Swasan SS - Amour Orageuse - Chapter 10 page 41

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Hello people getting down to the basics I'll introduce myself I'm Kashmi I've been a silent reader here in this forum and I've read some amazing stories and I really really am fond of Swara and Sanskaar's jodi they look a bomb together so all this has given me the prod to write again after a long long time. It's not going to be very very good like the other awesome stories I've read here but I'll try to make it up to the mark.

Warning: Mature Content reader's read at your own risk.

Also there will be no Swasan in this update atleast will bring Sanskaar in the next update and that depends if you guys like this one so yeah people gimme a honest feedback on this one. I assure you all this is just a fragment of my imagination no intentions to hurt anyone's sentiments and nor do I intend to demean any character on the show just an imagination. Criticism always welcome constructive criticism though.. So without further ado here I present

Chapter 1 - the Tempest

It had been days for Swara trying to bring things back to normal between Sanskaar and her, she had been trying to profess her love for him giving him hints of her feelings through her romantic gestures but he wouldn't listen to her nor would he pay attention to her gestures, the moment she would walk into the room and make an attempt to talk to him he would either reply in monosyllables or he would walk out or he would just bury himself in work so that he doesn't have to listen to her.

She missed the look of love which Sanskaar would give her and make her feel like the most beautiful and loved women on the entire planet, she missed his careful light flirting, his handsome smile which would throw her off guard, she missed him and his warmth. To make matters worse she had Laksh's obsession and Ragini's tyranny to deal with and fight against and this time she was all alone into this.

She sat by the window of their bedroom lost in thoughts, the family members had gone out for a wedding today and Sanskaar wasn't home yet she sat there waiting when she felt a hand on her shoulder a loving caress, her face brightened immediately thinking it was Sanskaar but on turning she was irked to see it was laksh.

"You? What the hell are you doing in this room. Get out of here. If you have again come to profess your obsessive love for me then please leave Laksh I'm not lending a ear to it. " In her fury what she failed to notice was Laksh's alcoholic demeanor. Coming dangerously close to her he breathed his alcoholic breath on her face, " Why? Why can't you accept me and my love back in your life. Kya kami hai mujh main aur mere pyaar main. What is it that I can't give and Sanskaar can. Why do you love him Swara?"

Pulling her even closer Laksh touched his nose to her cheek as Swara turned her face away in disgust and struggled to get out of his grip. In a furious tone she said," You want to know what Sanskaar can give and you cannot? He gives me love; unconditional love, he never forced his feelings on me, I always called the shots for our relationship without knowing and realising what I felt for him and I pushed him away to such an extent that there exists a huge farce between us but you don't worry Laksh I will cover that distance soon because I've sworn to Sanskaar and myself that I will rekindle our love and relationship. No one can stop me for doing that not Ragini and definitely not you Laksh.

I have, I will and always will love Sanskaar till my I breath my last breath, I have no place for any romantic feelings for any other man in my life but for Sanskaar." Shrugging his hands off her body she again started, "And the next time think twice before you touch me Laksh, remember this I'm your bhabhi your elder brother's wife, I dont approve of any other man touching me and exerting rights over me except for one, Sanskaar, my husband so now if we're done can you please leave? "

Saying so she turned away from Laksh. Swara's words and love declaration did nothing but ignite a burning rage inside him, a fire burned which nothing could put out except for one person, Swara herself. He wanted her and he would get her by hook or by crook. "What did you just say to me Swara, that you abhor me touching you? Did you say that to me? " Turning towards him Swara's voice rang loud and clear, "Yes; I abhor your touch on me Laksh that is was and always will be Sanskaar's right and no one else."

Even before she could register what was happening she was pushed against the wall of her bedroom and Laksh's mouth descended on her, savagely kissing her, biting her lips while she struggled mightily, hitting him on his chest, pushing him away with her palms as he continued his inhuman slaughter on her lips. Laksh stilled her protests by pinning their hands on either side of her head, yet she struggled with tears now flowing down freely and rapidly. Laksh didn't know what had gotten over him he couldn't think anything except for Swara and having her to himself. He was not aware what he was doing in his alcoholic state.

Freeing her lips he savagely took the skin of her neck between his lips and teeth leaving crescent marks over her neck while she begged pleaded for him to stop and free her but there was no stopping him. The more she struggled the rougher he got, breaking the bangles adorned on her wrist which caused deep gashes there he paid no heed to her pain as he continued with his animalistic ways. In one swift movement he tore away the pallu of her saree which Swara had draped around her frame so tastefully. She knew Sanskaar loved seeing her in that 6 foot garment he eyes would take an intense edge and she would almost see her old Sanskaar resurfacing, but with Laksh it had a different effect he got even more savage and wild.

Swara covered her virtue in a state of shocked fear. Her eyes open wide she grabbed the first opportunity and pushed him away, she tried to escape but before she could put more distance between them he laid a strong hand on her shoulder. In a bid to escape she hurried away from him but his grip was so tight that a portion of a sleeve came apart revealing her soft white slender arms. Laksh drunkenly made his way towards her, staggering a bit in his way as Swara moved back screaming out for help, screaming for Sanskaar to come and get her.

She folded her hands in front of Laksh and tried to stop him by telling him that this was wrong on so many levels, she screamed, she threatened, she tried to hit but nothing affected him as he slowly moved towards her like a predator moved towards its prey. He deflected the cushions and pillows she threw in his way to stop but he flicked them away with a casual wave of his palms. And then coming with full force he pushed her down on the mattress and took her mouth in his once more to fully take her.

Her body shaking terribly and her chest heaving from the unshed tears which couldn't come out. She cried and struggled until she located a lamp on her bedside table and yet again seized an opportunity when Laksh got up to take off his shirt. She hit it on his forehead when he again descended down on her body to take her forcefully. Laksh fell off her in a state of shock; clutching his head he went down falling on the floor with a soft thud. Horrified Swara flinched back from the shock of her actions. Laksh wasn't dead, he was only unconscious and Swara knew that because she had aimed the lamp at his forehead and not on the head which would only disorient him for a while.

Clutching her knees close to her body she cried out loud, sobs wrecking her body terribly as she recounted the horrendous experience. Gathering whatever little left of her clothing and virtue she wrapped the pallu around her shoulders and sat down outside her bedroom with a thump. Her eyes red from crying big, body shivering like a leaf in a storm she sat there for hours and hours until she heard movement.

To be continued...

Okay guys I'm done with the first installment of this four shot. Don't know how many of you'll will like it I know many of you all won't but I promise lots of Swasan in the next one. Once more I don't wish to demean any character just a piece of imagination don't bash me for it please.I will redeem the characters. Tell me what do you guys think good bad okayish dramatic whatever but gimme a feedback. Lemme know if you'll want me to continue this one.

Love,
Kashmi

Index:

Part 1 - page 1
Part 2 - page 3
Part 3 - page 5
Part 4 - page 8
Part 5 - page 14
Part 6 - page 22
Part 7 - page 29
Part 8 - page 35
Part 9 - page 38
Part 10 - page 41
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting... waiting for next part.. update soon...
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Interesting...but it is very tourchering...bhoot rude hogaya...but its okay...continue soon...
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

Interesting...but it is very tourchering...bhoot rude hogaya...but its okay...continue soon...


Thank you for your feedback. sorry if your sentiments were hurt somewhere didn't mean to had put a disclaimer in the beginning for that very reason dear yet again sorry if it came across as rude..
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Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue


Thank you for your feedback. sorry if your sentiments were hurt somewhere didn't mean to had put a disclaimer in the beginning for that very reason dear yet again sorry if it came across as rude..

sentiment nahi hai...rude matlab if u might have stop laksh without proceding much means it will be fine...now also it is superb...plz don't get dispoint and sorry ki zaroot nahi...😊 you wrote well...it went into my nerves...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ye to totally rape ki barabar hogaya..fir bhi its sounding good accroding to this story..i want sanskar to give him big punishment n trust swara.
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interesting...plz update soon...
hate laksh...
plz make sanskar aware of it n console swara...also punishing laksh for d act...
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Kudos to you for touching upon such a sensitive subject.

You penned it down really nicely- that evilness, Swara's helplessness & destruction in many ways.. it all came across.

Will you dedicate a chapter just for Swara coming to terms.. or at least trying to gather together what has happened?
I really eager to see how Sanskaar, Swara & Laksh deals with this. Continue soon.
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Originally posted by: -Ros-

Kudos to you for touching upon such a sensitive subject.

You penned it down really nicely- that evilness, Swara's helplessness & destruction in many ways.. it all came across.

Will you dedicate a chapter just for Swara coming to terms.. or at least trying to gather together what has happened?
I really eager to see how Sanskaar, Swara & Laksh deals with this. Continue soon.


Thanks buddy this comment really made me feel sure about this piece.. I'm posting the second update in a while hope it lives up to your expectations... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG... t'was so painfully brutal!

Really Kudos to you for actually writing this, such a brave attempt. It shook me to the core & I can't even bear to imagine the trauma, Swara must've gone through after that horrible attempt. Very brave piece indeed & your writing is exceptional. The title too intrigued me- What does it mean? Sorry too lazy to google :P

I have a request- Can we please not redeem Lakshya & let him bear punishment for the heinous crime, he almost committed? I would love Sanskaar to first beat him up brutally for doing THAT to HIS Swara & then hand him over to the rightful place he belongs to- The Prison. Please don't show redemption & forgiveness for him, if possible. I won't be able to see anyone get away with it, even in fiction.

Eager to see how Swara gather's herself up & Sanskaar's guilt for not arriving on time & being her savior. Hope they heal each other after this brutal incident.

Update soon, eagerly waiting 😳 Is this a four shot?

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