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ZAINAB

@Miss-swasan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Beautiful as always have u ever considered on being a professional writer that's how good u are

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Indrani

@indrani7495

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Shruti di...🤗

another lovely ts coming up...m so glad...!! Awesome...the first part...!!! That letter 😭...swara 's pov xplained well...but sanskar was again hurt from the letter ...even if it was an apology ...😭!!!

Thanx for d pm...eagerly waiting for the part 2!!😊

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nissi or jesi

@Jess_Ru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

shru dear ...thought to unres it but busy hogayi...and u updated second pat too but i will reply separetly for both parts

the letter was heartfelt ...feeling bad for dis girl...which is pretty rare for me😉

sanskar ...kya bolu...itna kuch hone ke baad bhi he was worried for her i can see dis happening in show

but if swara doesnt react 50% of wat u wrote in the epi...my trust on her will decrease😡

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Michelle George

@Michellekc18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

So I normally don't comment because I use Internet only through my phone and typing a comment is actually painful for a novice to the forum through a phone. But I just had to comment since I have been brainstorming a track for the past 2 weeks that involves swara writing a letter for sanskaar and leaving MM if she had any self respect. When her MIL keeps hoping she leaves the house, her proxy MIL thinks she is character less, her devar still chance maaroes at every chance and she has to prove her innocence time and again, seriously which self respecting woman will jhelo all this? Sita Devi refused to be humiliated and prove her innocence again and swara is a mere mortal. Of course that was before her doubting sanskaar episode was aired which considerably changes the dynamics. But still...

So thank you so much for this TS and wonderful writing as always.

Michelle.

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piccola1

@piccola1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Boo Hoo...you made me cry Shruti ! Swara's despair as she wrote it, her longing for what she thinks she does not deserve, her guilt at her hurting Sanskaar and her complete agony at leaving him, are fantastically captured..so well, you cant but shed a tear at this lost, bereft girl, so cruelly let down by so many people she loved so much.

Sanskaar's fear, realized as soon as he enters the room, and his instant reaction of how he needs to make it right, because he has pushed her too far, too soon..Lovely! Cant wait for him to track her down and make her realize that her agony is needless..and that he will be there for her to make it all come right 😳

This was heartfelt and beautiful ! Loved it. ⭐️😃

Note: I am extremely curious to find out what exactly had he asked her the prev night !😊

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Aww hun this was such a satisfying read!! Gosh I may sound like a sadist but I guess the gal really needs to get out of that wretched house! Self respect cms foremost for me n I respect her decision for that!

I hv quit the shw for quite sm tym nw... Last I saw was the eppy b4 rags was kidnapped, where swara slapped her... N I hv nt even bothered to chk the WUs... But I do hv sm vague idea of the current plot frm the topic headings here in the forum... And all I can say is that my current head canon is that Swara just leaves the damn place and moves away! And this fic of urs is nw happily feeding that Head Canon! I'm so happy!

Waiting for the nxt part eagerly nw!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: --Anna--
Oh Shru! Why did you do this? 😭 😭 😭

That letter it made me cry. I am tugging at my shirt sleeve just to stop the tears from flowing.

'Maine tumpar bharosa naa kar ke galti nahin gunah kiya hai' 😭 My sadist heart is happy but because a part of my heart does feel for Swara and what all she has gone through, I cried. 😭

Oh loved the first chapter Shru! I love this style of writing, makes you look from the character's viewpoint more closely and there is a personal feel to it. 👏 Loved the concept, loved how emotional Swara was when she wrote the letter and I could feel her turmoil. Beautiful! 👏

Sanskaar, ahh, the pain he must have felt when he must have read the letter - I can only imagine. If the letter made me cry and want a hand kerchief, I cannot say how broken Sanskaar must have felt after reading the letter.

The Letter : I loved Swara's letter! It made me cry and it made me emotional. 😭

I love how Swara has decided to give her self respect important and that apology to Sanskaar - it was so heart wrenching. I loved the part where she wrote that she does not deserve Sanskaar's love after all that he has done for her. Wish Swara in general could realise that. I can totally see her being heartbroken at Sanskaar's ignorance. She loves him and she may not know it, I hope the next part of the TS will have her explore her feelings like we once discussed. Distance makes the heart grow fonder and I hope Swara realises that. 😳

Lovely Lovely Lovely! I am going to be reading this again too.

Anna

P.S : Why cannot the Creatives of the show stalk the forum and read this? So badly wanted this to happen in the show too! And Viji's one too, Music of the Soul! 😳

Anna my love 🤗

I caused crying 😲. Sorry but part of me rejoicing at the lovely lovely comments! Which writer doesn't like to know that they can inspire emotion so I thank you most sincerely for this.

Glad you liked the first person style I tried and that you felt for Swara in this, that was my aim. I know an apology doesn't fix things but it is the start and if they want to rebuild she needed to acknowledge first so...Let me know whether you think part 2 which I just posted does more to make us see whether Swara's journey is going in the right direction or not?! Love you hugely for this!

PS: CVs- 😕😕 No idea what they want to do 😭

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

wow such a emotional start
loved it
update soon n if possible pm m

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

You are on fire today akka! One little correction though, you wrote 'start contract' instead of 'stark contrast' but everything else was perfect, as always.

I always thought that Swara clings to the fantasy of the picture perfect family that she created for herself when she was a child. having grown up with only her maa and dida she probably longed for a big family. She probably was also teased/bullied in school for her mother being a single parent. These, I think, scarred her and now that she has what she thinks is a perfect family, she is clinging to it and is not ready to see that it is not perfect in any way!

Her pain and longing for Sanskaar were a treat. Is that too sadistic of me? I so guessed that Sanskaar would go after her and he did! I feel that he is is the only one who can heal her.

I am looking forward to part 3 and for SwaSan confrontation!

Edited by bloomnskyrules - 9 years ago

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: asexualflower
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Wow Shrutu! 👏👏

This was exactly the kind of thing I wanted to happen in the show. Swara leaving MM while only leaving behind a letter of apology to Sanskaar, and then him pursuing her. It's almost like you read my mind! You know what they say, great minds think alike!

Anyways, I don't know why you were so unsure of the letter, it was perfect. 😭 You included all of the important details and explained Swara's POV so beautifully. And yeah the first person POV is different from your normal style, but I'm definitely enjoying it.

And that one phrase "I had pushed her too far too soon," was so impactful IMO.

All in all, just like everything you write, I loved this TS too. Can't wait for the next parts. 😃

Sapu 🤗

Thank you so much honey! I so wanted Swara to go to Baadi when that crap had started and it was infuriating me that they never showed it. Great minds indeed 😃. So relieved to read what you said. Unsure due to the hindi and content and well the whole thing really. I feel that Sanskaar was totally right but for someone like Swara it can be too much as she is struggling anyway:)! Next part up, hope its ok xx

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