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Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

It was awesome Os dear...

Enjoy ur vacation...

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: anu91
It was awesome Os dear...
Enjoy ur vacation...

Thank you so much Anu!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: inlieu
Shruti! If you had written this with an old-fashioned fountain/ink pen, I bet the color of your words would be a bright shade of red. Your words seemed to bleed as Sanskaar's and Swara's hearts are bleeding, as are ours. I loved how you didn't hold back and let out whatever pent up emotions/frustrations you must be feeling for Sanskaar and on his behalf! 😃
Sanskaar is the sort of character that is most deserving of happiness but it always seems to evade him in one way or the other. He is always having to choose between his family and his love too. I find it impossible to believe that he hasn't caught on to the mystery behind DP's desperation, even though he may have only started investigating it. He is just not the sort of person to lose sight of current events and wallow in misery or self-pity. However, I get the feeling that once the truth is out he will again have to make a very difficult decision between family (DP) and love (Swara). It will probably be very hard for him to battle loss of respect for DP and his yearning to bond with his bade papa after all those years in exile.

I agree that he has the right to be angry with Swara and to protect himself from further heartbreak, but there is no way Sanskaar will ever stop loving her. It was pretty clear from today's episode that Swara knows this very well and is confident that his love will never change. She was trying to force him to acknowledge it, but she needs to give him space and time like he has always given her. She has let him know how she feels and now it is her turn to let him feel at ease again and come back to her on his terms. And as we all know love and forgiveness go hand in hand. Fikar not Swara, tumhara number aayega.

Truly loved this piece!

Hey Jean 🤗

Sorry for my late response, which is due to travelling. Your comment made my day. I love the idea of words bleeding in a page! I still have a very old fashioned love affair with writing. For the continuation to this OS, which is now getting turned to a mini series, I literally sat whilst travelling in my little notebook of ideas and scribbled furiously about the plot line and scenes, all of which I will then translate into typed text. So your first few lines really appealed to me:). Thank you for your kind words as always!

No I didn't hold back, usually I let go when writing anyway, whichever character it is I try to become them even if I don't personally agree with them as its not a writers job to judge, only to understand I guess.

Sanskaar always breaks my heart, like you say it seems all the worst decision making and trauma come to his share. How much is this character to suffer for being the most amazing lover in the world. I think in the show the issue is that they have to show the heroines as the hero so even if we get planning, they have to involve Swara into everything and she is so not a strategist so it's not convincing. I can draft what I like so intend to 😆.

I did want to get across the fact that I do believe Sanskaar's initial anger and even disbelief at Swara is entirely justified after all he's been put through. Plus he is an extreme sort of person, be that in love or anger or revenge. So it makes sense that is anger is so scalding. But he would never let that stop his love or watch his love get humiliated willingly and even in the show they cannot be showing this. But let's see!

Glad you enjoyed this and hope you'll read the rest when I can manage to complete and post. Lots of love mmmwah

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: JazzyM
Hi Shru...Happy holidays!
A cabin in Georgia could not distract you from SwanSan...I'm impressed!

Georgia, Europe or Georgia, US? Enjoy the beauty of the nature yar!...

Loved your take of Sanskar's behaviour...He is a strategist, and is painstakingly setting up his coins to ensure a proper closure of all the issues. Sure enough in all strategies, there will be a loop hole, Achilles heels, for Sanskar it is Swara. A lady whom he victimized, then gave solace, protected and finally starting loving. His love has always been very encompassing but not overwhelming. In reality, being able to be part of such kind of loving is a blessing; very few of us are that lucky, I would think our spouses or partners would say the same about us.

You my dear lady, brought that kind of love to the forefront. It was not 'mahan' type of love and most certainly not the mythical Zeus and Hera kind of love...describing Sanskar's portrayal is tough...but brought it out fantastically.

Enjoy the holidays and lets see how the SwaSan story revolves...

I wrote something during my trip back home, it might sound like a continuation of your story...would you mind I posted it with a note that the elements could be related to your story...?

Jazzy 🤗

Happy holidays to you too! And no it seems nothing distracts me from SwaSan 😆

We were in Georgia, US rather than back late yesterday to Florida where the main holiday is. It was beautiful there, I've been once before too. I love the mountains be that in Georgia or in Himachal, or Africa:).

So glad you liked this OS and Sanskaar's portrayal. Exactly how I see Sanskaar- a strategist and true general. That's why it irks me when they make Swara the constant mission chaser as she just blunders through everything. Sanskaar yes, he gets hamstrung by the people around him but especially Swara. You are right, the SwaSan type of love is the stuff dreams and epics are made of. I am so pleased you think I have managed to portray this through my writing.

I read your story and commented too, pleased me a lot:)

Thanks dear friend and will pm you when the next updates are posted xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
it was awesome

Thanks so much Prithi X

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Hey guys, I think I have finally caught up with all the comments so far so a big thanks again for the appreciation and support! I'm working on the next part and will aim to post it as soon as I can, subject to usual holiday demands! Lots of love to you all!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

To those who has asked, I have updated part 2, after having turned this into a mini series as you'll see from the updated title:). Part 2 is now up and is at

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4539717/rectified-part-2-the-restitution-series

Would love it if you read and commented! Many thanks like always!

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Rumadiv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Awesome continue wit nxt parts eagerly waiting

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Awesome continue wit nxt parts eagerly waiting

Hey! Thanks so much for this. I think you are a new reader? Welcome and much obliged for your time:). I've posted part 2, link is on page 1and page 11 too. Do read and tell me what you think!

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sarra0

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Hope ur having a great holiday 😊

Finally got round to reading part 1...i know i have res on part 2 and that on first page as well, i promise i will get there as soon as i can...pakka promise with cherry on top...

ragani description spot on...cherubic face and venemous inside...the actions she has got away with, or the way AP, laksh, sujata have defended her, believed her, fallen for her lies many times is because of their perception which they cant seem to break from along with the look and delivery...

Ur writing gives a voice and reason to sanskaar...i have faith in sanskaar and that has not wavered...u have made his emotion, his pain, his helplessness speak...he knows he has to b strong, he has to lose a battle to win the war where one misstep cud cost everything and for that he has to hurt the one he loves and values above everything else and in the process make himself bleed...every hurt swara feels wil b magnified for him and he will suffer, he knows he is back in the malestrom of a storm and he knows swara so well her biggest strenght is also her weakness...because she has that desire to b loved, accepted...u have so aptly captured not only his dilemma but his resolute self...

This track is beyond my understanding...i wanted swasan seperation because i felt mayb that wud b the only way swara wud realise sanskaars value, and v got it, and going by WU it looks like some strong performences by the two...i can understand sanskaar believing that swara doesnt loves him, and unfortunately swara apart from words hasnt shown him any diffferent...wat i didnt like was swara on her knees begging sanskaar and him letting it happen if there is no plan, and contrary to his actions from b4...most of the rest i am fine with...sanskaar i mean, not talking about the rest of ragani and co crap...

I did not cheat and have not read part 2...so not sure on content and context...so if this comment covers part of that sorry...

Edited by sarra0 - 9 years ago