Sanctified- A SwaSan TS- Final Parts Updated

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Swathy

@SwathyS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

waiting for next parts

swara need to understand that while she goes around thinking of all doing or wanting to do good to all no one except sanskar gives her a helping hand and while she gives it name of friendship she also knows that he loves her.

Am waiting for her to find that love in her heart and give it back to him.

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Awww..Shruti..🤗

It was a brilliant way to start this TS..Really nice first part..

But Swara is a coward..she just ran away na..😲

She could have talked to him face to face and begged forgiveness..😭 But I know it will be difficult, since she was sure that Sanskaar would not hear anything..

But anyway..Sanskaar read the letter, and he was affected by her departure..

Loved the way you wrote the story in 'the first person style' narration..It was good to read their feelings, directly from their hearts..👏

The letter was so touching..Nicely written..Nice selection of words..

Especially I loved the saahil aur aasmaan waala line..It is so true..👏

The quote about sorry was also the apt one..Thanks for sharing

Now I am eagerly waiting the next update😊😊

Love,
Naina😳

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718075

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Shru Di 🤗

Wow. I'm going to be honest, I cried. This was beautiful. Personally I like, enjoy and comprehend English much better. ( Shame on me, seven after lining in Delhi for so long) But the letter was so touching. I loved how you brought out the emotions of Swara well. We all know that in the show Swara seems to have lost all senses, but you have her character depth, and justified her acting and reactions. I loved the letter.

I can't wait for the remaining parts. Just too much suspense that I can't even think of a good reply. But I really enjoyed reading it.

Thanks for the PM :)

Lots of love

Sree

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
SWARA!😡 That selfish, hypocritical, self centered 🤬 She doesnt even show the basic decency & courtesy to say goodbye to him, to talk to him before leaving😡😡😡 And even when Madamji has bothered to leave behind a letter she includes that cheapster & that lettuce😡 I just cannot stand it when she compares Sanskaar with those two even remotely😡 She has enough courage to scream accusations at him but not enough to accept her faults?😡

I dont really get this reasoning which many people give on this forum about Swara that since she has never seen a decent man in her life she is unable to understand & reciprocate Sanskaar's feelings😕 A person who is deprived of goodness, when she gets it in loads, wont she be overwhelmed & even grateful? Especially when that person's actions match his words, when he is consistent in his feelings, when his faith in her isn't dependent on proofs (unlike hers!) & he proves his worth time & again. A person who hasn't experienced any goodness can still recognize it in others & when she experiences it as THE thing which she missed her whole life! In her case its more a case of getting more than she deserves & getting it all too easily is what I feel🥱

Sanskaar ne isse kaha tha ke dusro ke baarein mein sochte sochte ye khudke baarein mein sochna bhul gayi. So khudke baarein mein sochne ki shuruvat isne Sanskaar ki turn aane pe hi ki?😊🤣👏

Does she really think that admitting just her selfishness makes it ok? That is so convenient, isnt it? What a coward🤢

And Shru he has to make things right? 😕 I hope that means making things right in HIS LIFE! Slap the divorce papers on her face, set her free & most importantly set yourself free!

👏 Congrats Shru you have managed to portray the show Swara perfectly. This one made me as angry as that one😆 Waiting for Part 2.

Shruti 🤗

I sort of fear reading this you won't like Part 2 or indeed the whole TS. I am trying to make sense of Swara. Whether you or I like her or not, whether we understand her reasoning (or illogical reasoning), she is who she is. Something made her this way and in Part 2- I will explore that even if I have to create stuff to do it but overall we have what we have in the form of our heroine. The hero loves her and only her so unfortunately we either ship them or not and I am out of hope that Swara will ever entirely change so this is my way to reconcile her somehow. Hence the experiment and difficulty in doing so. Re her cowardice in leaving, she is and does but without giving too much away, she and Sanskaar have talked the night before and her leaving is a result of that as she doesn't have the answers he has demanded:) Hopefully next part might help. Another very important part is that I think Swara this time is right in leaving. She was accused again of being characterless and once the kidnap is exposed I think its a slap to her self respect to stay. Yes, unfortunately Sanskaar suffers in this but for her in the circumstances it is the only way a confused soul like her would react. Whether I like it or not, without recreating Swara's character which I don't do in my stories, little other choice! The making right- again, I am not in full agreement. It is always to some extent going to be Sanskaar's role to take sensible decisions not Swara's and if he wants her, which he of course does, he will have to do something although she too will now have to nail her colours to the mast. I don't want to write that they sign divorce papers and that's it 😆. Hopefully my explanation makes sense?!

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago

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--Anna--

@--Anna--

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Unreserved page 1 😳

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

interesting and intriguing start..👍🏼

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Omg ..

Kitna acha tha👏

Loved it alot yrrr ..

Jaldi update kr fr lamba comment ..

U r superb dude ..

Niyati loved ur work 👏.

Love

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Vyshu 🤗

Akka/ di is fine as long as you don't regard me too buddha! 😆
You seriously mean it? It's ok? It is weird writing something in a totally different style you see. Thanks so much for saying this, made me feel relieved. Hmm- a lot of this is Swara based unlike my usual Sanskaar centric work but let's see what you get in Part 2- writing now 😉

I siriusly do mean it! (I love Sirius Black) Part 1 is brilliant and you have raised the bar for yourself! Let's see how you top this, no pressure though! 😉

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Ohhh God Shru you know what my sadist heart is doing garba after reading this update... Also I was geniunely surprised to find your pm...
I loved the wordings you have used in the letter written by Swara...
I also agree with Sanskaar here that maybe he did push her too soon...
Hope you are going to give this a happy ending or else you know I'll give avahan to Patali devi to haunt you in your dream s with her thumkas...
Update soon I'll be eagerly waiting for the second part...

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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Shruti,

Even I am working on a surprise. Only one person knows about it and I won't reveal it until and unless I am done with that😃

But what an update. The letter from Swara to Sanskaar literally brought tears in my eyes. Ahh, I so wish they could have shown something like this in the show. Especially, Swara standing up for her own self respect. That is so much more needed man.

I am really curious to know what will Sanskaar do next. Has Sanskaar already sensed her hidden feelings from the letter?

Update soon Shruts!!! can't wait to know what happens next😃

Edited by SwaSanFanGirl - 9 years ago