*Rang De Tu Mohe Gerua* SwaSan Two-Shot Part 2 (Final) Page 1 - Page 4

Originally posted by: manasie23

Hey Shonali... Just mind blowing mann... I loved it
Mr Lakshya Maheshwari kabhi nahi Sudhrega is obsession is too much to bear everywhere...
Think maybe Sanskaar tried to push her too far too soon... Lets see what happens in the next update...

And no way you look like a newbie in your writing... I gotta learn from you😳

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Shona 🤗 That was a great first attempt!

Sujata & Lakshji are very much in character here🤡

I loved the bond between Uttara & Swara & the MU Sujata has about Swara also seems realistic given the girls phobia towards her own marriage😆 Though of course she only had to ask/ listen in to the whole conversation/ not listen in at all...but then we both know that isnt sujata at all😆 And Laksh as usual being presumptuous about his brother's wife & her relationship with her husband?! 😲🤢 And the sheer gall to even mention Kavita😡 So like I said, very much in character👍🏼😆

I like that Sanskaar didnt melt at the first sign of acceptance from her. He is being cautious which is good since wifey has a tendency to overdo her mahantaa, so like you said maybe it is just her guilt talking. So happy to see a repentant Swara😈 SUFFER woman...as much as you made him suffer, if not more😈

And where did she go so late in the night?🤔 How he manaoes her right away & brings her back

And ofc you will PM me when you update the next part right?😉😃

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Shona 🤗

What a brilliant TS! Loved Loved IT! 👏 👏 This was the first thing, I read today, when I woke up. 😛

Absolutely adored Swara and Uttara's bond! I wish the show could have ventured more in their bond. Sujata being Sujata - what is more expected of her. She listens to absolutely nothing and she still makes a mountain of a molehill. 😆

Did Laksh really question Sanskaar about trust? Really? 😡 Well that is expected of our Laksh! 😆 Good Sanskaar gave it back to him. I loved that line where he said that he does not intend to make mockery out of his relationship or the problems between Swara and him in front of everyone. I wish Swara would have done the same thing. 🥱

Sanskaar reacting on Swara - I think half of it came from his conversation with Laksh. He must have been really frustrated with the conversation he had with Laksh and then Sujata must have added the fuel to the fire. I can understand him as always. 😳 And the sadist me was happy when he gave it to Swara but then I did felt bad for Swara.

So Swara left for some place? Hopefully our Sanskaar is able to manaofy her. 😳

Great Start!

Love
Anna

P.S : Best of luck for your exams! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

nICE..

continue soon..

Originally posted by: luvakanksha

Beautiful start

Please continue soon

Felt bad for Swasan, they dont deserve all this they deserve love and happiness

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Very well written Shonali...

I especially like your language skills.

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medha.

Originally posted by: Sree8410

First attempt, Really???

Its wonderful dear!!! 👏👏👏

Waiting for part 2