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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Monica_Suhasini

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Posted: 9 years ago

Very cute viji...

It's so refreshing dearie...

Swasan completed eachother and complimented eachother in everyway. ..Loved it the most. ..

Awww so sweet of sujju ...competing with bhaisa and her jiji... for grand children...haaye. .

Her behaviour towards swara changes... such a good thing

And sanskaar's reply to his mom...when the time id right mom...and swara blushing...was adorable ya...

And description u gave for swara... her beauty...is mesmerizing

Thankyou very much for writing this beautiful os dear...

Very much needed ... Soothing it is...

Lots of love

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Swathy

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Posted: 9 years ago

ahm ahm swara ke liye neya mission 😉

loved it dear

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--Anna--

@--Anna--

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awww!! This was so adorable!

Viji, this is the most beautifully described love scene that I have ever read. Such a SwaSanlicious OS this is. Your write so beautifully that I could imagine the whole thing - and I literally mean the whole thing, right from the start. I think this is what they say is the sign of a good writer - who can make you 'see' what is happening and I could 'see' everything. ☺️

I loved how the morning started and Sanskaar morning glances at Swara. I loved how they are both SO comfortable and SO in love. Sanskaar's love is so well described.

Sujata, she is herself in this too. 😆 I am glad that she has softened towards Swara and has even gone ahead and asked for a grandchild. That would mean she really has accepted Swara 😉

I loved the brief description of the Godh Bharai and Swara Sanskaar's outfit. Awww... look at both of them talking about their own baby. So romantic! 😳

Loved IT so much Viji! Much needed to lighten everyone's moods and fill it up with romance. 👏👏

Love,

Anna

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Yay yay yay.. A SWASANLICIOUS OS..🤗 thank you sooo much for writing this. Can't express the need for something like this in such times when we can barely get 5 mins of SwaSan on screen.

You had me hooked from the beginning to the end, ogling at the screen like a love struck fool. SwaSan combined with your writing transports me to dream land. *cue drooling*

The beginning where Swara is just waking up and Sanskar is already awake and in Swara land was beautiful. The whole scene had so much love there, doesn't sound right but I don't know what else to say.

The end was so cute.. Adarsh and parinita's godh bharai and Sanskar openly staring at his wife and their convo at the end.. Oh god, you are making me smile without reasons.

Thanks a ton for writing this.

Lots of love

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

I really like the sweet moments of cherishing an already attained love as much as I adore the quest for that love. In that context this is a wonderful piece of writing!The little laughs,inside jokes, warm moments...everything that adds up to a tiny world they own for themselves. It was such a good feeling...I have no words to describe the bliss this one gave me...thanks for that!

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manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Viji this mission of SwaSan I love...
I had a silly grin on my face while reading the whole Os... It was just simple and beautiful

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie23
Viji this mission of SwaSan I love...
I had a silly grin on my face while reading the whole Os... It was just simple and beautiful

Thank God for some wonderful missions, nahi? 😛 Yaar when will the serial show these two being happy...last so many weeks one or the other, or both of them, are in such pain. Am just waiting for some cute romance and nok jhok between SwaSan; chalo, since we are not being shown this by the CVs, might as well write about it!

Thanks for your comment Manu! Glad you liked it. 🤗 🤗

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

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Posted: 9 years ago

OMG OMG OMG
I am grinning like a fool
What a refreshing story my dear
I just cannot stop reading it again again
You just provided a relief from the crap shown on tv .It was much needed.
After a long Time I read something as Romantic as it is.I hope we get some scenes like this on swason
You nail every story my friend.Wonderful absolutely wonderful.
Well swason children...hamari aankhei taras gayi hain to see some light romantic scene Kahan ki hum swason k cute cute bache dekhein..they wud b wonderful parents am sure
Viji keep writing
love
Samiya

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Monica_Suhasini
Very cute viji...
It's so refreshing dearie...
Swasan completed eachother and complimented eachother in everyway. ..Loved it the most. ..
Awww so sweet of sujju ...competing with bhaisa and her jiji... for grand children...haaye. .
Her behaviour towards swara changes... such a good thing
And sanskaar's reply to his mom...when the time id right mom...and swara blushing...was adorable ya...
And description u gave for swara... her beauty...is mesmerizing
Thankyou very much for writing this beautiful os dear...
Very much needed ... Soothing it is...
Lots of love

Thanks so much Suha dear...🤗 🤗

So happy that you liked it. I am pining for some lovely tender moments between SwaSan. Can't take much more of separation and MU between them! So I decided to cheer myself up by writing this. 😉

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