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Ranjini

@MFRanjini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Loved reading it Shru, will wait for more updates ❤️

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PUBALI BASU

@MysticMoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

You know how to add magic in your writing..

Hats off..

The emotion behind each word of what Swara said in her letter was out of the world..

Made me cry...👏 waiting for next updates

Thanks for PM

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
I don't know why you were so afraid akka (is it OK if i call you that? It means di in my language) but this is beautiful! Swara's letter tugged at my heart and the way you portrayed Swara's pain is heartwrenching!
Poor Sanskaar. I am so sure that in the next part Sanskaar's pain is going to bring tears to my eyes but I am so masochistic that I am looking forward to it!
Waiting anxiously for the next part...

Vyshu 🤗

Akka/ di is fine as long as you don't regard me too buddha! 😆

You seriously mean it? It's ok? It is weird writing something in a totally different style you see. Thanks so much for saying this, made me feel relieved. Hmm- a lot of this is Swara based unlike my usual Sanskaar centric work but let's see what you get in Part 2- writing now 😉

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MFRanjini
Loved reading it Shru, will wait for more updates ❤️

Thanks Ranjini- will try and finish Part 2 tonight x

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dilwali

@dilwali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Its brilliant i liked this first part a lot n go ahead update plz soon n ur work n way of expressing omg i hv bcum fan of ur writing. lots of luv shru n thanks for pm

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Vaibhi.
You know how to add magic in your writing..
Hats off..
The emotion behind each word of what Swara said in her letter was out of the world..
Made me cry...👏 waiting for next updates
Thanks for PM

Seriously Pubi- you liked it? Phew- thanks so much for this! The letter was worrying me as it's easy to write letters in English for me! Thank you!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: KawalArora
Its brilliant i liked this first part a lot n go ahead update plz soon n ur work n way of expressing omg i hv bcum fan of ur writing. lots of luv shru n thanks for pm

Thank you so much sweetie- you guys are so lovely xx

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Raunika

@rsk16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Fantastic start. Absolutely loved the style it was written in. No problems at all .

Love the way you dealt with swara and her insecurities .hoping to read sanskar's point of view too .

Keep up the great work. 👏

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

SWARA!😡 That selfish, hypocritical, self centered 🤬 She doesnt even show the basic decency & courtesy to say goodbye to him, to talk to him before leaving😡😡😡 And even when Madamji has bothered to leave behind a letter she includes that cheapster & that lettuce😡 I just cannot stand it when she compares Sanskaar with those two even remotely😡 She has enough courage to scream accusations at him but not enough to accept her faults?😡

I dont really get this reasoning which many people give on this forum about Swara that since she has never seen a decent man in her life she is unable to understand & reciprocate Sanskaar's feelings😕 A person who is deprived of goodness, when she gets it in loads, wont she be overwhelmed & even grateful? Especially when that person's actions match his words, when he is consistent in his feelings, when his faith in her isn't dependent on proofs (unlike hers!) & he proves his worth time & again. A person who hasn't experienced any goodness can still recognize it in others & when she experiences it as THE thing which she missed her whole life! In her case its more a case of getting more than she deserves & getting it all too easily is what I feel🥱

Sanskaar ne isse kaha tha ke dusro ke baarein mein sochte sochte ye khudke baarein mein sochna bhul gayi. So khudke baarein mein sochne ki shuruvat isne Sanskaar ki turn aane pe hi ki?😊🤣👏

Does she really think that admitting just her selfishness makes it ok? That is so convenient, isnt it? What a coward🤢

And Shru he has to make things right? 😕 I hope that means making things right in HIS LIFE! Slap the divorce papers on her face, set her free & most importantly set yourself free!

👏 Congrats Shru you have managed to portray the show Swara perfectly. This one made me as angry as that one😆 Waiting for Part 2.

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

I m speechless.
Awsm strt.
I also wantd swara do smthng lk ths bt...
Swara ki kahi hui har ek baat,har ek emotn was mindblowing.
I wantd swara say smthng abt her emotn 2 sanskar.she stnd 4 her slf respect.
Othrside sanskar whose life z swara,so much broken bcz of swara's mistrust.
bt yet jst a letter & leave,ths break sanskar more.Trust was thr base of relatn,whn its broken,it broke thr heart also.
Waiting 4 nxt part.cnt soon.thnks 4 pm.

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