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Posted: 9 years ago

Great to hear that you learnt the violin - I started learning it late - after qualifying my CA - so still 'learning' my personal favorites include raga mohana and raga madhyavathi!

Nyna

Lovely to know that you're learning music too. 😊 Are you taking up the violin? Or vocal music?

Raga Mohana is one of my personal favorites too. 😊


Violin - People generally seem to be very upset when I sing 😉



Hahahaha...yeah well what to do. Even the most musically inclined amongst us normally has one area we are expert in---either instrumental or vocal. 😊 Very few can be like Ragini, who can both sing like a nightingale and play sitar like a female Ravi Shankar. 😊 Or for that matter like Swara, who can also sing like a koel and play guitar like...well I'm not sure who's the expert in guitar, so please fill in. 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



Hey Suha...🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much dear. Saw that, it's such a pleasure to discuss your views. You had analyzed the whole chapter and the points you liked with such intricate detail, it was really a privilege. 🤗

Congrats on you becoming IF Rockerz. 👏 👏 Very well deserved indeed.



viji 🤗
u learned violin...sounds great dearie...
and ur knowledge about the music n the way u describe very enchanting...
love you for the sweetest words
❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
raag todi

whole scenario of ragini singing is extemely awesome👏
royal n glorious⭐️
and the moment btwn swaragini is cutest😊
complimenting each other wow😛😳
the way she described sanskaar as a husband⭐️

he always has eyes n ears only for u😳

and the description u gave about sanskaars place in swaras life
overwhelming viji❤️

omg both so deep n irrevocably in love...the passion ...awww☺️
eyes on each other always...❤️

how sweet of sanskaar he genuinely giving time to ragini

and felt really good to c ragini😃
trying to save swara n keeping an on lakshya moves
swasan speaking through eyes so nice to see so☺️

indeed it was not only for swara and his sake but raginis own

thats really👏

happy to c a well determined ragini who z ready to face anything...bold⭐️


its so touching when she said DONT CUT ME OFF FROM UR LIVES
SWASAN was her support👍🏼
how much she got relieved after getting their response😳
really nice👏

laksh asusual very immature😕
ur descriptions regarding him...very convincing😊
the way he recollected how ragini entered his life
and furthur changes
he z in hurry...hurry to destroy🤢

felt sorry for ragini...😭🥺
the way sanskaar stood for swara..outstanding⭐️

after that horrible incident...
all living their lives happily😃
its so refreshing to see happily living swasan🤗


asusual viji its perfection⭐️
m falling short of words
atlast i read 3parts mission succesful😆
thanks alot for the beautiful story n ur sweetness to remind me
m glad really glad😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
^^^^ Suha dear...thanks a ton for this lovely comment 🤗 🤗
I have some personal commitments to attend to today, and then writing the last part of my SwaSan TS "Karna Parva---Day 17". So I will pakka give a comprehensive revert to your absolutely marvelous comment tomorrow.

Love you dear...it's indeed a privilege and pleasure to get your feedback. Am very glad that you liked this concluding part of the 3S. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

^^^^ Suha dear...thanks a ton for this lovely comment 🤗 🤗

I have some personal commitments to attend to today, and then writing the last part of my SwaSan TS "Karna Parva---Day 17". So I will pakka give a comprehensive revert to your absolutely marvelous comment tomorrow.

Love you dear...it's indeed a privilege and pleasure to get your feedback. Am very glad that you liked this concluding part of the 3S. 🤗


take ur time ya
this thread of urs z like chitchat club for suha n viji😉
i feel so
all 3parts are amazing
last one is stupendous
sanskaar swara ragini all are awesome
new ts???? day 16 n day 17 are they different
much love❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Monica_Suhasini


take ur time ya
this thread of urs z like chitchat club for suha n viji😉
i feel so
all 3parts are amazing
last one is stupendous
sanskaar swara ragini all are awesome
new ts???? day 16 n day 17 are they different
much love❤️


So sorry my dear. I was caught up in loads of office work today and posting the last part of my latest "Mahabharata Analogy " themed 3S on SwaSan. Well...it has 3 chapters : "Dyuta Parva", "Karna Parva---Day 16" and "Karna Parva---Day 17". Do read that if interested and when time permits.

I will give a detailed reply to your comment here on the music 3S tomorrow pakka. 😊

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum


So sorry my dear. I was caught up in loads of office work today and posting the last part of my latest "Mahabharata Analogy " themed 3S on SwaSan. Well...it has 3 chapters : "Dyuta Parva", "Karna Parva---Day 16" and "Karna Parva---Day 17". Do read that if interested and when time permits.

I will give a detailed reply to your comment here on the music 3S tomorrow pakka. 😊


viji...girl dnt b sooo formal
aur late reply diya thobi chalega
vl definetly read
and lucky to read ur stories i say
u are so sweet
no need to feel sorry
take care
Edited by Monica_Suhasini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Monica_Suhasini

raag todi


whole scenario of ragini singing is extemely awesome👏
royal n glorious⭐️
and the moment btwn swaragini is cutest😊
complimenting each other wow😛😳
the way she described sanskaar as a husband⭐️

he always has eyes n ears only for u😳

and the description u gave about sanskaars place in swaras life
overwhelming viji❤️

omg both so deep n irrevocably in love...the passion ...awww☺️
eyes on each other always...❤️

how sweet of sanskaar he genuinely giving time to ragini

and felt really good to c ragini😃
trying to save swara n keeping an on lakshya moves
swasan speaking through eyes so nice to see so☺️

indeed it was not only for swara and his sake but raginis own

thats really👏

happy to c a well determined ragini who z ready to face anything...bold⭐️


its so touching when she said DONT CUT ME OFF FROM UR LIVES
SWASAN was her support👍🏼
how much she got relieved after getting their response😳
really nice👏

laksh asusual very immature😕
ur descriptions regarding him...very convincing😊
the way he recollected how ragini entered his life
and furthur changes
he z in hurry...hurry to destroy🤢

felt sorry for ragini...😭🥺
the way sanskaar stood for swara..outstanding⭐️

after that horrible incident...
all living their lives happily😃
its so refreshing to see happily living swasan🤗


asusual viji its perfection⭐️
m falling short of words
atlast i read 3parts mission succesful😆
thanks alot for the beautiful story n ur sweetness to remind me
m glad really glad😳



Good Morning my dear, dear pal Suha...🤗 🤗 🤗

Hundreds and Hundreds of tight jhappis to you for this lovely, amazing, motivating comment. 😊

I was so touched my your comments for all 3 Raaga based chapters in this 3S---starting with Yaman Kalyan, going on to Bhairav and ending with Todi.

In the concluding part, the introduction scene was from the future, where Ragini's redemption is complete, and she and Swara are jointly running the music school. Their sibling bond has ben fully restored, and Ragini has also rediscovered the goodnes within herself, the person she used to be. She loves and values her sister and jeeju a lot. 😊 And she is gently teasing her sister about how her jeejaji cannot take his eyes off her at anytime!! 😉 Sanskaar has eyes and ears only for Swara, as we all fans know so well. ☺️ 😳

Back to the present, Sanskaar genuinely wants to give Ragini a chance to repent for her sins and redeem. After all, who better than him, to know the value of a chance to rediscover the values one used to have? And in the meantime, he and Swara had also completely resolved all their misunderstanding, they were completely in love with each other, and all the wounds to their trust and belief had been healed by their soul connect.

I really enjoyed writing that Sanskaar and Swara scene with Ragini, where they ask her what her decision is regarding her accepting the full truth. I am so very happy to hear you loved reading it, Suha. It assured me that it had come across the way I wanted it to. You are so right, SwaSan can hold a entire conversation with each other through their expressions and the way their eyes speak to each other. They don't really need words. 😊 And as Sanskaar says, Ragini accepting the truth, is important not just for Swara & Sanskaar, but for Ragini's own self.

I wanted to show Lakshya's thought processes here a bit, and I'm glad you liked that. I do think that he lacks emotional and intellectual maturity and depth. Even if he had not developed that infatuation for Swara, and had not broken his engagement with Ragini; I feel he would not have been able to reciprocate or accept the sheer intensity of her feelings for him. In a way, I do feel Lakshya is incapable of feeling or handling such a powerful emotion. He prefers to always be light hearted and fun loving, and I do feel very deep emotions scare him off!

He did try his best to spin a web to trap Sanskaar! Attack Ragini while in disguise and put the blame on Sanskaar...but neither Ragini nor Swara believe him. Swara anyway would never believe anything against her hubby! 😳

So in the end, SwaSan come together for their joyous, blissful life together, and Ragini too, finds her peace. Sometime later, I would like to think that she also finds love with some other person.

And who knows, Lakshya himself, once he sorts out his issues, may meet a girl suited for his temperament. He needs to repent and redeem first of course, but there is always hope for the future. 😊

Thanks so much once again, Suha darling. It was such a pleasure and privilege, having your feedback throughout this musical journey!

Love,

----Viji



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Monica_Suhasini


viji...girl dnt b sooo formal
aur late reply diya thobi chalega
vl definetly read
and lucky to read ur stories i say
u are so sweet
no need to feel sorry
take care



Ok, Suha dear, done!

No more formalities, we are buddies after all. 🤗

I have replied your amazing comment in detail, in my post above..

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



Good Morning my dear, dear pal Suha...🤗 🤗 🤗

hi dearest🤗 ❤️ 🤗

Hundreds and Hundreds of tight jhappis to you for this lovely, amazing, motivating comment. 😊

jhappis to you tooo... for this beautiful story...n beautiful you


I was so touched my your comments for all 3 Raaga based chapters in this 3S---starting with Yaman Kalyan, going on to Bhairav and ending with Todi.


told na re credit to u...ur story made u write such comments
usually i vl comment very short
very few attract me to write..ur stories are at top

In the concluding part, the introduction scene was from the future, where Ragini's redemption is complete, and she and Swara are jointly running the music school. Their sibling bond has ben fully restored, and Ragini has also rediscovered the goodnes within herself, the person she used to be. She loves and values her sister and jeeju a lot. 😊 And she is gently teasing her sister about how her jeejaji cannot take his eyes off her at anytime!! 😉 Sanskaar has eyes and ears only for Swara, as we all fans know so well. ☺️ 😳

loved this one...and its very graceful to see thier bong being restored


Back to the present, Sanskaar genuinely wants to give Ragini a chance to repent for her sins and redeem. After all, who better than him, to know the value of a chance to rediscover the values one used to have? And in the meantime, he and Swara had also completely resolved all their misunderstanding, they were completely in love with each other, and all the wounds to their trust and belief had been healed by their soul connect.

s swasan only are capable to heal eachother...n as u said he knows very well the importance of second chances...very heart warming to see swasan in love completely

I really enjoyed writing that Sanskaar and Swara scene with Ragini, where they ask her what her decision is regarding her accepting the full truth. I am so very happy to hear you loved reading it, Suha. It assured me that it had come across the way I wanted it to. You are so right, SwaSan can hold a entire conversation with each other through their expressions and the way their eyes speak to each other. They don't really need words. 😊 And as Sanskaar says, Ragini accepting the truth, is important not just for Swara & Sanskaar, but for Ragini's own self.

@bold -s viji it came out very lively..you nailed it ya
loved those lines

I wanted to show Lakshya's thought processes here a bit, and I'm glad you liked that. I do think that he lacks emotional and intellectual maturity and depth. Even if he had not developed that infatuation for Swara, and had not broken his engagement with Ragini; I feel he would not have been able to reciprocate or accept the sheer intensity of her feelings for him. In a way, I do feel Lakshya is incapable of feeling or handling such a powerful emotion. He prefers to always be light hearted and fun loving, and I do feel very deep emotions scare him off!


completely agree with you.


He did try his best to spin a web to trap Sanskaar! Attack Ragini while in disguise and put the blame on Sanskaar...but neither Ragini nor Swara believe him. Swara anyway would never believe anything against her hubby! 😳

👍🏼👍🏼

So in the end, SwaSan come together for their joyous, blissful life together, and Ragini too, finds her peace. Sometime later, I would like to think that she also finds love with some other person.

And who knows, Lakshya himself, once he sorts out his issues, may meet a girl suited for his temperament. He needs to repent and redeem first of course, but there is always hope for the future. 😊

exactly viji

Thanks so much once again, Suha darling. It was such a pleasure and privilege, having your feedback throughout this musical journey

totally my pleasure...completely enjoyed😃😛
love you too dearie

Love,

----Viji

Edited by Monica_Suhasini - 9 years ago

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