Phoenix SwaSan SS Finale pg40 - Page 18

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

superb update

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Read chapters 3 and 4 together. Absolutely thrilling...its getting more interesting by the moment. You talent for mystery is amazing . Awaiting the next chapter.

Originally posted by: Cintila

OMG!! Okay...i just read all the 4 chapters...and this story is MINDBLOWING!! THE characters, the atmosphere everything that you've created is fantastic. 👏👏 Superb. I absolutely loved it. I read 3 chapters last night and I seriously can't stop thinking about your story. It's soo damn addictive. And this update...! OMG what a cliffhanger.!! Please please please update soon...i might go crazy if you take long😆

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Viji🤗

I missed you on the third chapter. SO nice to see you keeping up!

Yes, this is supposed to be a thriller so I have added a little spooky touch. Annapurna is a darker shade of gray here and she knows very well when and how one has to be used.

Pardon me on correcting you, there has only been two attempts. The prasad and the intruder, the glass was broken by Sanskar right?

Ragini considers these two different bonds. See it like this, the Sanskar she knew as a child was vibrant and fun loving not much unlike her own self then. The Sanskar trapped in his own personal hell is a different person and the Ragini communicating with him is changed too. Hence I wrote the two scenes that way.

I can't explain you about the phoenix right now, sorry😊

I'll update soon...perhaps tonight😃

Originally posted by: harshsriti

saku.. why sankar hide himself un the MM? I want to know about his back story. . thank you for clarifying my doubt on lakshji..he is the same here.. sanskar and ragini childhood friends. . hmmm.. you made annapoorna as grey here.. good.. actually I don't like her in the show.. here at least she is not a stupid. you know what I'm missing poison part here..I think swasan flashbacks will be poison of this story. . so please bring their flashbacks soon.. waiting for it..

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

^^ Oh? So the shower of glass which falls on Swara when she enters the Maheshwari house in part 3---I presumed it was Ragini watching her from the partially obscured window on the top floor. Why would Sanskaar want to break the glass and push it down? Was it an accident in that case? I thought it was Ragini's first attempt on Swara's life.

Originally posted by: abika

Nice update

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Okay so AP is pushing ragini to murder. Vile lady.

and now ragini is helping her despite the fact that she knows this is wrong. She is in love with Laksh of course...and hence has every motive to harm swara.

Its great that swara spat the prasad...owing to the warning issued by sanskaar. Now she is gonna try and find him.

Of course ragini would have known sanky since childhood...after all she has known the maheshwaris from long ago. So she knows the entire story of lost love. Why was he finding it difficult to breathe though? Asthma? Ragini seems to know about that too.Loved the bond there--which however is starting to weaken, when there was a streak of jealousy when she said, i am ur frien, she is no one. and he said my friend would never help that monster.

Was that Laksh in swara's room?

Still dunno who swara's phoenix is.

continue soon saku.

Originally posted by: dimaag

Amazing update sakura! Can't wait for the next to come... Please update soon. I'm so very excited to read the conversation between both of them( swasan) that I hardly have any words to compliment u for this update of urs.
Thanks for the pm. 👏 👏