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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: maaneetfan
Shruti...firstly I'm loving ur dedication to Swasan and us swasanians by actually sitting down to write this amazingly beautiful OS on ur mountain getaway vacation with family! !!!
Ur writings are simply a pleasure to read and the pain n sadness of both sanskaar and swara comes across as our own collective pain n sadness...oh how i want the entire sequence of this os to be true.

U hv described every expression so deeply and each action of ragini makes me hate her tenfold ...no hundredfold!! She is evil personified and the need fr sanskaar to avenge the pain inflicted by her to himself and all his loved ones is completely justified...yet his extreme control just so tht he can keep swara safe is so commendable. ... giving himself n swara so much pain just so tht she can be safe in every other way...and finally letting her see tht he is with her without any words...mind blowing scene!!!

I wish I wasn't so selfish but pls pls pls can u write a sequel to this when u r bored in the mountains yet again? ??

Have a happy vacation! !!

Love, Tasneem

Hey Tasneem 🤗

Haha, I am not sure if obsession can be called dedication but the latter sounds better so I'll take that! Thank you hugely for the lovely words you used about my writing, am so touched and grateful! You are very right, what I wrote is literally only the pain swasanians are truly feeling with the current track, which is made worse by leaked sequences and spoilers and all which make us feel truly terrible! I am so hopeful for a silver lining and i honestly don't know what I will do if the CVs let us down!

I can't believe how much I'm hating Ragini now, I did previously but now that she's totally out to destroy our SwaSan, I so felt like how I wrote Sanskaar did! Truly dearest her- how evil can she get?! Awww you want a sequel too? I wrote back on some comments on previous pages and am thinking about this or possibly a brand new TS too which will intend to deal with Ragini in full. Thank you so much for encouraging me in this way! Thanks for your well wishes too!

Much love xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
awesome os

Thanks so much Prachi:)

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Sparkler8
Shru, this is astounding. The depth of emotions you portray with mere words is a skill I salute.
The charade of Sanskaar staying stoic to Swara's pleading had been heartwrenching. At the same time, I see the winches Sanskaar has set up for her. He has pretended to push her out of his life but with the anchor of their love still intact and functioning and waiting for him to win back his Kingdom from the Medusa.

I love works that draw parallel to Achilles and Sanskaar is a character you can abuse that synonym to your hearts content. He is invicinble save for his love.

It took me a solid 30 min to read this work and I am grateful that I am reading it while travelling. If in the confines of my room, I would have bawled no less than Swara and totally forget about commenting.

Happy holidays! Merry Christmas!

Hey Sharon 🤗

Thank you so very much for your lovely words, made me so pleased to hear your take on this OS. Absolutely as you say, whilst he appeared to be indifferent even when it was killing him, Sanskaar being Sanskaar does what it takes and when it comes to Swara no sacrifice is big enough. I deliberately used the self flagellation comment in the beginning as the poor guy is feeling so much pain inflicting it on his love. You liked the Achilles parallel? I so see Sanskaar in some ways as similar. A compelling figure, tragically flawed but incredibly heroic and someone you cannot forget. I have always had a fascination with Hector and Achilles, in sharp contrast to Paris, who so reminds me of Laksh! Your travelling too? I'm very grateful you did read this and let me know how you felt about it, really appreciated. A very Merry Xmas to you and yours too!

Much love xx

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

Hey yes we've never had an opportunity to ever converse before this comment as I've been lurking in the backfront of this forum like a silent reader but certain stories do give you the prod to come out of your shade and your's made me do it along with some others too.. 😊

Your response to my comment is as warm as your are girl I'm really happy that the writer in you was pleased after reading my response ofcourse the biggest reward for an author is appreciation and constructive criticism which helps improve..

I've been reading and re reading each and every one of your story specially the Comprehension series that one is personal favorite and Zenith these two are par excellent not that the others aren't good but these two are just beauty.. I love reading them.. 😕

You deserve every ounce of this support just continue what you're doing and well you and some other amazing authors have been my inspiration to start my own story on Swara and Sanskaar so you keep writing and spreading inspiration around the forum. 😃

Sorry to bug you but had to get this outta my system. 😳

Love,
Kashmi

Kashmi,

I stalked out the fiction you wrote that you mentioned and commented there:), really nice work! So happy you did decide to comment here and we got this dialogue going. And yes, your right, constructive criticism is such a useful tool when provided genuinely and in a way designed to help:). I am so pleased you like the Comprehensions series but even more so about Zenith, as that for me was challenging due to wanting to endure the adult content did not cheapen the piece so the feedback means a lot! And please don't say you bugged me! No such formality now needed and it's honestly been a pleasure :). X

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

I agree yaar! There is something going on in Sanskaar's mind. The way he peaks at her and then looks away when she's about to look at him, shows he wants her to see that he's ignoring but beneath he does want to look at her like before. Then, he is not such a fool to believe Ragini over Swara, especially after when, she did say I really really love you Sanskaar, on her knees literally begging him to not divorce her. And he also knew that those Samaj wale people are going to come. I'm sure he's doing this for Swara. At east I hope the same.

No, I haven't read that trilogy! I'll definitely read it now.😊

Sakshi, exactly, there is clearly something there going on in Sanskaar's mind and I just hope we are all right and are shown it the way it clearly should be. His pain even when he recently called her an outsider and taunted her was evident and as the CVs are obsessed with twists, I hope they use their brains and show the twist everyone on this thread clearly wants to see!

Let me know if you read the Troy series:) X

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Purbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Shru 🤗
Extremely sorry for this late.. I read the whole story 5-6 times.. It was that beautiful.
You had written it during ur trip. Seriously girl, hats off to you for that.
After watching the horrible segments from past few days, this OS is very soothing..
The title was awesome..
You described Ragini very well.. I loved that Medusa part.
Swara's pain was really heart breaking. I had tears in my eyes. Really don't know how I am gonna bear this in actual episode !
Sanskar and his protectiveness has no bounds. He can go to any length to protect Swara. Even it means hurting her and being hurt himself 1000 times than her! I hope cvs will nt spoil his this image.. Finger crossed.
The ending was really an amazing one. Sanskar followed her and watching helplessly her break down..
Then that eye lock and Swara understood the unspoken..
Its a masterpiece..
You should write some novels.. You have that kind of writing skill.
Last but not least,
Please come back soon.
We are missing you..

Love,

Purbi.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Prizi
mindblowing

Thanks ever so much for this! 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Purbishona
Shru 🤗
Extremely sorry for this late.. I read the whole story 5-6 times.. It was that beautiful.
You had written it during ur trip. Seriously girl, hats off to you for that.
After watching the horrible segments from past few days, this OS is very soothing..
The title was awesome..
You described Ragini very well.. I loved that Medusa part.
Swara's pain was really heart breaking. I had tears in my eyes. Really don't know how I am gonna bear this in actual episode !
Sanskar and his protectiveness has no bounds. He can go to any length to protect Swara. Even it means hurting her and being hurt himself 1000 times than her! I hope cvs will nt spoil his this image.. Finger crossed.
The ending was really an amazing one. Sanskar followed her and watching helplessly her break down..
Then that eye lock and Swara understood the unspoken..
Its a masterpiece..
You should write some novels.. You have that kind of writing skill.
Last but not least,
Please come back soon.
We are missing you..

Love,

Purbi.

Hey sweetie xoxo

Ah please don't say sorry- no need and your not allowed under the Sanskaar fan girl pact remember?! 😛 I was about to go to bed (around 11.30pm in the States where I currently am), and saw this so it means I can sleep happy! Thanks so much for this and omg, you read it that many times?! 😲 How happy that makes me! The current track is just too painful for me and I am in such dread over the upcoming torture, I am genuinely hurting. I really see Ragini as an evil monster now, hence the comparison in terms of her heart to Medusa. I have always been more of a Sanskaar fan and wanted Swara to pine for him badly but not like this, begging at his feet and yet not being able to break through is too much for me and I feel terrible for Swara. Sanskaar must be having a plan and yes his pain has to be magnified by hers so he will be suffered doubly 😭 Really glad you liked the ending, I had to inject some hope somehow and this is the only way I could think of. Your comments asking me to write something that can be published are making me 😳. I will be back in the uk soon enough and I'll communicate from here as much as I can. Miss you guys hugely! Loads of love X

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718075

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Unreserved on page 3. I'm sorry it took me so long.

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RUQAIYA10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Hey Shruti!😃

Happy Holidays!!! You are enjoying the cold and I am getting roasted under this blazing Mombasa sun. 😆

What an achingly beautiful piece written from Sanskar's POV . Most of us are hoping that this truly is a facade put up by him. You have described his despair , agony and the torment of his innermost feelings with such glaring clarity that it kind of hurts. I loved the reference to the Achilles heel. I'm a fan of Greek Mythology and love reading up on all the Gods and Demigods, famous warriors and so on. Also the part where he wants to project a shield around her reminded me of Bella in Twilight😃. I think she was able to produce a force field around herself and others.

Hoping this track ends soon in the meantime keep writing more on Swasan😃.
Enjoy the mountains and make the most of your Holiday🤗

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