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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Angel VM

After a long tiring day ..Feels good to watch ..Thanks nita for asking ..😛


Brings back memories..This is very special ..I took an off next day from work bcos I was up till 2 in night making ANGEL 😆.that crazy I was.I loved every bit of my time spent on it ..Undoubtedly My best one till date ...for I poured all my Love for ANGEL😳🤗

Nimmi🤗😳



Well you made my day too Lucky dear..Watching the VM is an treat.. I miss kitten and Angel😭... And Their perfect Love Story😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Let me join those who wants demons Nimmi.. Gonna keep asking for it till you write it out..😳



Ha Nita and girls,
Let's hunt Nimmi down 😈 ! We want DEMON!!!

Otherwise there'll be pack of Demons ( read us!) haunting you. 😉

But seriously, don't you think Angel s2 would be a good read? Like Gabriel, Kitten and Maddy journey from beginning in new setting? Like Angel would be same ruthless but softie for his kitten, Kitten her crazy self, Maddy happy go lucky but wise guy.. But the plot different... Nimmi I know u can do this one too! Keep it in mind okay? Demon as Ishita's Bday gift and Angel 2 our new year gift!

Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: iamreader



Ha Nita and girls,
Let's hunt Nimmi down 😈 ! We want DEMON!!!

Otherwise there'll be pack of Demons ( read us!) haunting you. 😉

But seriously, don't you think Angel s2 would be a good read? Like Gabriel, Kitten and Maddy journey from beginning in new setting? Like Angel would be same ruthless but softie for his kitten, Kitten her crazy self, Maddy happy go lucky but wise guy.. But the plot different... Nimmi I know u can do this one too! Keep it in mind okay? Demon as Ishita's Bday gift and Angel 2 our new year gift!

Dyuti


am ready for ATTACKING nimmi
dyuti since yesterday I am in my dream land !
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Nynaeve



Nimmi,

I am so proud - @ bold above😳😳😳

I am one of those minority readers who always reads the ending first - which is why in the beginning I would never read a SS /FF which was in progress - Shru's DK taught me that there is a certain fun in not knowing what happens next (still not as "thrilling" as knowing the ending😳) and then I got hooked onto the other FF/SS - so much so that I myself have written / am writing a couple.

But knowing you, you could always build the suspense - and come to think of it, there is a genre where the reader knows the suspense and is reading with bated breath as to when the characters get to know - you could build on that theme and for us readers, maybe have a backstory as to why Sanskaar has been code named Demon.

Possible????

love,
Nyna



nynu..
🤗

and i am one of those who won't read the paper back synopsis of the novel plot of the book they want to read and the review of the movie they want to watch. i want to be surprised.
though even i prefer reading completed stories my reason is quite different. i can't handle suspense and patience well. need to read it at one go.

oh i love your idea and suggestions. but i am still hung up on 'the thrilling part, suspense and plot twist is gone'. mode.
i now have kind of blurry idea on altogether different plot or may be not.. dunno. got to rearrange the jumble thoughts and these wild ideas in proper sequence.
i honestly have no idea how and most importantly what story will shape up.

such an awesome title needs a worthy story too tell.
the darker.. the better.

lots and lots and lots of love.
jhappis.





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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Sakura24



Nynu,
You've done some Punya by lighting this particular diya in Nimmie's head. Let's just chase her dimag ki ghode further.
Nimmie,
Girl, while I agree on the suspense being already listed in the menu part, I know you well enough to believe you can twist the story we know into somethin we wouldn't dream about. Like, how about making it harder for Sanskar to find out who exactly he should be punishing? I mean instead of making the suspense out of who the murder is you can make it who would die next?
How about that?



diya saku?
more like a forest fire. too bad my imagination ka forest is damp and squalid now. so all i am getting is more of smoke and less of fire.😆.
i am still gonna blame nynu.

thank you so much old friend for your lovely words for me.
and hey this is a GREAT idea. would love that... but if it is a choice between who is the killer and who will be killed twist.. i am still biased towards the killer.. may be because he is our Sanskaar.
back to square one..

Do we want Demon as a hero or a villain?
our Angel was a hero. a dark one but hero nonetheless.
who should demon be? a darkest entity like his nomenclature says... antithesis of Angel?
or a darker version of good angels?


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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Let me join those who wants demons Nimmi.. Gonna keep asking for it till you write it out.. 😳



nita..
🤗🤗🤗

my sweetest thing.
miss you so SO much. happiness always to see you.❤️.

aren't you the sweetest? oh yes. that you are.


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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Dear Nimmi,

@ bold above - I am willing to take as much of blame as you can dish out - Just give us the Demon (OS genre crime - was it when Sanskaar comes incognito and leaves a selfie of his and Swara with her?? - you could expand that, beautifully

love,
Nyna


Second that .. Always wanted a continuation for the OS ..I love u Nynu for coming up with this idea of Demon .I am gonna use my tactics to lure Nimmi as well ... A VM at the end of story if it touches me as much as Angel but a trailer to start with😉

Demands and Demands ...😆 and we demand our demand on demon to be considered with absolute seriousness😉

Love
Lucky



Lucky..
🤗

nuvvu na bangaram vi ra.
i will always fall for your tactics by the way. i am trying to keep away from Swasan as much as possible yet one vm from you and i go back to dreamy mode; sighing, mooning and crooning away happily over the babies.

demand accepted mate.
will seriously with all honesty and intent i am going to give demon a try. can't promise for i hate broken promises.. but i really am going to go for demon in absolute seriousness.
let's see how it goes.

love you ra.
big hugs❤️.



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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: NitaReid


Well you made my day too Lucky dear..Watching the VM is an treat.. I miss kitten and Angel😭... And Their perfect Love Story😳



you girls are precious... you know that.
i miss them too. at times so so bad...
and then sometimes i just smile wistfully remembering them. call me an emotional fool but they feel so real. as if they have been and still are a part of my life... not as figment of imagination but something solid and something forever.

this Angel vm is a treasure lucky. the bestest finale for me. i could never thank you enough for that. and appreciate the heart you put in it. words won't be enough and will fail for sure.

just love you girls.🤗


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Posted: 8 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: ishanita


am ready for ATTACKING nimmi
dyuti since yesterday I am in my dream land !



you are a darling dyuti.
but Angel 2... no dear girl. i don't believe in touching a magic or recreating it. Angel has been that magic for me.
i will never touch him.

magic happens only once.

you can create a whole new different magical land.. but old one should remain the way they are meant to.
untouched.
unchanged.
unparalleled.. forever.

i will go for Demon and may be other works.. but not Angel.. i just can't. just like there won't be another swasan even if they come back with season two with the same cast.. there won't be another Angel.. for me.

terribly sorry about that.

ishita..🤗.

thank you girls.
love and hugs.




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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
hello nimmi I read ur story angel ur os and a hounds tale all in one go infact I have been reading only your stories ... first for angel, ur name actually made me have a feel that it is about an angel either swara is the angel or sanskar a broken angel but when I read ur first chappyyy ...I was like ASSASSIN. .oh my goddd...got a shock and then as the story progressed I got the angel...angel of death ... GABRIEL...then swara 's entry..dhansooo...entry ...normally we see hero saving heroine. ...but here we saw a devil being saved by a pure innocent girl... As your story progressed I was stuck up to my bed ..wht happens next what happens next it was gripping thrilling mindblowing... I was enthralled till the last chapter... angel and kitten awww that was choo sweet ... then hound tale maverick aka maddy...oh my god. ...his love story of a cop and assassin I loved it really... ur dialogues are so juicy and hilarious ...I loved the part where he told "annoy me more my lady and I will show u a live demo " and swara running away and again coming back for mobile with a sheepish smile on face... sanskar dialogue "I promise to be by your side forever" loved it..shows his true love... but sanskar shouldnt have thrown her mobile samsung galaxy S6 ...could have given it to me...my heart broke when the phone broke...but never mind...on the whole angel was superb...awesome...enthralling...heart gripping...mesmerizing. ... sorry my hands are paining I will come back again to give comments rather compliments to u for ur other works ...till then see yaaa with regards Moumita

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