SWASAN together forever..... Part 10 updated (page 16) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Read all three parts in one go...
Great story development... 😊
Loved their fight it was damn cute😳
Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
superb update dear...love it so much...ohh swasan are very cute...&& thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sarchanu

Wow it was so cute loved their fight and make up.

Please update soon yaar.
Eagerly waiting for more romance and wondering who caught them.
Please please update soon



Thank you so much...wil update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Kushimian89

aww!my babies unki fight mai bhi romance hai😳.show bhiaisi nok jhok dekhne ko mille i hope.

MERI BEGALI SHERNI☺️
just love this update..😳
just love SwaSan nok jhok❤️



😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4
All maheswari's are shocked to see swara...except sanskaar...even Dp is happy to see her...

Ragini & Dadimaa hell shocked to see her...

Sujata : ( to Annapurna )...je dekho jiji...agayeee e wapis...je dho behen nahi chodenge hume...maine tho pehle hi kahaa thaa...thab meri baath koi nahi sunaa...aab dekhoo..je chori maari bete ki zindagi barbaath karke hi rahegi...

Annapurna ; sujata... ( to swara )...kyun ayi ho swara??

swara tries to speak...but ragini interrupts...

Ra : dekho swara hume kuch nahi jan na hai...aur thum yahaa ek minute bhi reh nahi sakthe ho...

Da : teek kahaa Ladoo ne..kyun ayi ho chori aate...manne kaha tha naa dhoobaraa yahaa nahi anekiii...

Sa : thum chahthi kya ho swaraa...kyun ayi ho yahaa par???

Sw : (with full attitude ... walks down the stairs...) arey bathathi hoon bathathi hoon...

Ra : humne kahaa bahaar jaane ke liye...abhi ki abhi thum yahaa se nahi gayee naa...tho...

swara cuts her...

Sw :tho kya ragini???...kya karego???

Ra : teek hai...hum abhi samajh wale ko bhulathe hai...

She takes her mobile to call them... but swara interrupts...

Sw : arey ragini call karne ki kya jaroorath hai...ek minute ruko...

then she calls...

Sw ; kakaa...aap yeha kyun kade ho??andhar ayiyee please...

then 3 members comes inside ...seeing them Ragini puts Pallu on her head...

Ra : dekhiye na kakaa...e swara wapas agayee...kal tho isne talak ke papers par sign kiyaa...aur ghar chodkaar chali gayi..phir aaj wapas agaye...

Kaka : ha beta...swara ne aaj subah hamare pass ayi thi..lawyer saab ko lekaar...

Ra : lawyer ko lekaar ...

Sw : lawyer saab ...aap zaraa inko poora bathayenge please...

Lawyer : ji...aaj se meri client Mrs.Swara Sanskaar Maheswari agale 3 mahine thak yehi rahegi

Ra : yehi rahegi??? kyun rahegi...isne tho thalak ki papers par sign karliyaa naa tho

La : Madam ...sirf papers par sign karne se thalak nahi hotha...court bhi approve karni chahiye...aur kal yahaa se anee ke baadh meri client court mein document register karnavaliyaa...

Da : jo bhi ho...wo hogayii na...tho je chori yahaa kyun rahegi???

La : jiii ...jo bhi thalak lenaa chahthe hai...use court 3 mahine saath rehne ki aadesh dhethi hai...aur uss 3 mahine ke baadh agarr unka faisla vahi rahaa..tho court unhe thalak manjoor dethi hai...

Ra : iskaa mathlabbb...

Sw ; mathlab yeh ragini ki agale 3 mahine thak main yehi rahoongi...aur yehi baath maine aaj subah samajh mein jakaar kahaa thaa...hai na kakaa

Ka ; ha beta...isne lawyer saab se akaar humse baath ki...aur agaar court ne yeh faisla liya tho hume bhi follow karna chahiye...aur agaar 3 mahine mein inkaa rishta teek hua tho yeh acchi baath hi hai naa...

saying this samajh wale leaves from their...

Sujata : naa main na manoongi yeh baath...mujhe yeh ladki yahaa nahi chahiye...wapas apni chore ki zindagi mein nahi aane dhoongi...

Annapurna : thum chup rahoo sujata...

Ra : hum bhi nahi maanthe is baath ko...thum yahaa nahi rehsakthe hai swara...

La : dekhiye madam agar aap ne court ki baath nahi manee tho yeh ullangan hogaa...

ragini keeps quiet... them lawyer to swara

Sw : teek hai madam ...main chaltha hoon..aur yahaa par aapko koi bhi dhikkath hogi tho aap mujhe bathathiye...aur haa...jo naam aapne bathayaa thaa...wo naam maine documents mein bhi shamil kardhiyaa

Ra : koun sa naam??? (with doubtfull face )

sw ; meri client ko iss ghar mein kisise khathra hai...tho unhe kuch bhi hua tho sazaaa unko milthi hai...

after listening this...
ragini in her mind... zaroor isne humaraa naam hi dhiyaa hogaaa...

Sujata in her mind...kahi je chori maara naam tho nahi dhiya...

sujata : je kya keh rahe ho lawyer saab...hum sab tho swara se bahuth pyaar karthe ...agarr koi dushman hai tho wo hai je chori Ragini... pakka swara ne iskaa naam hi dhiyaa hogaa...

ragini trembles by hearing this...

La : jiii nahi...ragini ka naam nahi hai...swara ji ne jo naam dhiyaa...wo hai...

all are listening very much attentionnn..

La ; Mr.Sanskaar Maheswari...

sabbb ek hi bhaarrr : kyaaa???????

even sanskaar was stunned to listen this...

La : ji unhe Sanskaar ji se khathra hai... teek hai aab main chalthaa hoon...

saying this he leaves...

sanskaar , dp , rp ,adarsh ,laksh left for office
while leavind DP touched swara's head giving her ashirvaad ...she felt very happy...
& women in their household works...
Ragini & Dadimaa ka saar phat gayaa swara ke baare mein sochthe sochthe...

At night... all returned from office...swara in guest room...sanskaar in his room...from morningg due to hectic sanskaar didn't get a single minute to call swara...now he is in his room

Sa : subah se usse baath nahi kiyaa...ab kaise baath karoon???
use tho nahi chodungi ...kya use mujhse khathraa haii???

then he came out of his room...tiptoed to outside of the house...then by climbing pipe he went to the window of swara's room...now the lights are on & even the window is opened... unlike yesterday today swara was waiting for him...soon he reached into room ...he closed the window immediately...

Sw : sanskaar thum aaj bhi window se ayaa kyun??maine tho door khulla rakaa hai..

Sa : (didn't speak...only glaring...)

Sw : kya hua ...thum mujhe aise kyun ghoor rahe ho...

he steps forward... she backward...then she pinned to cupboard...

he held both his hands on both sides of her...looking into her eyes...

Sa ; kya mujhse thume khathra hai...

Sw ; wo sanskaar...thum hi ne tho kahathaa naa ki hume aisa karna chahiye thaki ragini ko laake hamare beech mein jagada ho rahe hai ..isliye...

Sa :achaaa...teek haiii agaar naam dhedhiyaa ho thoo...kuch uska faidha utayenge...

Sw :(embarrased ...lookin into his eyes...tremblingg) ...k..k..kya ..kya kar rahe ho...

Sanskaar with out moving from the position...he came close to her...she closed her eyes...he switching his glances from her eyes to lips...he came forward closeee to her lips...now he can clearly here the rhythm of her heartbeat...the moment which can be memorable throughout their life... he was almost touching her lips...& bending forward for a lovely kiss...

suddenly doors opened & came a voice...

swaraa...thume khanaa nahi kha...

both swara & sanskaar composed themselves...but of no use...she has seen themmm

both : Bhabhi aap???

parineeta : swara ,...sanskaar...yeh sab kya hai...thum dhono yahaa...aise...(with shock )

Sanskaar quickly came & closed doors

Pa : bathao hume yeh sab kya hai??? aap dhono tho divorce le rahe the naa...aur sanskaar thum yahaaa???

Sanskaar & swara both realised that thay can't hide truth from her...

Sa : wo bhabhi...hummm...

Pa : mathlab ...aap dhono nataak kar rahe the?? hai na...

Sw : nahi ...nahi bhabhi...sach mein hum ...d..i..vo..rce...

Pa : joot math bolo swara hum ne dekhliya...sach bathao hume...

Sa : haa bhabhi...hum nataak kar rahe the...thaki hum ragini ko handle kar saake...

Pa : jo bhi ho sanskaar ...hum tho bahuth kush hai aap ko dekhkaar...sach mein hume bahuth buraa lagaa aap ke divorce mein..lekin kya kaare hum kuch nahi karpayii

Sw : chodiye na bhabhi...hum tho sab teek hai naa..

Pa : Ha swara... (hugs her )...ruko hum abhi maa , papaji ko bathathe hai...wo kithne pareshan hai aap ko lekaar...

Sa : nahi bhabhi...

Pa : kyun?? kya hua sanskaar???

Sa : wo bhabhi...hum chahthe hai ki e baath aap kisiko nahi bathay...agar sab ko patha chalega tho ragini ko bhi patha chal jayegaa...

Pa : hmmm...e baath tho sach hai...teek hai hum kisiko bhi nahi bathayenge...

Sw : haa bhabhi..yeh baath hum 3 mein ho ni chahiye...

3 nahiii charr...charrr haii...( a voice came suddenly...)

All 3 shocked at the voice...

End of Part 4

Thanks for reading
suhasini

Precap : Ragini in Board Meeting of Maheswaris group of industries
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Wow!gd updt.
Bt why she put sanskar's name?
Ahaan!chori chori rmnce.
Pari catch thm.if m nt wrng othr1 z laksh.
Thnks 4 pm.cnt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Loved the update suhasini. Loved swara's entry with the help of lawyer and even samaaj people. And if swasan want ot continue their relation samaaj people was happy for tat.Hope the 4th person ll b adharsh. Pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Swara ko Sanskar se khatra hai woh to hona hi chaye ziyada romantic ho jata ha na☺️
Sanskar shocked ho gya yeh sun ke
just love the update
Thanks for the PM..
4th perrson kon hoga
romeo Sanskar waiting for this in the show eagerly☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
read all the parts together.nyc story.swasan are cute.waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Nice..
Who is the 4th person??
Uttara!!

Continue soon..
Thank you for the PM...

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