SWASAN together forever..... Part 10 updated (page 16) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritika52

nice update...n nice twist...

sanskar saw swara putting sindoor...
haww...theif samj k vase se maara...
bt nice...MU gone...swasan moment...
ragini ko khatra from both sides..yayyy
nice precap...plz PM me




thank you...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
A very very very Big hug 🤗 to all you guys...your support is awesome...i have been in this form for more than 4 years...but i wasn't active & also i really wanted to FF long time back...but i got scared ...now after seeing all your love & support even i'm confident about me...Thanks for all this...😊😊

Coming to FF ...as we are not getting enough swasan on screen...my priority will be given to them mostly in my FF...so here again part 3 full of swasan... 😳

I hope you all like my work...compliments ke saath saath suggestions bhi dhijiye...so that i can improve my self better...

PART 3


Swara & sanskaar's hug... After a few mins both come into their senses...

Sa : (with concern )swara ...thum teek ho na... wo sorryy..main thum pe chillaya...

Sw : wahhh ...chillathe ho...aur baadh mein sorry bhi bolthe ho...

Sa : kya karoon yaar... wo papers par thumhare signature dekhne ke baadh... ..suddenly he remembers & asks

Sa : yeh sab chodo aur mujhe yeh bathao thumne kab sign kiya ? Aur kyun kiya?? Mathlab maine thume dho dhin kya tadapayaa...thum divorce papers par sign karliya...aab chup kyun ho?? Bolo...jawab dho..

Sw : ek second mr.sanskaar maheswari..mujhe bolne tho dho...maine divorce papers pe koi sign nahi tha...

Sa : nahi kiya mathlab...wo tho thumhari sign thi na...

Sw : sign tho meri hi hai...lekin jab sign kar raha tha tab mujhe nahi patha ki yeh divorce papers hai..

Sa : yeh thum kya bol rahe ho swara...

Sw : wo ...sanskaar... kal hum dhono baath kar rahe the na mere kaamre mein ...thab koi door knock kiya tha...

Sa : haa...knock kiya tha...usi chakkar mein thumne jo bolna tha wo complete bhi nahi kiya...

Sw : arey...suno na sanskaar... thab badepapa aye the...

Sa : badepapa??? kyun??

Sw : ha...aur unhomne kahaa ki kuch shares thumhare aur mere naam pe hai ...tho uska kuch formalities ke liye mere sign liyaa tha

Sa : mathlab????

Sw : haa sanskaar ...badepapa jo documents mere paas leke aya tha...usme yeh divorce ki papers bhi mila hogaa...

Sa : par swara thumne mujhse kyun nahi kahaa???sign ke baarein mein..

Sw : maine sochaa ki kal raath bahuth late hogayee...subah bathavoongi...lekin ye ragini subah subah shuru ho gayi... aur wo sign dekhne ke baadh ...mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aayaa...aur sab ke saamne main badepapa ka naam nahi le sakthi...

Sa : lekin badepapa aisa kyun kiya ???

Sw : (thinking deeply )...even mujhe bhi samajh mein nahi aayaa sanskaar...aisa kya hua badepapa ke saath?? us dhin party mein bhi unhomne documents wapas dhene ke liye kahaa tha...jaroor kuch hua hai...aur photograph mein bhi unka expression...

Sa : mathlab iss baar ragini badi chaal chali hai...wo hume patha lagaanaa hai...

Sw : haa ..par kaise...

Sa : achaaa yeh sab chodo...chalo main thume baadi chod detha hoon...

Sw : (she shouts suddenly ...for which sanskaar jumps ) Baadiii

Sa : swara ..kya huaa...

Sw : thume kya hua... aur main baadi kyun javoongi...

Sa : agar baadi nahi javogi tho kaha javogi???

both starts fighting...
Sw : kahaa ka mathlab?? apni sasural ...javoongi...aur kahaa

Sa : lekin thum wapas ghar kaise javogi?? aur sabse kya kahoge??

Sw : (with full attitude ) kahoge main nahi...kahoge thum...

Sa : main...main kyun kahoonga...

Sw : kyun ki thumne mujhe ghar se jaane ke liya kahaa tha naa...tho thum hi mujhe wapas lekar javoge...

Sa : lekin sign thumne kiya tha na...

Sw : pehle thumne kiya tha naa????

Sa : lekin alaag ho ne ka idea thumharaa tha naa???

Sw :achaaa...abbb sab kuch mere upaar dal rahe ho??

Sa : maine kuch nahi dalaaa...sab sach kahaa tha maine...aur swara yeh kya...thum kyun typical wife ki tarah behave kar rahe ho yaar???

Sw : achaa...tho aap kounsa ideal husband ki tarah behave kar rahe the??

Sa : thumse baath karnaa bekaar hai... (turns to oppsoite side )

Sw : mujhe bhi thumse koi baath karne kaa shouk nahi hai (she too turns away )...

after a while...both in their minds...yeh kya kiya maine...sorry boldethi hoon...& both turns to each other & says sorry at a time...

Both : Sorryyy...

they both smiles...

Sa : please swara baadi chaloo...main kuch sochthaa hoon ...thab thak thum baadi mein raho..please maan jao...( with pleading voice )

Sw : teek hai...lekin sirf ek dhin ka time hai thumhare paas...(with demanding tone)

Sa : (joining both his hands infront of her & bending hids head ) acha...okayyy abbb chalooo meri Bengali sherni...

Swara laughed at her name... & they both went off in their car...

their car reach baadi...when swara tries to get down...he hold her hand & asked

Sa : swara kal raath thum kuch bol rahe the na...

Sw : achaa... pehle thum main aapni sasural wapas kaise anaa hai ...uske baare mein sochoo...

by saying this ...she came out of the car...

Sa : swara ...swara...

Sw : (teasingly) ...bye sanskaarrr...

she went in...& he too drove off with a smile...

swara enters into her house...her mom sees her & comes to her worriedly...

Sharmista : shona...thum kaha reh gaayi thi...aur kithne baar phone kiya tha thumne ...utayaaa kyun nahi...

then swara checks her mobile...it was on silent mode...

Sw : wo maa...silent pe tha...

then she changes to ring mode...

Sh : yeh kya hua shona...thumne divorce papers par sign kiyaa..??? kyun??

Sw : maa sab ko yeh sab kaise pathaaa ...

Sh : wo aaj subah maine thume phone kiya...thume nahi utayaa...aur maine maheswari house ko kiya...thab thumari dadimaa ne baath ki...aur kahaa ki thum ghar chodkaar aayi ho...kya sab kya hai shonaa

Sw: maa...relax...aap ko apni shona par bharosaa hai naa...

Sh : ( nods her head )...

Sw : bas aap chintha math kijiye...main bahuth jaldh us ghar javoongi...aur apni rishte ko bhi thootne bachavoongi...

Sh : teek hai shonaa...aab jao aur fresh ho jao main thumhare liye kuch khane ke liye le aathi hoon...

then swara starts to leave her room...then some one appers at the door... sharmista sees him...

Sh : ji...boliye...koun chahiye aapko?

person : mujhe swara ji se baath karna hai ...

listening this swara comes back...& asks him

Sw : ji boliyeee ...main hoon swara...

Person : Ji mera naam Subash Chatterjee...

Sw : Subash chaterjee??? maine kahi dekhaa hai aapko...aap...aap tho famous lawyer hai naa...

Person ; ji mam...

Then swara's mobile beeps...message from sanskaar

msg : Hiii ...maine lawyer se baath kiya ..aur unko thumhare paas bheja bhi tha...unse baath karlenaa...aur maa ko bhi kuch nahi bathanaa...bye...Love..sanskaar

Swara replies... wow...mere lovely hubby...ithna fast action...impressed...

then she invites him in...

Sh : shonaa...thumne lawyer ko kyun bulayaa???

Sw : divorce ke baare mein baathkarne ke liye maa...
after a sec...maa kya aap inkeliye coffee layoge please...

Sh : teek hai...abhi lathi hoon...

then swara & lawyer both discusses ...& he leaves...

that night being with her mom...swara was unable to call or msg sanskaar...both misses each other very much...they both reminisced each & every moment of their past day...

Next day morning... at maheswari mansion...

everyone in hall...

Ra : hume aaj ek party rakhna chahthe hai...swara is ghar se chali gayee haii...tho is kushi mein hum party rakhna chahthe hai...

Sujata (whispering to Annapurna): je dekho jiji...is chori tho haar roj party jaanpoochkar rak rahi hai...thaki party mein hum se kaam karvaake sabke saamne hamari beizzathi karegi...

annapurna : chup ho jaa sujata...

Ra : tho hum sab ko party mein kya kya kaam karnaa hai yeh hum bathayenge...

then dadimaa watches at the doorway...& without turning to Ragini she says...

Da : naa Laado...thum party nahi rakhpayegiii...(with shock on her face )...

Ra : yeh aap kya keharahe hai Dadim...

She stops when she sees Swara at the entrance of the house with smile on her face & same suitcase in her hand...

all maheswaris shocked seeing her...except sanskaar...

Ragini & Dadimaa are hell shocked...

End of Part 3
more & more love
suhasini

Precap : Swasan ki chori chupi romance pakadigayee...😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Wow it was so cute loved their fight and make up.
Please update soon yaar.
Eagerly waiting for more romance and wondering who caught them.
Please please update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
aww!my babies unki fight mai bhi romance hai😳.show bhiaisi nok jhok dekhne ko mille i hope.
MERI BEGALI SHERNI☺️
just love this update..😳
just love SwaSan nok jhok❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
hey suhasini...ur ff is superb yar...better than current track..waiting fr ur next update.. . simi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
nice update...bengali sherni...heheh
nice swasan moments...nice precap..chori chupe romance...
update soon plz..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Loved both the parts. Let this b happen in serial too. Pls continue soon and pls pm me also. Read the 3rd part also love swasan's fight. so cute. pls continue soon
Edited by gayu6 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Lovely fight..
Rutna mana..
wow..

Nice..
Thank u for the pm..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Nice... Can't wait for the second part
Update more soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
wow!lovely updt.
aww!swasan z so cute.
haww!swasan ki chorichupe rmnce pakdi gayi par kisne pakra ragini ya koi aur...
cntu soon

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