SwaSan TS: Music of the Soul-The Agony & the Ecstasy-Completed - Page 7

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

First a question before I comment on part 1: have you learnt music, or was all that just research? I truly love how you take up various themes be it colours which was in one of your previous works or music in this one, apply it to these characters and then tell such a beautiful story.

Ragini is such a captivating and compelling character, isn't she? Very much similar to sanskaar but still worlds apart. They are two sides of the same coin, connected but always different. I liked ragini wanting to change, I loved it that sanskaar was giving her that chance. Who better than him to know that if someone gives you a chance you can change! There would be so much lesser evil in the world if only people gave others a chance.

Sanskaar isn't coming to her to preach about truth. He isn't begging, rather he makes sure she understands who is doing whom a favour. Smart as usual 😉 Ragini sulkily admitting that they aren't back to being friends 😆 and then comes the line that is just so sanskaar, passionate and genuine to the core 😳

That line about ragini still being his enemy if she is swara's!! How can you not fall for a person who is so passionate and honest?!

Ragini truly deserves someone better than laksh, and not because he doesn't love her. Even if he did he would never be her equal, her partner. He just doesn't have her intelligence, drive, courage...nothing 🥱

Waiting for part 2!

Originally posted by: foresight

It was beautifully written Viji. You highlighted the difference in the two loves, her transformation - one that probably her old self might not even recognise, her insecurities at still trying to reveal the truth and loss this Laksh despite what he has put her through (as you rightly put unworthy; but one she cannot get away from), the realisation that Swara and Sanskar's pain doesnt make her happy. Where do I stop! Each part of it was put forward so beautifully. Along with the pain of seeing Laksh still the way he is.

It was great to see all of this put from Ragini's point of view.

I am looking forward to the next two Raags. I liked the concept of Raag...they have their own meaning, emotions and context that conveys as much as prose can

👏 👏

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Res

Will unres after reading the whole TS

I don't like cliffhangers😆

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Nice update

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thanks so much Sapna. 🤗 I find Ragini a very fascinating character, and I wanted to explore that a bit in detail here. I am frankly looking forward to her redemption being shown in a sensible manner in the serial, because she really did have a lot of good points. And like I've been saying in reply to some of the other comments, while she has to take ultimate responsibility for her own actions, one can't deny that both Lakshya and Sanskaar facilitated her descent into this obsessive behavior.

And am really happy you noticed about the raag bit. The serial started around the theme of music, we haven't seen much of that of late, except a stray reference to Swara going to Benares to recruit a music teacher. 😉 I did want to interweave music with the characters' growth and transformation, and besides, I love classical instrumental (studied the violin for almost 6 years).

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Vijiii🤗🤗🤗

A Much needed TS dear..I am damn happy after reading this story..😃😃😃

I am very much yearning for Ragini's redemption in the show..and here comes my angel Viji with this plot..I love you for this❤️

Ragini's portrayal in the show is being OTT now a days..But I loved your way of starting to make her redeemable, by our one and only Sanskaar..😳 Since he was the one who started all this, he has an obligation to end this too..😊

I loved the way you explained about Ragini's singing prowess, that Raga and all..It was brilliant..

And I am impressed by Swara madam's yearning for Sanskaar😆 Let her yearn a bit more..😛

Lakshya is still being a 🤬 and is still after his bhabhi..😡 Oh god when will he learn..

And Viji I didn't understand your portrayal of AP here..Ragini doubting about her saasu maa's ulterior motives..😲 I mean what can it be..??

I am eagerly waiting for your next update yaar🤗

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice...

Ragini's feeling were true..

sanskar giving it back to rags was awesome...

He gave her a chance to be the old ragini she used to be...

But at her own choice...

Loved it..

Continue soon..

Thank u for the pM..