SwaSan TS: Music of the Soul-The Agony & the Ecstasy-Completed

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PenguinBaby

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

That was sooo good! I can't help but reading this again and again...I've already read it thrice😆 Ragini was superb here...finally she is thinking about how her actions have affected people, especially Swara...

Sanskar was awesome like always and Swara too can be seen walking towards the journey of pining😆 Waiting for update!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: anju10
woww lovely update dear
beautifully written
amazing
thanxx for the pm
waitng for next updates
😊

Thanks Very much Anju for that lovely feedback. 🤗 Glad to know you liked it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Sia212
Beautiful!
Wonderfully written😊... Eagerly waiting for the next part😳

Thanks so much Sia. 🤗 working on part 2 now. Hope to have it up tomorrow.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: soapbubble
A series against the backdrop of healing music!
Wow!

Thanks Bubble 🤗 Glad you liked the theme.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Ashakalyani
its simply awesome...u have depicted ragini's emotion beautifully...cant wait to read next parts...update soon

Thanks a ton, Asha. ..🤗. Glad to know you liked it. Am working very hard on chapter 2 😆, hope to have it up tomorrow.

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-Ros-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Hey 😳,

Wonderfully insightful piece on Ragini. Really liked the way you distinguished between Ragini's love for Laksh and Sanskaar's love for Swara. The warnings and advice Sanskaar gave to her was nothing OTT, but just simple reality- wish Ragini would be a little more perceptive and realises that she's destroying herself in the process of her revenge in the show too.

I especially liked this sentence:

And the curse which Ragini suffered from was, the burning fire would not stop, just because the recipient was gone. It burnt, on and on, getting hotter and hotter, a hell-fire that seemed ready to consume her--both its host, and its victim.

Thank you for the PM.😊

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RUQAIYA10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Viji you always leave me in awe with your immense writing talent. As I was reading I couldn't help feeling a sudden surge of empathy and compassion for Ragini. You have delved deep in to the very recess and brought forth a very intelligent psychoanalysis of her character. The narration helps the reader view Ragini from a different vantage point. This Ragini stirs something inside you and you realize that she is such a tormented soul. I think Sanskar somehow realizes this and is giving her the opportunity to free herself from this torture.

Waiting for the next part Viji. The last part kind of makes you root for her hoping she will grab the lifeline Sanskar has offered her.

🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: a_uma
I just love your writing.. you have amazing gift of language.. not a single word out of place.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

.. refreshing to see Ragini's story and prespective.. and nice to see that Sanskar cares for her as a friend and gives her good advice..

..waiting for the other updates.. and swasan story.. 😳

Hey Uma...wow...thanks for those lovely compliments. 😳 Really made by day today.

Yes, I do feel Sanskaar will play a role in Ragini's redemption, they were friends after all...and he did give her that initial push into the path that led to her morphing into this cold, conniving person. Its another matter that he tried to turn her back too, but perhaps it was too late then. I do feel he would give her a second chance, and help her on the road back to her earlier self.

Am hard at work on chapter 2. 😊 Hope to have it up tomorrow.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
very beautiful.
ragini's monologue for everyone,a thinking of whole happenings r beautiful.
oho!i like sanskar's part with ragini.
cnt soon.waiting for swasan scenes.
i love it..ur writings r so amaizing⭐️

Thanks so very much Sonu. ..🤗 i am very glad you liked it, and I was seriously going 😳 at your lovely compliments.

Yeah I also feel Sanskaar would help Ragini on her path to redemption.

I am working in chapter 2 and hope to have it up tomorrow.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: kulsum_5
Viji.. 🤗
Loved it.. first part dedicated to Ragini..😊
Sanskaar's part was awesome, he still cares for Ragini and advised her to end this revenge and plotting,.. just loved this part. ragini will confess right?😉
beautifully written.. and waiting for swasan moments..😳 update soon..⭐️

Hey Kulsum 🤗 Thanks a ton dear...

Yeah Sanskaar is a good friend na...so I'm sure he will help Ragini to redeem herself. I am sure he feels bad for having encouraged her in the beginning, he already did his best once to turn her back from the brink; but that time Ragini had gone too deep to the dark side. I feel Sanskaar will give her a second chance, and support her efforts to go back to the good person she used to be.

Yes, I think Ragini will confess too. Let's see. 😆

I am writing the 2nd part. Hope to have it up tomorrow.