Sanctified- A SwaSan TS- Final Parts Updated - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Anglaise

🤗 🤗 🤗
Im speechless..
U penned Swara absolutly well.. !! Really, this is what Swara!! Really really loved the Style of Ur writting..
Awesome!! Letter was beyond words!! I even holded myself to control myself!! Great job!! 👍🏼
Awesome piece.. Will wait for next Update..
Thanks for this piece!!
It was Awesome dear..
TC.. 👍🏼


Hey dear 🤗 x 10

Thank you so much for your lovely words- am touched. Next part is posted 😳, hope you like it! Lots of love x
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: SwaSanFanGirl


Shruts!!!!

Part2 is amazzziiinnnggg!!!!!!

Wow, the way you have covered Swara's emotions, her turmoil, and her reasons, is amazing. You are such an amazing writer. I don't even know whether I would ever be able to do that.

Her reasons of desperately wanting to be with him but still not being able to do that because of her fears and guilt is amazing. I am so glad Sanskaar is aware of her fears thanks to Dida and Shomi.

I really cannot wait to read about their interaction and how they are finally able to find solace in each other.

Update soon.


Thank you my sweet! So happy you like Part 2 and as for the kind comments about the writing- 😳😳. And come on, I have just commented on yours- you don't have anything to fear! 😃
So happy you liked the description of Swara's feelings. I have a definite idea for Part 3, will try to post as soon as I can. Loads of love xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Can't wait till part 3 It was so good
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Miss-swasan

Can't wait till part 3 It was so good


Thank you again and I'll PM you for part 3:) x
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely piece of writing...post wont let me copy sentences but there were a number of them that touched me...the swara in the show is twisted for trps and changed from her original avatar for that express purpose, and while v know or shall i say assume that a point or wat she has been thru shud have a particular result or possible outcomes like lack of trust, the cvs with their writing for drama have quite often lost that connect because of timing and the feel that wud allow swara actions to b accepted and understood...
I so wanted to c in the show a swara who would stand up for her self respect, who wud leave MM but alas woh hoga nahin...this swara u have made is relatable, her action, her malestorm emotions understandable, her confusion and willful ignorence of her changing feelings..she has had her trust broken so often by the very people who shud have protected it, nurtured it, that it wud effect anyones pysche and leave an indelible mark...she has to find herself...and even in all this she is missing the constant in her life...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
wonderful n i m speechless
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesumm dear
waiting fr 3rd part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part2 Swara's not so biological father was just as much a creep as Shekhar... Okay this part really did put light to Swara's inner battle with her own feelings and also why she is the way she is.. You truly have done a fabulous job at pening down her emotional rupture which was mostly inward...

So Sanskaar has come to finally talk it out .. Hope Swara sees the light..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
hey shru dis is for part 2
swara ke inner turmoil ...was so nicely done agar cvs aisa dekhayenge na tho along with trp aunties i will also cry ...dis never happens as i cry only for heroes❤️

sanskar comes to talk to her awww why doesnt he kiss her nd shut her up...but not possible k 😳

is swara on famous SR bridge😲

unresd my previous reply in page 5😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ahhh...shruti What an awesome Story
The letter gave me goosebumps
So well written...directly from the heart
Sanskaars point of view and swara's too was so well described
why can't CV's be only half as creative u r dear!!
What an amazing piece of work...really loved both the parts so much
Your writing style is so unique .I just loved how u weaved this story
The Ghat at bananras its significance and the place' description was so well written
keep writing more
love
Samiya

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