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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
Viji🤗
It was so refreshing after the horrible scenes coming up!
Thnx a lot for this..

Thanks Sakshi. 😊 Yeah, I wanted to cheer myself and my forum pals, with this Mini OS. We're not getting tender & romantic SwaSan moments on screen, might as well write about them and enjoy, na? 😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Sree...
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Yay yay yay.. A SWASANLICIOUS OS..🤗 thank you sooo much for writing this. Can't express the need for something like this in such times when we can barely get 5 mins of SwaSan on screen.

You had me hooked from the beginning to the end, ogling at the screen like a love struck fool. SwaSan combined with your writing transports me to dream land. *cue drooling*

The beginning where Swara is just waking up and Sanskar is already awake and in Swara land was beautiful. The whole scene had so much love there, doesn't sound right but I don't know what else to say.

The end was so cute.. Adarsh and parinita's godh bharai and Sanskar openly staring at his wife and their convo at the end.. Oh god, you are making me smile without reasons.

Thanks a ton for writing this.

Lots of love

Thanks so much, Sree. 😊 I bought a ticket to SwaSan dreamland and went there to write this. 😳 This was intended to cheer myself up, as well as my forum pals. I am quite OK with some level of angst, but too much MU and separation between an on screen pair I am so emotionally invested in, makes me feel kinda blue. 😕

I'm so very glad you liked this and you felt it satisfied your SwaSan cravings. 😆 Chalo, that reassures me that my objective was achieved. 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: --Anna--
Awww!! This was so adorable!

Viji, this is the most beautifully described love scene that I have ever read. Such a SwaSanlicious OS this is. Your write so beautifully that I could imagine the whole thing - and I literally mean the whole thing, right from the start. I think this is what they say is the sign of a good writer - who can make you 'see' what is happening and I could 'see' everything. ☺️

I loved how the morning started and Sanskaar morning glances at Swara. I loved how they are both SO comfortable and SO in love. Sanskaar's love is so well described.

Sujata, she is herself in this too. 😆 I am glad that she has softened towards Swara and has even gone ahead and asked for a grandchild. That would mean she really has accepted Swara 😉

I loved the brief description of the Godh Bharai and Swara Sanskaar's outfit. Awww... look at both of them talking about their own baby. So romantic! 😳

Loved IT so much Viji! Much needed to lighten everyone's moods and fill it up with romance. 👏👏

Love,

Anna

Anna my dear! 🤗 🤗

Thanks yaar, glad you liked it so much.

I wanted to write a piece showing a lot of tender romance and of course--ahem ahem--passion--between SwaSan. ☺️ 😳 Am very happy to hear that you could "see" everything, errm...hope it was sufficiently romantic. 😆

The Godh Bharai outfits for SwaSan---well for Sanskaar, it was inspired by the Kurta he was wearing for Diwali. 😊 I liked him in that, a lot! Swara's was based on a sari I have! 😆

Yaar, when will we get romantic, happy SwaSan moments again...I am quite OK with a certain degree of angst and pain...but I don't do well at all with lingering MU and separation of an on screen pair I am so emotionally invested in. 😕 Am hoping this silly divorce track is revealed to be a plan of SwaSan's.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: dundumol96
Sweet os...

And i am also wish to see that morning too when their mission succed

Hey Dundumol...Thanks yaar. Glad you liked this. 🤗

I am also waiting eagerly to see some tender romance between SwaSan on TV. Hope the MU gets solved asap. 😊

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Strikhedonia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Hey! :)

It was an absolute pleasure to read this OS yaar. This piece is so elegantly put in that I just found it BEAUTIFUL. I enjoyed it thoroughly yaar. Right from Sanskar's thoughts that morning to Sujata asking for a grandchild to Swara and Sanskar's sweet little gestures to each other, I LURVED it.❤️

Thanks for letting me know about this. :)

-Arthy.

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soapbubble

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Oooh sooo nice! I was all churned up in the nicest way 😳

And Sanskaar laughing loud out at the end... priceless

Thanks for this!

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Viji amazing dear,loved reading ur wonderful os👏👏

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: simsen23
viji...wow cute os...n so romantic..its kind of relaxation...considering d current plot...beutiful...n waiting fr ur other updates too... 😉

Hey Simi ...🤗

Thanks yaar. Glad you liked it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: iam-in-love
superb OS Viji... 😊
Loved it vry much...
its so cute & romantic... ❤️
Thnk u so much for this awsm os... Ur stories hlping us to suffer d CVS torture...
write more...

Hey Silpa...🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton dear. Glad you liked it. 😊

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maaneetfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Sigh ...Viji!! Its sooo sweet and beautiful. ..totally understand ur need to write this OS...to describe their blissful married life ... and their complete sync with each other.

I think u could hv named this one RED also considering the number of times u hv mentioned the color in different parts...first the sindoor...then her pink blushed body (pink is a shade of red only na ;) ... then her gorgeous Red sari showcasing different shades of red and finally his matching Red kurta...(by the way red is my husband's favourite color so my wardrobe has plenty of reds too :D)

I wonder why they ban men at the godh bharai function. ..is thr any reason fr tht?? I'm sure at least the father of the child would b eager to see tht function even frm afar right? No offence tho!

Enjoyed reading this one and cant wait fr u to post ur next 2S soon!

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