SwaSan TS: Music of the Soul-The Agony & the Ecstasy-Completed

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

very beautiful.

ragini's monologue for everyone,a thinking of whole happenings r beautiful.

oho!i like sanskar's part with ragini.

cnt soon.waiting for swasan scenes.

i love it..ur writings r so amaizing⭐️

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Zaalima_5

@Zaalima_5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Viji.. 🤗

Loved it.. first part dedicated to Ragini..😊

Sanskaar's part was awesome, he still cares for Ragini and advised her to end this revenge and plotting,.. just loved this part. ragini will confess right?😉

beautifully written.. and waiting for swasan moments..😳 update soon..⭐️

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Hey Viji! 🤗
Even though this part was from Ragini's point of view I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and yes as you said your story varies from the one we are currently watching on tv and let me tell you far better than something they have come up with

Even I do not understand how suddenly Ragini will become a yo yo modern bahurani... And also I liked the bit that you have tried to include music here which used to define SwaRagini but sadly it is not even mentioned anymore...

Ohh so Sanskaar has gathered all the proofs he needs to to prove Swara innocent... But the goodness in him or maybe just wants Ragini to self confess is stopping him from balantly blaming her infront of the whole family just yet...

I loved the last but where we see Ragini still pining for Lakshya's attention and he is busy with his obsession for Swara... Actually there is almost no difference between Ragini and Lakshya's defination of love... Also Swara looking longingly at Sanskaar and he trying to avoid looking at her but is still so concerned for her... Typical Sanskaar no!

Update soon 😳

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laddu1691

@laddu1691

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

hi Viji...

What a sunday mornig woke up to your pm...

u made my sunday...

it was an awesome start... you have written Ragini's feelings so beautifully... i really feel sorry she fell for Lakshya... the way she is confused as to what to do next... you've made Ragini human again for me... unlike the show i must say...

and Sanskar ❤️ my heart goes out to him

how he is mad at his wife at the same time protective of her...

how is swara going to woo him

eagerly waiting

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Thanks for all the lovely comments guys...🤗 Really felt very nice waking up to such warm feedback. Had a late morning, as I was up till a most ungodly hour posting this 1st chapter 😊, and have some errands to run now. But will reply to all comments individually a little later.

Thanks again. 🤗

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Hi Viji...

For the first time in my life, I feel not too sure with my words, whether or not they might success in describing what I am going through at the moment.

Some times, in the utterly honest way of portraying it an ugly, venomous mindset also can be appealing and alluring at the same time a little frightening and thrilling. Ragini here was that, a demon in the angelic mask a angle surrendered to the demonic thought process at the same time.

Sanskar of cause being the bridge between the light and dark, the messenger to both angles and demons, understood and decided to give one more chance. This quality of him even in the show I have appreciated, but it was never this profound here.

Your words on Lakshya, aptly chosen from Ragini's vantage point, I have nothing to add there.

Ragini, I must say captured my uttermost attention. This was she before she got lost in swirls of ridiculous drama in the show. Thanks for pulling her up, by extending the courtesy of exploring her redemption Viji.

Now you have set stakes high with the first part, I'm keenly waiting to see how you will break them with the parts to follow.

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nissi or jesi

@Jess_Ru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

vijji🤗at 3am u typed dis typos tho hain hee nay ...mareko bhi sikha de yaar ...can i be ur student😊

awesome potrayal of ragini nd chotu sa swasan scene was very cute

waiting for part 2 nd 3

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: SwaSanFanGirl
Yayyy
I am first

Btw, just curious, are you abida parween fan? I like few of tracks so much!!!😃

Part 1 is just amazing. How I wish CVs would have shown this instead the crap drama they are showing or planning on showing us

Your update was all Sanskaar centric!!! How he makes Ragini realize where she has come to with her nonsense reason of revenge and delusions of love!!!

The explanation given by Sanskaar is amazing.. amazing..

And Sanskaar baby is still upset with biwiji? Ahhh, gave my sadist heart some great pleasure😆 😆 😆

The slow realization dawning through Ragini of what she has done is amazing. How I wish I could one day write and weave those words in such a beautiful manner.

That is why I take a seat back and just read rather than writing. Coz, I know I cannot write it so beautifully.

Cannot wait for the next update. And cannot wait to know how Swara would manofy pati ji😆

Hi Shonali. ...am so glad you are first too 🤗 🤗

Thanks so much for those lovely words. Am very glad you liked this chapter. I so wanted to show a sensible redemption track for Ragini...I do feel she was, at heart, a simple girl, though completely repressed and over protected. So once this obsession took hold, she did not have a strong enough moral compass to resist it.

I wanted to show Sanskaar helping Ragini to achieve some closure, to help her on the path back to the light. He did, after all, play some role in starting her down this road, though he did try to pull her back from the brink. Probably at that time, it was a little too late, but I would like to think he can give her a second chance, and help her redeem herself.

Oh I am also a sadist like you 😉. I want Sanskaar to cold shoulder Swara a bit, and I really want to see Swara pine for him, pursue him and woo him. 😳 She has to realize that what she feels for him is more than for a "best friend". 😆

Thanks again, and I will do my best to post part 2 soon. Hoping to do it tomorrow.

Am quite a fan of both Gulzar saab and Begum Abida Parween. 😊 I learned the violin for about 6 years, so am also a huge fan of Indian classical instrumental, artistes like the Late U Shrinivas Ji (Mandolin), Pandit Ravi Shankar, Shri Lalgudi Jayram.

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago