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Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

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more like a forest fire. too bad my imagination ka forest is damp and squalid now. so all i am getting is more of smoke and less of fire.😆.
i am still gonna blame nynu.

thank you so much old friend for your lovely words for me.
and hey this is a GREAT idea. would love that... but if it is a choice between who is the killer and who will be killed twist.. i am still biased towards the killer.. may be because he is our Sanskaar.
back to square one..

Do we want Demon as a hero or a villain?
our Angel was a hero. a dark one but hero nonetheless.
who should demon be? a darkest entity like his nomenclature says... antithesis of Angel?
or a darker version of good angels?

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Originally posted by: ishanita

nimmi sorry to interrupt ur conversation with saku

let demon be the story of a dark entity...let our 'hero' be villain here ...there r plenty stories with hero as a protector ,as a saviour ...let this time our hero b negative.


but this is only my views ...

Originally posted by: iamreader

Angel was assassin remember? He turned hero under Midas touch of kitten, though he wasn't black in heart. But Demon is a keeper of justice, however twisted and violent he is in execution... For me he is positive, he is a saviour to begin with...

Originally posted by: ishanita

offcourse I do remember...but even villains can have their love story ...isn't it? every time its not necessary that the main lead has to turn gooddy goody in influence of the female lead!

let's start a new trend of a story of a negative character? his struggle his reasons his love.

dyuti I am juat saying rest all nimmis wish...I read a story on whattpad u r mine by laila n believe me its fabulous...a story main lead is a heartless gangster but he never changed himself ..mahnoir accepted him the way he was.

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik

hello nimmi I read ur story angel ur os and a hounds tale all in one go infact I have been reading only your stories ... first for angel, ur name actually made me have a feel that it is about an angel either swara is the angel or sanskar a broken angel but when I read ur first chappyyy ...I was like ASSASSIN. .oh my goddd...got a shock and then as the story progressed I got the angel...angel of death ... GABRIEL...then swara 's entry..dhansooo...entry ...normally we see hero saving heroine. ...but here we saw a devil being saved by a pure innocent girl... As your story progressed I was stuck up to my bed ..wht happens next what happens next it was gripping thrilling mindblowing... I was enthralled till the last chapter... angel and kitten awww that was choo sweet ... then hound tale maverick aka maddy...oh my god. ...his love story of a cop and assassin I loved it really... ur dialogues are so juicy and hilarious ...I loved the part where he told "annoy me more my lady and I will show u a live demo " and swara running away and again coming back for mobile with a sheepish smile on face... sanskar dialogue "I promise to be by your side forever" loved it..shows his true love... but sanskar shouldnt have thrown her mobile samsung galaxy S6 ...could have given it to me...my heart broke when the phone broke...but never mind...on the whole angel was superb...awesome...enthralling...heart gripping...mesmerizing. ... sorry my hands are paining I will come back again to give comments rather compliments to u for ur other works ...till then see yaaa with regards Moumita

Originally posted by: iamreader

Well at last it's creator's choice! Truth to be told, I was so overwhelmed after finishing "angel". Wanted to read more and more. I hadn't read any Swasan ff before 2 month... Randomly I came to read DK by Shruti and boy! I was floored... Till then I read many Swasan FFs and discovered angel after hearing a lot abt it in another site. Girl you're popular! And you deseve the every bit of admiration you get.

Keep spreading you magic Nimmi darling! About Demon... the vanished Sanskar can really be another Sanskar... I really hated the 2nd one calling him imposter 😡 ... Elite force leader means he's a white knight in disguise of a dark one... May be they can meet in another turbulent time... And this time Swara can unlock the enigmatic persona he has... The crime solving team was kind of cute in that story... I would love if they become instrumental in your demonic tale...

Love
Dyuti

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

I'm waiting for your new story Nim!