ka zindagi aisa karenge ki wo zindagi baar bhul na jayee...

Da : Laado thum jyadha soch rahi ho...ho saktha hai ki ab swara bhi inse nafhrath karthi hai...kyon ki in sab ne bhi use ghar se jaane ke liye kehdhiya tha na...achaa ye sab chodo laado...thume office janaa hai naa...thayyar ho jao...

Ra : ji... (leaves from there )

Swara's room :

Pa : kya hua swara ...thumne hume bhulayaa kuch kaam tha...

Sw ; haa bhabhi aap ko kisine dekha tho nahi naa...

Pa: nahi...

Sw : bhabhi hume aap ki madhath chahiye...

Pa: bolo kya kaarna haiii...

both discusses something...& parineeta leaves from swara's room...

swara to herself ...Ragini ...thum jo bhi kar rahe ho..bahuth galath hai...aab ye sab thum pe baari padne wala hai...

End of part5
Thanks alot for Reading...
Suhasini

Precap : Ragini in Board of Directors meeting ...insulting DP...sanskaar & Laksh Furious.DP & veil lady confrontation.

Edited by hasinig89 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
hey suhasini...sujjAta is as usual funny...n d best part was aadrsh pari n swasan moment...update soon dear

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