Swasan SS - Amour Orageuse - Chapter 10 page 41 - Page 11

Hey again Kashmi!
Sorry I'm not writing as long a comment as I'd like to but it's quite late, I have to be up mega early as we will be on the road literally all day tomorrow and I'm on my annoying phone which makes it a pain to type:).
I am so glad you'll be continuing this story. I really enjoyed this past after the high voltage impact of the previous one. Something we don't get in the show- balance or relief! It was so peaceful and sweet to see the soulful SwaSan interaction. Sanakaar's ever present care, Swara's total realisation and appreciation of it and their sweet conversation and developing physical attraction - imbued me with much needed peace in reading! Really nicely done! Look forward to more!

Lots of love S x

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Heyy Kashmi...thanks fr the dedication in the start...how can one not appreciate such lovely writing?? Im glad u decided to make this an SS🤗...hopefully we will get to see swara's gradual healing under sanskaar's loving care

This was such a sweet and heartwarming swasan chapter...both love and care abt each other so much it shows in their words. Sanskaar changing the dressing of her wounds, feeding her food with his hands and advising her to put herself first bfr others...thts pure loving care and yes swara is completely right..when she has sanskaar to worry abt her and think of each and every one of her cares n comforts then why would she think of her own self.

I think sanskaar is right in tht they should inform everyone at the baadi bcoz not only eventually but very soon they will find out abt laksh's arrest. Ragini will hv to rtn soon to the baadi n then obviously they will knw tht she was also instrumental in sending him to jail. Unless they ask ragini to keep mum abt the molestation affair.

Right now swasan r enjoying each other's companionship in ease yet there r some sparks flowing tht they both r experiencing. .. m sure they will decide to explore those too soon!

Enjoyed this one Kashmi. ..pls do update soon!

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey again Kashmi!
Sorry I'm not writing as long a comment as I'd like to but it's quite late, I have to be up mega early as we will be on the road literally all day tomorrow and I'm on my annoying phone which makes it a pain to type:).
I am so glad you'll be continuing this story. I really enjoyed this past after the high voltage impact of the previous one. Something we don't get in the show- balance or relief! It was so peaceful and sweet to see the soulful SwaSan interaction. Sanakaar's ever present care, Swara's total realisation and appreciation of it and their sweet conversation and developing physical attraction - imbued me with much needed peace in reading! Really nicely done! Look forward to more!

Lots of love S x

Loved the entire update. Swasan's conversation. Then their food feeding eachother. Sanskar is so protective towards his shona.Thanks for the pm Kashmi :)

Originally posted by: gayu6

Loved the entire update. Swasan's conversation. Then their food feeding eachother. Sanskar is so protective towards his shona.Thanks for the pm Kashmi :)

Finally got the chance to read it!
Fabulous update Kashmi
So SwaSanlicious☺️ Sanskaar was truly right when he said that Swara's selflessness makes her a fool and his care for Swara was so genuine, pure and full of love.
I agree with this, when something bad happens with and everyone looks at you with pity in his eyes then moving ahead becomes the biggest problem. I can understand Swara's condition even though never gone through it. You expressed it so beautifully. Great job dude!👏
Oh! Plss make it an SS! I love ur totally new concept and the way u write.
Will be waiting for other parts. Thnx for the PM😊

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Finally got the chance to read it!
Fabulous update Kashmi
So SwaSanlicious☺️ Sanskaar was truly right when he said that Swara's selflessness makes her a fool and his care for Swara was so genuine, pure and full of love.
I agree with this, when something bad happens with and everyone looks at you with pity in his eyes then moving ahead becomes the biggest problem. I can understand Swara's condition even though never gone through it. You expressed it so beautifully. Great job dude!👏
Oh! Plss make it an SS! I love ur totally new concept and the way u write.
Will be waiting for other parts. Thnx for the PM😊

Hey Kashmi,

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hey Kashmi,

Sorry dear, I was slightly busy in the last few days and missed commenting on your updates...you know the festivities winters bring no matter who and where you are. I just wanted to sit calmly in front of my computer and write a lengthy comment undisturbed...just got my wish fulfilled now.

So coming to the forth chapter. Durga Prasad as he always manages to in most of the fictions completely stole the show! He was the perfect decision maker and I just loved the power this man seems to radiate, such a wise old father figure he is.

Then Annapurna, oh, so, selfish mother. Just the apple of her eye stays out of jail...that's it! She doesn't even once try to understand the plight of the girl she calls her family too and simply goes on trying to get her son pardoned...I mean seriously, shame on you woman!

Then Ragini...god, that was a fine twist. Although I did thought this change of heart, crack in obsession was coming from the third chapter. It was so good to see Ragini for once actually caring for her sister and helping the right cause. At least this proves she is not as brain dead as she seems to be most of the time.

For Lakshya...his brains have permanently deserted him, making him such a worthless waste of space...I have no idea where this man gets his ideas. Is he such a baby that he thinks he has a chance at forgiveness.

I really love the pillar of strength Sanskar you've portrayed here and of cause for a change Swara who seems to think Lakshya deserves his punishment. It's s treat to see this sane side of Swara at least in fiction world.

Then coming to the fifth chapter. Hmm...I really need to hug you for deciding to continue this. My hug button isn't working...so imagine I hugged you please. And yes, thanks a lot!

So the chapter was basically a sunny day with SwaSan. I'm glad Swara is getting her old self back and Sanskar's care just warmed my heart.

The scene where they were feeding each other is perfectly penned out, the imagery quality there is marvelous. So there is the faint undercurrents of self consciousness right? The growing awareness between them and the intense moments are so well captured. WOW!

So, Swara wants to keep Lakshya's arrest secret. That was a nice touch in portraying her selflessness. Sanskar is just head over heals with this innocence of hers and I adore their conversation here.

Now, storms don't end with one rain and a few winds, I'm sure you have something sinister planned ahead.

Wonderful writing, continue soon!

-love,

Sakura