Resolved - Part 1, The Restitution Series - Page 9

Originally posted by: sarra0

Hope ur having a great holiday 😊

Finally got round to reading part 1...i know i have res on part 2 and that on first page as well, i promise i will get there as soon as i can...pakka promise with cherry on top...

ragani description spot on...cherubic face and venemous inside...the actions she has got away with, or the way AP, laksh, sujata have defended her, believed her, fallen for her lies many times is because of their perception which they cant seem to break from along with the look and delivery...

Ur writing gives a voice and reason to sanskaar...i have faith in sanskaar and that has not wavered...u have made his emotion, his pain, his helplessness speak...he knows he has to b strong, he has to lose a battle to win the war where one misstep cud cost everything and for that he has to hurt the one he loves and values above everything else and in the process make himself bleed...every hurt swara feels wil b magnified for him and he will suffer, he knows he is back in the malestrom of a storm and he knows swara so well her biggest strenght is also her weakness...because she has that desire to b loved, accepted...u have so aptly captured not only his dilemma but his resolute self...

This track is beyond my understanding...i wanted swasan seperation because i felt mayb that wud b the only way swara wud realise sanskaars value, and v got it, and going by WU it looks like some strong performences by the two...i can understand sanskaar believing that swara doesnt loves him, and unfortunately swara apart from words hasnt shown him any diffferent...wat i didnt like was swara on her knees begging sanskaar and him letting it happen if there is no plan, and contrary to his actions from b4...most of the rest i am fine with...sanskaar i mean, not talking about the rest of ragani and co crap...

I did not cheat and have not read part 2...so not sure on content and context...so if this comment covers part of that sorry...

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Sarra 🤗

Been missing you and our discussions on the AT! Thanks so much for reading and commenting and don't worry about the res on part 2, totally understand. I'll look forward to it and will enjoy it just as much as I have loved reading this one! Thanks for this and for the well wishes too, I am having a great holiday, thanks!

So glad you felt this version made sense with the descriptions and the actions. The current track is beyond comprehension as in their mindless quest for drama the cvs always stretch things too far. We already suffered this when we were not getting closure on the stupid Swara and Lakshya angle and it seems this is now their latest torture tactic. I too see Sanskaar like us majority of Sanskaar fans, he can be angry and rightly so here but making Swara suffer so much, that's not possible for me.

My part 2 is rather different from the show. In the show there's way too much uncertainty now. Like literally logic is totally AWOL to make way for more melodrama. It's like- who is negative, why, what purpose, who will be redeemed, who won't, no clarity on any points, and I don't really care too much about the others but they seem to be totally masking what Sanskaar is really up to and even causing doubts as to whether it's his plan or their MU is so stupid that he actually totally mistrusts Swara. I don't think so - I think he's play acting but generally it's all very tiresome. To be honest that getting on her knees scene was different to how it felt reading it from the LU. What I didn't like is Sanskaar giving her no sign that would allow her hope whatsoever although I guess his tear drop was that in the show! Part 2 you might like what I did with SwaSan and hopefully part 3 will clear the mystery of what is really going on:).

Much love to you mmmwah

Originally posted by: sarra0

Been missing u and discussions as well, thou i am not currently watching the show but thats never stopped me from stating stuff 😆😆.. glad ur having a good time...

Laksh wanting swara back i cud understand,him trying to win her back, or create MU i can understand, not agree with but can understand, but once again the way cvs went about it wasnt well done...

Sanskaar had broken his friendship with swara, but was concerned and angry with the risk swara took to expose laksh...sanskaar was upset with swara but didnt let her serve at the party or be insulted by ragani later...he stood in front like a dhaal...so wat changed?? Wat happened that he is now not showing his concern involuntarily like that...that quick aboutface cant b just because he feels hurt..there has to b something more..thou cvs r bipolar mayb they have made sanskaar one as well...yes teardrop was that hope to swara, it gave her a sign but there is only so long that can keep u going with nothing further apart from possibly more dejection...

The show certainly has lot it completely, all plots, all characters, everything apart from sanskaar had gone for a toss, once sanskaar goes then they will lose a high number of online fans...lets c if they can balance and to wat extent...who can b redeemed is a interesting question...because in real majority wud not b forgiven for their action...but this is reel and anything is possible...

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Res.

I hope you are having a lovely holiday and I will unres tomorrow!

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Res.

I hope you are having a lovely holiday and I will unres tomorrow!

I absolutely adored this!

I am a Sanskaar fan so this was heaven because it's purely Sanskaar centric. You justified his behaviour and I thank you for that. It doesn't seem like CVs are in a hurry to show us the reason for his behaviour so I was so very glad to read this!

Ragini has reserved herself a very special place in hell after what she has done and is still doing. She finally achieved a place in Sanskaar's hate list and that is no mean feat! The guy is usually so laid back but she targeted the one person she should have left alone! Swara is Sanskaar's weakness like you mentioned in the story but she is also his biggest strength.

For me, the best part of this whole story was Sanskaar's overwhelming love for Swara. HIs every thought, every plan and every feeling revolves around her! oh, to be loved like that! Swara is truly a lucky girl and I am so glad that she finally realized that.

Also loved how Sanskaar followed her all the way to Baadi. He watched over her until the last minute and for some odd reason that got to me. Yes, I know, I am weird.

You captured Sanskaar's turmoil perfectly. His rage, helplessness, hate, love... Hats off!

Originally posted by: foresight

Okay...so I started literally reverse in this series. I read Recompense yesterday at 2:00am, too tired to review it, plus I wanted to read the first two parts. On I am doing this in the right order now.

There are so many emotions flowing in this. Swara and Sanskar's of course shine through beautifully. The way you have shown sanskar, the different layers and feelings is a delight to read.

Right from his reaching the breaking point with the distrust, her lashing out at her, feeling good about it for a short while but each of the painful moments wrecking even more pain for him. His need to stand up for her with Ragini which complicated things and bought more forceful attack that has him worried about Swara. The need to put the mask on even in front of Swara, though he cannot always hold on to it in front of her, his awareness of her one big weakness - her ability to forgive Ragini which she had paid so dearly for, his own weakness - his swara - which he pretends doesnt exist. his following her to ensure she has reached Baadi safely. Them connecting in the end at almost a spiritual level/out worldly level.

This was one emotional OS that was beautiful put together and a delight to read. On to the next one in the series now

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