Sanctified- A SwaSan TS- Final Parts Updated - Page 5

Originally posted by: rsk16

Fantastic start. Absolutely loved the style it was written in. No problems at all .

Love the way you dealt with swara and her insecurities .hoping to read sanskar's point of view too .

Keep up the great work. 👏

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

I m speechless.
Awsm strt.
I also wantd swara do smthng lk ths bt...
Swara ki kahi hui har ek baat,har ek emotn was mindblowing.
I wantd swara say smthng abt her emotn 2 sanskar.she stnd 4 her slf respect.
Othrside sanskar whose life z swara,so much broken bcz of swara's mistrust.
bt yet jst a letter & leave,ths break sanskar more.Trust was thr base of relatn,whn its broken,it broke thr heart also.
Waiting 4 nxt part.cnt soon.thnks 4 pm.

Originally posted by: swa291

waiting for next parts

swara need to understand that while she goes around thinking of all doing or wanting to do good to all no one except sanskar gives her a helping hand and while she gives it name of friendship she also knows that he loves her.

Am waiting for her to find that love in her heart and give it back to him.

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Awww..Shruti..🤗

It was a brilliant way to start this TS..Really nice first part..

But Swara is a coward..she just ran away na..😲

She could have talked to him face to face and begged forgiveness..😭 But I know it will be difficult, since she was sure that Sanskaar would not hear anything..

But anyway..Sanskaar read the letter, and he was affected by her departure..

Loved the way you wrote the story in 'the first person style' narration..It was good to read their feelings, directly from their hearts..👏

The letter was so touching..Nicely written..Nice selection of words..

Especially I loved the saahil aur aasmaan waala line..It is so true..👏

The quote about sorry was also the apt one..Thanks for sharing

Now I am eagerly waiting the next update😊😊

Love,
Naina😳

Originally posted by: rinku95

Fabulous
Continue soon

Originally posted by: Sree...

Shru Di 🤗

Wow. I'm going to be honest, I cried. This was beautiful. Personally I like, enjoy and comprehend English much better. ( Shame on me, seven after lining in Delhi for so long) But the letter was so touching. I loved how you brought out the emotions of Swara well. We all know that in the show Swara seems to have lost all senses, but you have her character depth, and justified her acting and reactions. I loved the letter.

I can't wait for the remaining parts. Just too much suspense that I can't even think of a good reply. But I really enjoyed reading it.

Thanks for the PM :)

Lots of love

Sree

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting and intriguing start..👍🏼

Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini

Omg ..

Kitna acha tha👏

Loved it alot yrrr ..

Jaldi update kr fr lamba comment ..

U r superb dude ..

Niyati loved ur work 👏.

Love

Originally posted by: manasie23

Ohhh God Shru you know what my sadist heart is doing garba after reading this update... Also I was geniunely surprised to find your pm...
I loved the wordings you have used in the letter written by Swara...
I also agree with Sanskaar here that maybe he did push her too soon...
Hope you are going to give this a happy ending or else you know I'll give avahan to Patali devi to haunt you in your dream s with her thumkas...
Update soon I'll be eagerly waiting for the second part...