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superb one...
Finally things are being settled...
Loved much awaited sanskaar dp convo...swasan convo...and sanskaars mom dad concern...it was the best part for me...

wow somehting happy in both their lifes

Heyyy...this was such an awww-inspiring chapter...all is well in the maheshwari house what with a preggy n happy ragini...swasan staying back and sujata accepting her dil finally...sanskaar trying to bridge gaps with bade papa...life couldn't be better!!!

Beautiful update.
I really enjoyed this calmness after the storm.I love these Swasan moments.
I loved DPs and Sanskaar's conversation.Although they have similarities, even I think Sanskaar is the better man.
Im glad the remaining two brothers resolved their differences.
Above all, Its heart warming to know how RP and Sujatha used to give blank calls to their beloved son for the past five years.
Looking forward for the finale:)

Sapna..
🤗
Aww sanskar saved swara!
Nice Update dear.
Laksh did a great job by helping out to sort matters between sanskar and Durgaprasad, loved laksh here.
Loved Sanskar too.
loved everything dear.
update soon.
Nice update dude.
TC 🤗

Such a wonderful update

Sanskaar saved Swara👏 wow..!!

Loved the way things have progressed in the Maheshwari house😃

Lakshya wants his brother back..😳 aww so sweet of him and Ragya goig to be parents soon..nice😃

Swara and Sanskaar conversation in the hospital was nice too😳😳

DP-Sanskaar relation too is getting better..Loved the way DP sees himself in Sanskaar..

The ending scene was perfect..Swasan kiss☺️

Awesome update Sapna..Now waiting for the final chapter..😊 Hope you write more stories after this one..😃

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

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I loved this chapter, Sapna. A lot of ground covered, and you've done full justice to the various bits.

The Swara--Sanskaar scene at the hospital, where he told her he knew exactly how worried and bereft she felt at the thought of losing him---since that was what flashed through his mind, when Adarsh was trying to shoot her---man, that was awesome. 😳 It was a very poignant moment, when he said he was finally free of the ghosts of his past, and could freely move forward with Swara.

The Durga Prasad--Sanskaar interaction, a cautious, probing rapprochement was very deftly handled. It felt so realistic: having fought no holds barred for so long, its not possible to go back to how things were, just because one realizes many of one's assumptions were mistaken. You've made your Sanskaar sound so very sensible, mature and grounded. I think I've told you this before: The Sanskaar on the show is awesome (VK absolutely nails the role), but I dare say, he would love to play your Sanskaar, a tad bit more than the one he's playing now. Both are amazingly good, but yours has a little more more pizzazz and dry wit, as well as a tad bit more maturity. 😊

So finally the "mini villains"" Lakshya and Ragini (n the sense that they were more deluded and deceived than the outright movers of the plot), redeem themselves a bit. With a baby on the way, they better clean up their act! Parenting is a huge responsibility, as any parent of a 5 year old (self included) would tell them! 😆

Loved the way Swara persuades Sanskaar to stay on at home, and he gives in since that is what she really wants. I just love their cute moments you portray, and even more, the conversations they have. Very "real couple" like. It was wonderful, the way you made her say that Sanskaar is different from his bade papa, that he would never let strategy and tactics intrude on his important personal relationships. That he would give up all his wealth and power for the person he loves.

I also found the little nugget of Ram and Sujata both keeping tabs on Sanskaar through anonymous blank calls, during the period of his estrangement from the family, very moving indeed. Parental love is so deep, so basic to the very fabric of the human self. It was touching how these two had not wanted to tell even each other what they were doing, but had wanted to have that contact, that reassurance about their son.

Kudos for this chapter, am eagerly looking forward to the next one, though I do feel a bit sad its going to be the last. But I'm sure you'll be back soon with another Fic for us, in hopefully the very near future.

Originally posted by: simsen23

sapna...nice one...all happy happy...waitng fr a awesome ending.update soon dear

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hey Sapna...

If there is something, that could be valued more than the storm itself, it would be the silent sunny day afterwards, how every drop of harsh rain falls back to the sea and how every whip of wind tails back to the soft breeze, it is enjoyable to read how everything falls back to place, the puzzle refitting in to the perfect colorful family picture.

After the action packed initial chapters, these subtle ones that follow till the epilogue are mesmerizing and I adore them.

Wonderful update, thoroughly enjoyed the conversation between Durga Prasad and Sanskar, the two battling kings...at the table of peace.

Touched by the concern of Lakshya and happy at the seemingly smooth life he now shares with Ragini.

Ram and Sujata's bond with Swara, finally the sweet moments of SwaSan. Nice eve of ending.

I'm looking forward to the end now, a little bit sad, that it is coming to an end, but awed at the perfect way it has.

Continue soon!