*Rang De Tu Mohe Gerua* SwaSan Two-Shot Part 2 (Final) Page 1 - Page 2

Nice start and can definately say u r not a bad writer...loved the first part and it was great to c swara try and rectify her relationship and mistake and want to stay in it with sanskaar...also liked sanskaar being cautious, it seems natural after repeated hurts that he has suffered...the beginning of the bond between swara and uttara was great, i had hoped that the show wud show such a bond between them...watever happens there but it was nice to c it here...laksh was laksk and sujata annoying and wrong minded like normal..somethings never change 😆😆...aw swara just timed her entry to sanskaar badly that night...his mind was already dhey after laksh and sujata..

I absolutely loved it. I wish the show concentrate on Swasan when the kidnapping track gets over just like your TS.

Originally posted by: sarra0

Nice start and can definately say u r not a bad writer...loved the first part and it was great to c swara try and rectify her relationship and mistake and want to stay in it with sanskaar...also liked sanskaar being cautious, it seems natural after repeated hurts that he has suffered...the beginning of the bond between swara and uttara was great, i had hoped that the show wud show such a bond between them...watever happens there but it was nice to c it here...laksh was laksk and sujata annoying and wrong minded like normal..somethings never change 😆😆...aw swara just timed her entry to sanskaar badly that night...his mind was already dhey after laksh and sujata..

Originally posted by: Amrtina

Amazing start

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

I absolutely loved it. I wish the show concentrate on Swasan when the kidnapping track gets over just like your TS.

Your are great writer and It was flawless even in your first attempt. Do continue soon. Would love to read part 2.

P.s Kindly PM me once you update part 2

Wow...i loved your os very much😃...lakshya...no wrds for him!!🤢 but that convo between sanskar and lakshya whr lakhshya was tryng to infuriate sanskar was so so well written...i almst thot sanskar would punch him wen he took kavita name!!!😡 ...plz plz plz will u pm me wen u update nxt??😊...sent u bdy request !!

Originally posted by: indrani7495

Wow...i loved your os very much😃...lakshya...no wrds for him!!🤢 but that convo between sanskar and lakshya whr lakhshya was tryng to infuriate sanskar was so so well written...i almst thot sanskar would punch him wen he took kavita name!!!😡 ...plz plz plz will u pm me wen u update nxt??😊...sent u bdy request !!

Originally posted by: SwaSanFanGirl

Thank you so much Ingrain😃😃 I am glad you liked.

I have accepted your friends request. Will definitely PM u

shonu...u updated yayy...loved how u depicted nd u write very well buddy i saw so many of your discussions in AT

a wonderful piece by a lovely girl...shona🤗,dnt dare to call it bad.