Sanctified- A SwaSan TS- Final Parts Updated - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaSanFanGirl

Shruti,

Even I am working on a surprise. Only one person knows about it and I won't reveal it until and unless I am done with that😃

But what an update. The letter from Swara to Sanskaar literally brought tears in my eyes. Ahh, I so wish they could have shown something like this in the show. Especially, Swara standing up for her own self respect. That is so much more needed man.

I am really curious to know what will Sanskaar do next. Has Sanskaar already sensed her hidden feelings from the letter?

Update soon Shruts!!! can't wait to know what happens next😃


Shona 🤗
Ooohhh Surprise is very intriguing- i think I can guess and hope i am right but will await the reveal! 😃
Thanks so much hon, glad you liked it despite the tear inducing letter. Part 2 will answer your question about what Sanskaar does but not fully as that comes in Part 3. But overall this isn't an elaborate plot where a lot of things are "done"- just issues resolved one way or the other 😊. Tell me how you like Part 2 but it is more reflective than action packed. xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Thank you so much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miss-swasan

Beautiful as always have u ever considered on being a professional writer that's how good u are


Awww that comment has made me 😳😳, thank you so much for this!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: indrani7495

Shruti di...🤗

another lovely ts coming up...m so glad...!! Awesome...the first part...!!! That letter 😭...swara 's pov xplained well...but sanskar was again hurt from the letter ...even if it was an apology ...😭!!!
Thanx for d pm...eagerly waiting for the part 2!!😊


Hey sweetie 🤗

Thanks so much for liking Part 1, hope part 2 meets your expectations! Much love xx
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Michellekc18

So I normally don't comment because I use Internet only through my phone and typing a comment is actually painful for a novice to the forum through a phone. But I just had to comment since I have been brainstorming a track for the past 2 weeks that involves swara writing a letter for sanskaar and leaving MM if she had any self respect. When her MIL keeps hoping she leaves the house, her proxy MIL thinks she is character less, her devar still chance maaroes at every chance and she has to prove her innocence time and again, seriously which self respecting woman will jhelo all this? Sita Devi refused to be humiliated and prove her innocence again and swara is a mere mortal. Of course that was before her doubting sanskaar episode was aired which considerably changes the dynamics. But still...

So thank you so much for this TS and wonderful writing as always.

Michelle.


Hey Michelle 🤗
I am seriously so thrilled with your comment- and I totally appreciate the frustration of typing on the phone! How freaky is that we thought of the same track! Great minds and all that?! 😉. I was incensed at all that SuAn nonsense being spouted 🤢. As you said, how many times can one take slurs to their character?! I am hoping this TS pans out ok, risky subject in a way and also like I said a different style for me but the reactions so far have been very kind, for which i am very grateful! Hope you like Part 2 and thank you so much for this! x
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: piccola1

Boo Hoo...you made me cry Shruti ! Swara's despair as she wrote it, her longing for what she thinks she does not deserve, her guilt at her hurting Sanskaar and her complete agony at leaving him, are fantastically captured..so well, you cant but shed a tear at this lost, bereft girl, so cruelly let down by so many people she loved so much.

Sanskaar's fear, realized as soon as he enters the room, and his instant reaction of how he needs to make it right, because he has pushed her too far, too soon..Lovely! Cant wait for him to track her down and make her realize that her agony is needless..and that he will be there for her to make it all come right 😳

This was heartfelt and beautiful ! Loved it. ⭐️😃

Note: I am extremely curious to find out what exactly had he asked her the prev night !😊


Awww Pic! Another one I made cry! Sorry! So happy you "liked" it despite the angst. I am so happy with the way you got the Swara I am trying to bring out. Hope Part 2 continues that and builds a bit more. Let me know if you can. Your question is fully answered in Part 2 😉 and hope Swara's reaction will then seem justified. Thanks as ever and much love x
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Aww hun this was such a satisfying read!! Gosh I may sound like a sadist but I guess the gal really needs to get out of that wretched house! Self respect cms foremost for me n I respect her decision for that!

I hv quit the shw for quite sm tym nw... Last I saw was the eppy b4 rags was kidnapped, where swara slapped her... N I hv nt even bothered to chk the WUs... But I do hv sm vague idea of the current plot frm the topic headings here in the forum... And all I can say is that my current head canon is that Swara just leaves the damn place and moves away! And this fic of urs is nw happily feeding that Head Canon! I'm so happy!


Waiting for the nxt part eagerly nw!


Hey sweetheart! Been missing you on the Forum but yeah, what can I say- daayans chase people away 😭. I could not agree more about getting out of that house and away from the weirdos 🤢. Glad you liked it so far! Will hope you like Part 2 too. Thanks as ever and mmmwaah, please come back if you can, miss you x
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Shona 🤗
Ooohhh Surprise is very intriguing- i think I can guess and hope i am right but will await the reveal! 😃
Thanks so much hon, glad you liked it despite the tear inducing letter. Part 2 will answer your question about what Sanskaar does but not fully as that comes in Part 3. But overall this isn't an elaborate plot where a lot of things are "done"- just issues resolved one way or the other 😊. Tell me how you like Part 2 but it is more reflective than action packed. xoxo


Shruts!!!!

Part2 is amazzziiinnnggg!!!!!!

Wow, the way you have covered Swara's emotions, her turmoil, and her reasons, is amazing. You are such an amazing writer. I don't even know whether I would ever be able to do that.

Her reasons of desperately wanting to be with him but still not being able to do that because of her fears and guilt is amazing. I am so glad Sanskaar is aware of her fears thanks to Dida and Shomi.

I really cannot wait to read about their interaction and how they are finally able to find solace in each other.

Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

wow such a emotional start
loved it
update soon n if possible pm m


Thanks so much Prachi, have updated Part 2 and PM'd - hope you will like and let me know!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

You are on fire today akka! One little correction though, you wrote 'start contract' instead of 'stark contrast' but everything else was perfect, as always.

I always thought that Swara clings to the fantasy of the picture perfect family that she created for herself when she was a child. having grown up with only her maa and dida she probably longed for a big family. She probably was also teased/bullied in school for her mother being a single parent. These, I think, scarred her and now that she has what she thinks is a perfect family, she is clinging to it and is not ready to see that it is not perfect in any way!
Her pain and longing for Sanskaar were a treat. Is that too sadistic of me? I so guessed that Sanskaar would go after her and he did! I feel that he is is the only one who can heal her.
I am looking forward to part 3 and for SwaSan confrontation!


Thank you darling! I am so glad you pointed that typo out- stupid spell check! I have corrected. Exactly re Swara- she created a mythical world and wants to live in it- and she is paying for it. I made up the bit about her step father as we don't know this in the show but I sort of imagine a girl from a broken home and the rest. No, I am with you on the sadist bandwagon 😆. I'll work on Part 3 and try not to disappoint, thanks so much for this xx

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